The Lord of Sinnoh

Facts have proved that the limited and exempt works are all works that are neither good nor bad. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: a Pokémon book is written by an author who is as talented as a traditional fantasy novel, but it is weak in the lack of scene creation. The words are just words, not scenes; and then a Pokémon book. Pokémon is only a supporting role. This is the second failure. However, the character creation is slightly weak, and it may be even more difficult to create Pokémon. The rest are not just flaws, so it doesn't matter. Let's talk about the advantages: The advantages are that there are no obvious problems with the writing, there are no flaws in the logic, the character creation is not outstanding but it is not dull, the story is simple and clear but not a piece of writing, it is interesting to read, and the world view is supplemented by Pokémon. To sum up, it is a good business article. It is not suitable for reading as a Pokémon fan (the author did not understand the point of Pokémon fandom), but it is still good for casual reading. It is especially suitable for people who know a little bit about Pokémon but are not fans. For Pokémon fans, this book is a bit unsatisfactory.

Alas, after reading the recent chapters, I thought the author would finally enhance the protagonist's presence. In the end, she won the battle and was not the captain but used her identity as a wet nurse. So this is a different kind of pretense? ? Doesn't the protagonist want to become the Lord of Sinnoh? Then you need to show your leadership in the early stage. For a cross-continental team competition, the captain's qualifications are very important. Oh, by the way, the protagonist seems to want to be a wet nurse and take command in place of the captain, so he doesn't look down on the current captain. As for being afraid of being targeted and not being able to command comprehensively, these are all excuses. Looking at it now, I understand that the author wanted to highlight the characters of the original animation, but the biggest shortcoming is the protagonist. The protagonist's character is sometimes domineering, sometimes overthinking, and sometimes weak, and cannot be fixed at all. Moreover, the protagonist lacks a kind of faith and courage. It gives people the impression that he just takes things as they come. He has a sense of presence, but cannot leave an impression. In one sentence, the character development of the protagonist is too vague and uncertain. The setting of the book is very good, the characters are good (except for the protagonist), and the plot description is also very good. The biggest problem is the protagonist.

