Hogwarts: Don't Call Me the Staffmaker

Wait for half a year and see. I just hope there won't be a single heroine or original heroine for Hermione.

I hope the author will not listen to those random opinions. What about an original heroine, what about raising dragons... The requirements for just a few monthly passes are quite high, and it really means you can have this and that. Some people just have loud voices, which does not represent the majority. Just write it according to the outline, and add those messy things that seem to cater to some people, but actually feel bad.

I thought it was another Griffin Nanny King, but it turned out to be the Forgotten King of Hogwarts, who can forget everything 🥵

In the fourth grade, I participated in the Goblet of Fire just to advertise Then nothing happened in the Goblet of Fire, and I wrote about loneliness...

After reading Chapter 51, I feel more and more boring. This magic wand is originally the highlight of this book. The result is a magic wand (characteristic). Can't there be wands with strange shapes and interesting properties like sword wands, pistol wands, ring wands, daggers, and finger tigers? The more I watch, the more boring I become.

I don't understand why the protagonist wants to be a Riddler out of hiding. It seemed like I was holding a lot of secrets, but in the end I didn't hold anything back...

I hope this one will have an interesting original heroine like the last one

Can you finish 100 chapters first so I can have a taste 😁

Damn, I had some creativity at the beginning, but the creativity was not written out at all. Since you are making a magic wand, do something creative. The male protagonist will be cursed with some percentage increase or something for the rest of his life. Later, it will become purely a running account that can be written by AI. Fighting is all about calling people and mechanisms. The characteristic is to use multiple wands, but all other wands combined do not have as many appearances as the unicorn wand. All my money was wasted. 😭😭😭

The protagonist with the least presence among all the HP time-travelers. He is about to enter the fifth grade, but he has no other abilities except a unicorn wand. However, he still likes to commit suicide. Even if he commits suicide, he still commits suicide in obscurity. The only top three competition that stole the show was the championship, which was all won by the help of others. Compared with the previous one, it's quite inferior.

I picked it up on the road today and it felt right at the time, so I would like to share it.

Before and after it is put on the shelves, it feels like there are two completely different directions. Testing new wands before they are put on the shelves is the main line. After they are put on the shelves, you can hardly see the plot of making new wands. It has been following the plot, so it has no special features.

I hope to have a heroine like the previous one, or just don't let the protagonist be alone. Emotional drama is the spice of the plot. If you work hard for some goal every day, the protagonist will be like a robot The heroine's presence doesn't need to be high. It's good to have at least such a person. Most people hate it. The heroine is the kind of person who is always waiting for the protagonist to save or fight in the nest (that is, the pressure monster in the team) The previous one was very good, not obtrusive and not stealing the show, although the sense of presence is too low It doesn't matter if it is original or not, just don't be Hermione, there are too many stories about the heroine Hermione

The first two hundred chapters are a bit creative, but the rest are full of running accounts, so the first two hundred chapters are just like a stick maker's intention to waste such good ideas.

I don't have my own circle, I don't understand the main character circle of the original work, I don't have my own plot, and I am very rigid in participating in the original plot. I saw the plot of Sirius in QQ reading, and this is the feeling. It is far different from the previous book. The previous one can be said to be one of the best HPs, but this one is a bit poisonous. This book has nothing to attract people to read. The previous book had a clear emotional line and the writing was very sweet, but this one does not. The previous book had a clear main line of raising magical animals, which made readers look forward to the use of these animals. This book makes magic wands. It was okay for the first two years, but I didn't see what effect you had with the special wand you made. The previous book had its own small group and they were all sincere friends. This one and the main character group feel more like exploitation. I really feel that the main character is a despicable Slytherin at heart. And this book is really too witty. This is the stupidest Hermione I have ever seen. The previous book was so good, but it's really hard to write this one like this. Let's learn from the big ship next door. There are 4 hp fics, each written better than the last. It really shouldn't be the case that your first book is so good and your second one is so disappointing.

I read the comments and they are all talking about the original heroine. Is it original? If so, it will be removed. It is okay to have no heroine, but the fandom cannot accept the original heroine.

Original characters, especially original heroines with a lot of scenes, would be a bit harmful to the fanfic, right? The essence is still a second design. Too high a sense of presence will affect the immersion of reading. There are two high-quality hp fanfics for this reason. I personally read them several times without finishing them... But everyone in the comment area seems to be very receptive. I am curious what you think 🤔

I don't know what the protagonist wants to do, and there is no main plot, so I keep looking for materials to make a wand, and then find materials to make a wand after finishing it. He has no ability and makes trouble everywhere.

