Surviving the Chaotic Martial World: Beginning in the Wilderness

For the sake of safety, I won't talk about clicking attributes when needed. Isn't it better to practice later because it took a long time to make progress because of the negative root bone? Are you still there to learn martial arts skills in order not to waste time? Speechless, if you pick that bone earlier, you really won't waste time.

There are so many messy attributes, water numbers, or lack of writing skills? You can create a little dangerous plot to express the tension of the work.

Was the setting of negative numbers really thought through? I also specially made a PS to forcefully explain... What do you mean, it is difficult to distinguish the values ​​​​that are dozens or hundreds of higher realms from others. If they are higher, they are higher, and if they are lower, they are lower. I deliberately made a hidden setting to make the values ​​​​negative to allow readers to convert by themselves. It is really difficult to distinguish, and it is uncomfortable to look at it. However, this may also filter out high-purity readers to follow. After all, if the first chapter is acceptable, no matter what happens later, it will probably be almost the same as the first chapter.

How could there be no one left in the old camp, unless I gave up? If I gave up, how could I leave a lot of supplies and equipment? The writing is good, but my IQ is too high.

Selling salted fish gives you half a pound of salt. Where did you get the salt in the mountains? Even if you have a salt mine, you still have to sift and grind it with a stone mill, then soak it, then rinse it again with plant ash, and then boil it in an iron pot. If you can get half a catty a day, I will accept it!

The concept of the book is good, but the IQ is too low. Isn't the most important thing in the early stage to increase your ability and understanding? Now that these two basic points have been focused on, isn't the experience value rising rapidly?

This panel is smelly and long, with various attributes, and one chapter is gone as soon as I open the panel.

The writing in the first chapter is terrible. If you have time, rewrite it. At least add a note about understanding (note: normal is 0, a negative number means lower than ordinary people). The rest is actually normal, but the first chapter is outrageous. Even if you don't care about the readers, you still have to be honest with yourself. You have to pay so much. You are simply suffering it first. The settings are not just drawn out in one go. Go read other people's novels with good results. Usually the first three chapters slowly explain the background setting, and then come out in one go. Why don't you just show us the outline?

After reading the first chapter, the writing is not good, it's all ~? Ask yourself this. This should be a high martial plane,... Right? (This can be completely removed. This may be a high martial plane.) Since the county has a population of millions, isn't there a mine and smelting? (Because the county has a population of millions and there are mines and smelting.) Because of this, dredging the river is a matter for the government, but the money from selling firewood and charcoal is yours? Because of this, dredging the river is a matter for the government, but the money from selling firewood and charcoal is yours? (?) Since there are so many common people serving as corvees? (?)

After reading this, you will find that you have grown a brain.