Let's talk about the protagonist setting I believe many readers have the same feeling as me. The protagonist's character and personal talents make people feel a little stuck. I will analyze my views on the protagonist, for reference only. First of all, let's start with the setting of the protagonist. The protagonist is a legitimate son who has not inherited the family's talent (the counterattack style of a loser protagonist?). He has a system that can only view elf information and wants to change the fate of the family. However, it seems that he has been hiding his strength due to a grudge against his father (playing pig to eat the tiger style?). Later, he became famous after a battle with Lanzhu, and began to gain the attention of the family and more resources. I have to raise doubts here. As a time traveler, it is strange that Xianyu has not had any other plans for so many years. Shouldn't the family plan their own way out if they don't pay attention to it? It is unreasonable to remain unknown for such a long time, and the relationship between the protagonist and his sister later shows that his sister has a certain degree of trust in his abilities, and also dotes on him, so it is not a problem to get some resources to invest in his younger brother's business. For a thoughtful time traveler, it is impossible to keep doing it for such a long time. Even if it is not possible, you can find a martial arts school to pass on these martial arts and become stronger. This is not difficult for the family. Then Tu Long was woken up by Lan Zhu's scolding, and he started to play a high-profile transformation to assume the identity of the rich second generation (no more pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger). When I saw this, I started to look forward to the protagonist, thinking that the character development of the protagonist would officially start from here, but after pretending to be cool, I started to be timid again. On the contrary, Lanzhu has always been very eye-catching, not in terms of strength, but in terms of personality charm. In this aspect, the protagonist is completely blown away. It feels like the author wants to portray the protagonist as a rational and qualified leader, but the charisma has never been reflected. It is okay that the supporting role is not eye-catching, but portraying a heroine full of positive energy makes the protagonist more like a supporting role, just like the protagonist in some TV series is given enough roles, but no one likes that. I believe some readers feel uncomfortable here, and I have also seen it in the comment section. The supporting characters are unique, soulful and outstanding, which is a must for a successful novel, but a protagonist with no characteristics makes people feel boring. After all, readers read books and put themselves into the protagonist. It is even worse when they are cowardly in front of the heroine. The experience of role-playing as the protagonist is too bad. Next, let's talk about the most exciting part of this book so far. The protagonist makes a wish for Jirachi. This part is what I think is the most outstanding part. Is there a protagonist with this sexy operation and full of visual sense? Has it suddenly become a hot-blooded anime? However, in order to create the image of the protagonist as a rational and qualified leader, the author later emphasized the benefits of choosing this wish too deliberately. If it is discovered through the vision of the supporting character that the protagonist's wish is actually a coquettish operation, it will appear that the protagonist is inscrutable. But if the protagonist repeatedly emphasizes the benefits of this choice, it will feel like a scheming bitch, which is not pleasing. To use an analogy, after the Jirachi incident, the protagonist explains various things to persuade his sister to invest. If the sister praises the protagonist for doing a good job, analyzes the benefits that the protagonist can bring and discusses how to use Jirachi, and then the protagonist rationally tells the sister how to grasp this degree, forming a virtuous circle and not killing the goose that lays the egg, would it be better? Is it easier for others to visually interpret your rationality than to explain your actions rationally? Finally, some readers have strong objections to the behavior of making captains. I think it is okay. After all, the protagonist is not yet a king based on his strength at that time. It is unrealistic to become a captain just because he beats one at a higher level. It is good to retreat in order to advance. It is good to sell favors to the new captain. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist's personal abilities. There is a system that can only look at the data, which is actually a very big problem for civilian trainers. However, there are too many talented people with backgrounds, and it is not difficult for them to find some highly qualified elves. Therefore, the greater role of this system is to predict the opponent's tactics by looking at the moves of the enemy elves during the battle. In terms of training elves, everyone is at the same starting line. In this story of geniuses running around, there are so many geniuses with backgrounds who can make money, and many of them can make money better than the protagonist. However, the protagonist's personal talent seems too weak, let alone half-assed superpowers. Zhulan's dragon power is so powerful, so she must be able to pass it. There are Natsu, Kona, Daigo, etc., And even Kojiro, who is much more powerful than the protagonist, has a martial arts skill. The protagonists standing together are really unbearable to watch. Moreover, in the author's setting, various super powers are very helpful to the elves in battle, but the protagonist is really holding them back. To summarize, there are two main problems: 1. There are no attractive highlights of the protagonist's character. The author has not successfully shaped his image, but he has created several supporting characters with full personalities and hooks. There is no contrast and no harm. 2. The protagonist's personal talent is not good enough. Although other people's loser protagonists have problems with their qualifications at the beginning, they all have an invincible hook. The protagonist's weak chickens are all left in the setting. The plot starts with various changes of destiny. However, although our protagonist has his own system, it is of no use, and his super power is of no use. He only has a gold-rich super power, but the people around him are basically better than him, and he has no sense of existence. Finally, I have a question. The protagonist has traveled for so long and has really done nothing before the plot begins. He only has a flowery stem? Normally speaking, even if a time traveler hasn't inherited the superpowers of his family owner after traveling for more than ten years, he shouldn't just wait to die for ten years, right? It's very inappropriate not to plan ahead! Is there a foreshadowing here between Hua Yedi and Xie Mi? Is it related to the layout made by the protagonist in the previous ten years? According to the author's initial portrayal of the protagonist as a rational and calculated person who plays pig and eats tiger, it would be reasonable to think that he has done some secret things in the past ten years, quietly created some achievements, or kept some trump cards hidden from others.

Come on, the author, the description of the battle is very good.

