Pokémon: A Fresh Start

I think this book is really well-written. I've read a lot of Pokémon fanfiction, but this online game theme is the only one I really like. The characters are intelligent, and the battles are well-written, but the most important thing is the training of the Pokémon. Like other stories where you get a high-quality Pokémon and you're already a god without doing anything? That feels so weak.

The concept is very imaginative and the writing is quite good. However, many of the moves and abilities are made too powerful. They're practically unrelated to the games. Their strength depends entirely on the author's design. It felt novel at first, but as the differences grew, it felt like I wasn't reading Pokémon fan fiction anymore. The sense of immersion diminished.

Don't you think the premise of the first chapter is off-putting? The random spawning system is so unbalanced! How can this kind of online competitive game be so popular?

Do you guys think someone might get crazy and create a legendary Pokémon like Smeargle, just with a bunch of legendary moves? Oh, and since there's no skill cap now, a Smeargle with a full set of legendary moves... Wow, that's something else! *Cough* But alas, a legendary Smeargle isn't really that useful; its base stats are a major weakness. ┐('~`;)┌

In fact, given the author's unique characteristics and the concept of specialization in skills, specialization becomes possible. I've read many Pokémon books, and many authors like to emphasize the difficulty of obtaining skills, claiming that having more skills increases one's chances of winning, resulting in a cluttered skill panel.

I think the main team needs a healer. How about Chansey? For PvP, bring an Eviolite, but don't evolve it into Blissey; the Eviolite is useless, seriously. Chansey with an Eviolite in PvP is a real nuisance; it doubles or halves your defenses, I think. Absolutely the strongest special defensive tank, bar none, and it can even heal.

I'm wondering if the author forgot about this detail? Steel Body: When using Steel-type moves, the Pokémon's type will temporarily change to Steel. When taking any physical attack, the opponent's attack will decrease by one level (dark blue will become blue). Each time the Pokémon takes damage, the damage will be reduced by 20%.

Let's introduce a new concept: fighting style. Fighting-type Pokémon are humanoid, and their power generation techniques are similar to humans. Could they learn techniques like humans, like boxing or Shaolin Kung Fu? If we eliminate the time required to prepare moves and instead use basic attacks, like ordinary punches, could we utilize the entire body to turn moves into passive skills?

Also, why doesn't Breloom learn Toxic and Protect? I think a combination of Toxic Protector and Heal Poison could be a main force in the late game. QAQ

Personally, I think the training of Little Diamond isn't very good. Those guild members, without as much training, are just as strong as the protagonist. Even the Mushroom Kangaroo has mastered a Champion-level move, and while its base stats are a bit low, it's still incredibly weak. Why learn a Champion-level move if it's so weak?