Hogwarts: Are These Fantastic Beasts Even Legal?

After reading Chapter 6, I would like to make three suggestions: First of all, I suggest you delete the Tsundere system in the introduction. At present, the system does not have much emotional expression. The system itself is too intelligent, even if it is a lightning point, you also specially marked it. Of course, in fact, there are no obvious problems. So it's best to delete it Secondly, Hermione should have received the admission notice earlier than Harry, because Harry was the latest batch. Secondly, Professor McGonagall should not come to visit her home until she received the reply. Thirdly, in the first part, it was the Dursleys who sent Harry to the train station.

The character's personality is close to the original work, and there are no major changes The protagonist's plug-ins are not obtrusive and slightly interesting The school time is the same as the original work, and there is no threshold

Why did I drop a collection. If you see any poisonous spots, please tell me. (╥╯╰╥)ง

I found three problems with the first picture. The author is either a virgin or has never been in love. If he can't write emotional scenes, don't write them.

Can you give me some advice? Don't be cold-blooded. I felt pretty good when I wrote it, but I don't know if you feel comfortable reading it. (⋟⋞)

After reading this introduction, I have no desire to click on it. It's too discouraging.

I have actually thanked each of you in my heart for your recommendation votes and monthly votes. ╰(*´`*)╯

Ah, it's a new HP fan, let me taste it

I have read high-quality hp fanfics on many websites, and this one seems to have a novel idea (I haven't seen the same idea written to completion), no obvious poisonous points, the writing style is relatively new (newcomer?), And lacks in-depth understanding of the original setting (the original work also has various pitfalls and regrets. It is also a test of ability to write a good hp fanfic, but don't compete with the left and right brains like the original author). The most attractive thing is always the story plot! It's best if you can stick to it and finish it at about 2 million words!

Orz, orz, orz

It's a novel where everyone is a good person. It looks very comfortable. I don't care about the system problems. I can understand it as the protagonist's own talent.

There are more than 70 chapters, and the only magical animal that appears is Bobo. The title does not match the content.

I saw the sky was falling in the middle of the night, why did I lose two collections (╥╯╰╥)ง