3 Pictures a day please improve 😁

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Opinions, not nonsense This book is one of the best fairy herbs among elves currently! Not to mention the fluent writing style, I also put a lot of effort into the setting. What I look forward to most every day is the two updates of this book! Let me talk about the things that I personally cannot accept about this book... The author wants to write about Sirona's personality charm, which I think is great! It's no problem when it's based on supporting characters. But it is a bit hard to accept that it has always been based on the protagonist... 1. The first turning point, the protagonist originally planned to hold on to development and be an old cunt, but Sirona made a domineering declaration, and the whole thing changed completely, and he decided to use family power... Etc. Okay, just think that the author wants to change the protagonist's mentality and let the protagonist grow up. The original plan of the protagonist in the front is bitten, and the subsequent plot is also smooth (the small flaw here is that the turning point is too fast) 2. There are a little bit of excitement, and it is often overshadowed. The popularity plan of the protagonist's academy is blocked, and the reputation of the battle tower is sluggish. Same 3 0 wins Sirona's popularity report… (I also like writing about Sirona's style, but don't always use the protagonist as a foil...) 3. The Jirachi Incident Bet on Life - The protagonist originally planned to run away, but decided to risk his life after being escaped by Sirona's handsome mouth. First of all, I think Sirona's willingness to participate in the war is very charming! But it's hard for the protagonist to accept being cheated... If the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, it makes sense to want to fight. Even if you really have to risk your life, why should you escape from Sirona's mouth? Naruto can escape Pain with his mouth, and Obito with his mouth, so Naruto is the protagonist! ! Isn't it a bit wrong to get the protagonist? To bring out the brilliance of Sirona, just let the supporting characters do this kind of thing... 4. Yaxuan said that the protagonist beat Sirona several times, but not as good as her! (Aggrieved) Wow, Sirona has been enjoying family resources and temple resources since she was a child. Where is the protagonist? Scorned by the family, the resource gap is so huge, raising Huatiye* to beat Sirona, damn it, is not as good as her! In addition, it has been emphasized that the protagonist's talents are rubbish, he has no family abilities, and his superpower talents are rubbish, which are also small pitfalls... The protagonist of the loser style will not always emphasize his low talent. Even if he has it, he can make up for it with a golden finger. However, the protagonist of this book does not have any, so he will always emphasize that his talent is rubbish! The protagonist takes a Gyarados that may be at full value. Although it is difficult to cultivate, it is always a good thing, but Sirona just takes the Ugly Fish at full value. There is no harm without comparison... 5. It feels weird. For example, the last time the protagonist defeated Sirona, she still used an instant kill, but it was not fun at all. The author directly castrated this plot... There was no surprise at all. The protagonist is obviously the first person of the younger generation, but his reputation is that he is the second best in ten thousand years! Even if you don't use instant kills, it's better to write about something exciting than this Generally speaking, there are some exciting things in the book, but it's just very frustrating. Sirona is the sun, and the protagonist is like the moon, or even the little stars, used to set her off. I admit that Sirona is really shining, and I like this character very much. She is my favorite female character among elf, but don't always use the protagonist to set off her personality charm! Even if the protagonist's mentality is to change, it can be a subtle change in the inner drama, and it does not need to change after being cheated... In a word, it feels like the protagonist is no longer the protagonist! ! ! ! ! ! ! Every time I read the book, I always feel frustrated... Maybe the author didn't want this book to be a mindless book, but so far I feel a little uncomfortable... Just like most people don't like Little Dragon Girl being ridden by Zhen, but they won't say that The Legend of the Condor Heroes is shit...

I've just read two chapters and I'm so addicted. I'm sorry that I can't accept the author's writing style and setting, so I'll take my leave.

I voted for another monthly ticket. Are there any updates for the first five monthly tickets this month? I submitted two this month.

There is a feeling that the protagonist is extremely holy. No matter what others want to do to him, he will not kill him. If he is robbed, he will just let him go. He always feels like a coward.