It was awkward, and the climax passed by in a perfunctory way... Voldemort failed to get the Philosopher's Stone, leaving only his soul to escape. The revenge promised by the protagonist with a wand made of a whole unicorn seemed to be completed in three seconds. Lost a piece of magic, nothing can be gained. Although there should be a climax and a manifestation in front of others, the actual combat capabilities of the wand made by the protagonist are not mentioned. It is just a simple introduction of attributes, which is gone. It is actually quite reasonable to use any time traveler in reality, but this is a novel, and there must be a highlight moment for the protagonist. With Voldemort's failure and retreat in the first year, it can be said that the first part of the novel is over, and then it just ends plainly. Well, this is the most common analogy. When you book a room with a beautiful woman, you have to prepare everything after taking a shower. The beautiful woman tells you that your aunt is here. To be honest, very disappointed.

It hasn't looked good since the second grade. Why do you always like to do some tasks in this year that force you to reduce your intelligence and increase your abilities?

The second half makes me want to laugh. Voldemort is so weak that he orders the Death Eaters to attack Diagon Alley, use portkeys to cut off beards, forty or fifty wizards attack the Ministry of Magic, etc... But this itself is a description of the original work. No wonder fans are constantly innovating now.

All I can say is that there is a huge difference from the previous one. The previous one was a wonder within a book that I kept returning to. This one is just a crappy book that made me feel constipated halfway through.

But the problem is that the expressiveness of some golden fingers is very poor and is not reflected in the protagonist, and there is not much change for the protagonist. In addition, the plot is too step-by-step with no ups and downs, and there are too many daily routines. Before the troll entered the castle, the protagonist pushed and fed the troll to Lu Wei. That was quite good. It's good to be able to create derivative plots and create plots, but now this book feels really boring. Originally, the second creation was about imagination, otherwise it would be to create derivative plots. Without these, no one would read the fanfiction, but the author is also experienced, and he can still be counted as fodder even if his writing is not very basic.

I just want to say that if the protagonist obediently becomes a war master Don't attract Voldemort from the beginning, then you can do whatever you want, but the protagonist is not. Silly Bolaji is the one who stands out, and does not try to improve his own strength. He knows the plot and has nothing to do, so he just leaves it there to rot. I don't understand the author's intention. Otherwise, don't interfere at the beginning. Even if others beat the world to pieces, it's none of your business. After all, you are pure blood, and you can't intervene without seeing your efforts. You also know that this little life depends on others to save it. In the end, Now even Dumbledore, the biggest backer, has been cursed. I think Voldemort has no way to save the protagonist except to die with Dumbledore. Otherwise, I think the protagonist will probably follow 88 once the principal dies, because Voldemort will definitely kill the protagonist as soon as possible. After looking at the catalog... It seems that not much has changed. The protagonist has no ability to protect himself in front of Voldemort. I am really convinced. This is the first time I have seen such a messed up pig's feet. I won't order this book.

In the fifth year, I started to feel that I no longer had the whimsical idea of ​​making a wand that I had in the early stage, and it just became a water story following the main plot.

Even ordinary articles dressed in Harry Potter's skin do not reflect the mystery of magic, and are very boring to read.

RT

The settings of the magic wand and golden finger in this book are very interesting, but the characters and plot are really inappropriate. If it weren't for the writing, it would be really hard to read 😭. The protagonist is a time traveler who is obsessed with wands and well versed in the plot. Ordinarily, it should be portrayed as a more mature and thoughtful image, but the author is portraying a child's mentality and a playful attitude towards the wand. It's true that hp is a children's book, but we readers are adults, and your protagonist is a time traveler, not a real child. Every time I read a plot, I have the urge to abandon it because the character's behavior is so unpalatable. In addition, the plot, although writing a daily novel should not require too much, is also very watery. Moreover, you can follow the original work in terms of event nodes, but if your protagonist's nodes are also plot points in the original work, it lacks innovation and extension. It's as if you haven't thought about the deduction in the original work, and it is very passive. It is worth praising that the author's writing style is very stable, which is very different from the HP translation, but there are too many random thoughts. The writing style is really good👍

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