A Certain Hogwarts Legend of Forbidden Arts

Those who support the heroine being Hermione are here to report.

Reading a fanfic and all I can think about is whether or not there is a female protagonist, and posting a post trying to teach the author how to write a book is quite boring.

If there is a female protagonist, I hope to develop feelings and confirm the relationship early. . Don't be like the one who only had a female protagonist at the end of the original novel.

Don't write emotional lines! ! No heroine! ! 😅

The last book used the lack of a heroine as a gimmick, but the ending suddenly ended with Hermione being together, which disgusted a lot of people. Whether there is a heroine or not, make it clear at the beginning and don't change your mind midway

As always, the common problem of HP is that the Virgin is still a nanny, and the protagonist group is a follower. HP fan fiction does not nanny for the protagonist group and does not lick Hermione. I guess the author will explode on the spot. How about changing the name? It's called "The Days I Worked as a Dog Nanny in HP"

Character: The protagonist's character is very strange... Completely unlikable Story: Maybe it's the elegance and calmness of Professor Magic that makes this book a little uncomfortable to read from scratch? The overall narrative rhythm is also a bit strange, and there is no sense of substitution. I once read what an editor said, which may be helpful to the author. "Don't use the narrative state at the end of the previous book to write the beginning of the new book." I hope the author can make more efforts in the later period, and I can also revise the previous ones when I have time... It's a bit incomprehensible.

You wrote Professor Magic. It's understandable that you want to make a different breakthrough, but can you read the first twenty chapters of this book by yourself? It's better to write another book without changing the medicine. How many writers failed at this step before becoming gods? Look at the eagle catching the chicken, and the blood-red people. You can become a god along the way. No matter how you show off your skills, you can travel hundreds of roads to play. You have all turned to writing online. Change your shell and refine your writing. You have a seat as a great god. There are several writers on the monthly list who show off their skills. There are no great gods in fan fiction. You are the only one who has hope. Don't waste your talent. Ahhhh~

The three-year agreement has come and the Dragon King has returned to his throne!

I feel like the writing style of this book is much different from the previous one. Is this still the same author? Or is it that it's been too long since I've written?