Now That I'm Reborn, Who Still Needs a System?

I gave it a try before limiting it to free, and I found out why this book is not popular. The protagonist's rebirth brings a purely negative buff system, which is more frustrating than a pure rebirth. Anyone who violates the system will be wiped out by the system. This poisonous point from more than ten years ago should not exist. There are other issues with writing...

The author ignores the need for basic bandwidth. The commercial bandwidth traffic of your server is very expensive. You can look at the online games in 2003. Most of them have rough modeling quality and poor hardware level, which limits the conditions for commercial implementation.

Every time I see this kind of article, I want to work in their company 🙂

The system settlement is only 100 million. If it breaks, it will be activated. This is really a big surprise. Every time the author writes about the settlement, he likes to mention the system debuff. Even if you want to write the settlement, you should not be forced to do it by the debuff. The current situation is that the protagonist does not want to use the system, feels that he can succeed on his own, and feels that the system is controlling him. However, his behavior, in order to avoid the system being activated, has been affected by the system, and it seems like he is being forced to go on the right path (this is true, and the author himself thinks so). Then this will give the reader a psychological hint, that is, you (introducing the protagonist) do not want to do this, but the existence of the system forces you to do it. This can easily give readers a mentality that they are being oppressed and disciplined all the time. Even if it is to make you do good, you are still being disciplined. This situation is that the Madonna and the plot party will become more and more unhappy as they watch, and the self-interested readers will become even more unhappy. Only the readers who bring in employees will feel happy, but this kind of pleasure is actually very small, and how many readers are there who bring in employees? When reading online novels, isn't it from the perspective of the protagonist? In addition, the comment section said that the protagonist is the Virgin. I think it is wrong. He is not the Virgin. The author has already written that if it were not for the system, he would have become a classic capitalist, but the system forced him to become the Virgin. So no matter how unhappy you are with this system, you should either make it invisible and don't write two sentences every time you settle the account. Either change it, otherwise more and more people will be unhappy with this system after writing this.

The beginning is about system erasure and various restrictions, screening readers, right? I have to say that it has been done. Looking at the comment area, there are people complaining. There are still people who read this kind of urban novels and like the protagonist to be tied up with a dog leash. What the hell is it? Is it cool to be in it? I pretended that I didn't tell you that I had this kind of habit

If you are poisoned, just ask what the function of the system is?

This setting is easy to collapse in the later stage. In the later stage, if the water exceeds 100 million a day, it will not be a problem. Then the protagonist explodes directly, or exceeds 100 million in the last few seconds. Unless the protagonist keeps consuming in the last few seconds, or freezes the company account, no company account can selectively collect payments or not.

My impression of this book cannot be said to be bad, nor can it be said to be good. If there is a shortage of books, I will give it a read during the limited time. If there is no shortage of books, I do not recommend reading it. The system at the beginning was very poisonous, whether it was asking for money or erasing, it was very poisonous, even if it was just a hint in the early stage and then directly invisible, it was very annoying. I vaguely remember that the author mentioned Liu Yifei and Yang Mi several times before, and then came Wang Xiaomei, and then He Yan, and Angela Chang. In the end, they were not the heroines. If they are not the heroines, don't add scenes in irrelevant places. Looking at the back, it should be said that looking at the middle will make people very tired. The stall is huge, fast-paced and unfocused. The author has always said that the main plot is the game, but does the author want to see for himself how much you write about the game? How many other side projects have you written? It's a variety show, it's a TV series, it's a novel, it's a comic, it's an anime, it's a music player, it's a video player, it's a mobile phone, it's also a rocket launching a satellite... Etc. The length of these side businesses is not large, but they cannot support the large number of them. If you write several chapters for a side project, how many chapters do you have left to write about the game? And the pace is fast, one after another, the more you look back, the more tired you become. I have no idea how much business the protagonist's company does and how much cash it has now. It's just whatever you write. Rhythm is also a big problem. The exciting points of the writing are not at all. This is also a common problem in this type of business writing. For example, many things can be expanded and written but not written, and the interesting points are written in a mediocre way. What about acquiring the copyrights of Three-Body Problem, Qin Shi Mingyue, etc. Just casually explain that you have people acquire the copyrights of famous literary works on a large scale. Why do you need to open a single chapter? Not to mention that the stalls are too big, the plot is very incoherent, and the reader's perception is very unfriendly.

The system settings and the protagonist's desperate efforts to reduce the money to less than 100 million make people speechless. Why is the rebirth plus system so frustrating?

The protagonist is limited by the system and is really frustrated. The further he goes, the more frustrated he becomes.