The Immortal Abode in the Jade Pendant

There are some questions to ask in the first chapter: If you die fighting for your sect, your descendants with average qualifications will be moved out of the sect and basically cut off from the path of monks. Then who dares to fight and die for the sect? Especially the descendants of monks with average qualifications? Does the sect still have cohesion?

It's the beginning of Wulinggen Wastes again. The few Wulinggen Wastes Xianfu Liu that I have recently opened don't seem to have more than 200,000 words. Let's bet on whether this one will exceed 200,000 words.

I suggest you change merit into destiny, start with a low-level destiny, and then upgrade. Merit is hard to explain. Does helping relatives, friends, and sects count as merit? If there is a loophole in the calculation, just go to the secular city and open a porridge shop, and give alms to beggars and homeless people every day. The merits will be immeasurable.

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 50. Mainly because the map is a bit unreal. How big is the Five Elements Sect's mountain gate? How big is Five Elements City? How big is the territory under the rule? How many people are going to the Southern Monster Forest to support? How many kilometers did the flying boat fly in 3 months? How big is Monster Killing City? How many people? The protagonist is in the Golden Crow Castle around Chapter 50. How big is the Golden Crow Castle? How many monks are there? These basic common sense are not written down, I don't know them all. The author doesn't know what he thinks. The protagonist only knows how to make alchemy. When he comes to the dangerous border area, he doesn't know how to prepare. (Just an inner armor borrowed by an elder) He has no other magic weapons. I only bought a few talismans. Keep it for good looks?

To be honest, don't mind the author, you are really not suitable for writing a book. I do have perseverance, but I don't have any talent. After writing so many words, I haven't seen any progress. The plot is understandable, but the writing is really difficult to describe in one sentence, and it is too laborious to read. Even a primary school student should have made some progress after writing so many words.

I passed by without paying attention to the previous minor points. Until the auction, I took a photo of the five elements during the Qi training period that had failed many times. Someone bid. The bid was too high. After the protagonist gave up, the host of the auction came to the protagonist and said that the person who won the photo did not want it. The protagonist had previously bid 2,600, so he gave it to 2,500, which was a little cheaper. A normal person should have reacted when he saw this.

I can't understand it at all. Well, my parents died in the pioneering war, and my descendants have such a start.

Chapter One: The Five Spiritual Roots has lost at least half of its readers. It's not that the Five Spiritual Roots are not good, it's just that they are really tired of aesthetics. . . Eight out of ten books have five spiritual roots!

Prices are simply outrageous, Lingshi is not as good as Happy Bean!

It is written that one cannot reach the foundation level after living in the cave for 50 years. Taking back and relocating a house shows the benevolence of the sect. There is no shortage of caves. They would rather leave them vacant for 50 years and move the people out early. No one is willing to risk their lives to survive.