Hogwarts: Are These Fantastic Beasts Even Legal?

Having read up to Chapter Six, I have three suggestions. First, I suggest removing the "tsundere system" part from the description. Currently, the system doesn't seem to express many emotions. An overly intelligent system is already a flaw, and you've specifically highlighted it. Of course, there aren't any obvious problems, so it's best to remove it.

I noticed three problems with the first page: either the author is a virgin, has never been in a relationship, or if they can't write romance, they shouldn't write it.

The characters' personalities remain close to those in the original work, with no major changes. The protagonist's cheat ability isn't jarring; it's rather amusing. School hours are the same as in the original work, with no entry requirements.

Whenever you change the heroine, I will vote twice.

Having read many high-quality HP fanfictions on various websites, this one stands out for its novel concept (I haven't seen any other fanfiction with the same idea that has reached completion), no obvious flaws, and somewhat amateurish writing style (perhaps a newbie?).

This description alone makes me lose all desire to click and read it; it's too discouraging.

I accidentally dropped one of my favorites. Please let me know if you see any problematic content, okay? (╥╯╰╥)ง

There shouldn't be too many Pokémon, but you can write more about the animals from Harry Potter. Cuter ones might attract more readers. Keep it up, author! Just like the mischievous little Dementors, bringing happiness to everyone would be great. What I'm writing now reminds me a bit of the TV series Ghost Whisperer, haha.

Can I offer some feedback... Please don't give me the silent treatment. I felt great while writing it, but I don't know if you guys will enjoy reading it. (⋟⋞)

I've already thanked everyone in my heart for each and every one of your votes and monthly passes. ╰(*´`*)╯