The Mao Jin Dao of the Jin Dynasty's Final Years

There is no need to read it, The Eunuch must be unfinished, several books have been like this. Funny mentality, he gave up before we gave up. If you really want to read it, read it after finishing it, otherwise you will be furious. Brothers, lift me up.

After looking at a few pictures of the protagonist's understanding of values ​​and thoughts, I have a feeling. You are showing off your wealth to beggars. A modern man is reborn into your ancient mind. Your vision and mind are too narrow. The protagonist does not understand the mentality of people in ancient times at all. In ancient times, most ordinary ethnic groups had no national plots and could only survive as long as they lived. It doesn't matter who rules, what matters is whether there is food to eat.

The author's idea is very good, and the entry point in this era is relatively new and worthy of encouragement. The problem is that there are too many common sense errors. For example, the rogue soldiers at the beginning had three meals a day and folded blankets to practice military discipline... Not to mention that at the end of the Jin Dynasty, the world was so scarce that people could eat each other, and there were countless armies that used people as food. Is the productivity of that era so outrageous? The Central Army does not receive this treatment either. It can be seen that the author really wants to write some stories about heroes, but the lack of verification of realistic materials will only make it difficult for people to take it into account, and there will be flaws everywhere at a glance. This becomes my own pleasure. I suggest you learn from July's writing. He focuses on verifying the information in detail, and can bring whatever utensils he uses for drinking, so that readers can have a sense of involvement. In addition, when Squid writes about mysteries, he also collected a large amount of information from the Victorian era to make the story more realistic. Epic fantasy that is divorced from reality can only be called self-pleasure, and readers cannot understand it. In this regard, I recommend you to read more of Mr. Tian Yuqing's articles and do some research. As the saying goes, those who seek the best will get the best. Writing historical articles is not just for fun. Personally, I think that although "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" doesn't have any underlying narrative, it does portray heroes well and its flaws are not hidden. Your problem is that the emperors, generals and ministers were eager to use the people's view of history to focus on the bottom before they were outstanding, but they knew very little about the living conditions of the bottom people at that time, and what they wrote was nondescript and incomprehensible. Looking forward to your improvements. Of course, I am just an ordinary reader. If you have any questions, please feel free to point them out.

I'm convinced, I have to have a 12-year-old protagonist. What prestige does a 12-year-old protagonist have? Isn't it more reasonable to have a 32 or 42-year-old protagonist than a 12-year-old protagonist? I don't know anyone who would take a 12-year-old doll seriously.

The leader of the first battalion also asked people to play with his hands. He is already young, doesn't it make people feel childish?

Another author who is unwilling to look up historical data is writing history. How can you write a historical article without checking historical data? Just write a self-congratulatory message

The overall feeling is like self-pleasure, 1. At the age of 12, it is not convincing, especially when you are from a civilian background, not a wealthy family 2. In the turbulent era at the end of the Western Jin Dynasty, the army was a bandit. If your army does not plunder, you still want to be on par with the Red Army in all aspects. Is it possible? The people here are either orphans, or they have interests in the land they were given, and if they don't follow to defend the land, if the government comes, the whole family will be robbers and bandits, and they will be beaten to death. Interest, threat, hatred, and faith are all there are. What did you give your soldiers? 3. Eat three meals a day and train every day. Do you know that the food consumption of no training and training is fundamentally different, and the difference is even more than double? 4. Yecheng, the capital of the Cao Wei period, has tens of thousands of defenders and countless wealthy families. No matter how useless the commander is, you can't defeat it with just a few hundred people, 400? Control tens of thousands? Who do you think you are when you ask other forces not to plunder? King Chu Ba is still alive? To sum up, it is difficult to substitute. The author is happy to say that you can learn from the long sword of the late Jin Dynasty

Free love in ancient times is nonsense. People who don't want to fit into the world but act independently will be regarded as aliens by everyone.

The protagonist keeps digging holes for himself, capturing the famous general Hua Gou Xi twice, resurrecting him with full health, and continuing to threaten him from behind, forgetting the story of the Yue King Gou Jian; allowing a generation of Jiesile to become bigger and stronger, adopting appeasement, and forgetting the fate of France in World War II! If it weren't for the aura of the protagonist, he was simply seeking death, and Liu Tai's subordinates would have lost their fighting spirit because of his ostrich policy.

I can't accept that the protagonist follows the Huns to kill the Han people. There is national defense in every era. If he was under the Huns from the beginning, there would be no way. As a result, we first rebelled and then defected to the Huns. I felt that this was such a big deal.