The Road to Immortality Begins with Equipping a Worn-Out Talisman Brush

The writing is passable, the plot is mediocre, and the protagonist's character development is decent, but there's absolutely no satisfying feeling after reading it. The overpowered system is ridiculously overdone; the equipment slots only allow one item to be equipped at a time, and the effects aren't permanent.

I only saw one preview before the official release. The villain is a young mountain lord, which sounds like he has a powerful background. Then he comes out to practice a solo fight, sees a woman, and gets completely infatuated, thinking she's stunning. Has he never seen a woman before? What era are we living in that someone still writes such a brainless scene?

This is the first time I've seen someone release a tempting offer before putting the product on the shelves.

Good heavens, it's a proficiency panel + equipment slots + rule entries!!!

There are clearly ways to enhance one's spiritual root; even a Qi Refining stage cultivator could obtain a water-attribute demon core. The protagonist seems to do nothing all day. He's made so much money, yet he neglects the most important things. It's truly speechless. I couldn't continue reading after about ten chapters. He's so idiotic, yet he tries to act all organized.

This book, "Shennong's Myriad Treasures," is divided into six grades according to quality: Superior, Upper, Upper-Middle, Middle… If this book had been published three years earlier, it would have been ranked as Superior. Unfortunately, due to the proliferation of this style in recent years, and the aesthetic fatigue among fellow readers, it can only be ranked as Upper-Middle.

The opening line was all about being cautious and timid, but after only a few chapters, he's already recklessly taking risks for petty gains. It's utterly disgusting. If you're going to be cautious, just stay cautious; if you're going to be reckless, don't hide it from the start. It's a classic case of left and right brain conflict.

It's not worth reading. Almost every ten chapters is just a pretentious face-slapping scene, and the protagonist's character is trash. It doesn't follow the background or genius trope. Why is this grassroots, cheat-like protagonist constantly showing off? Anyone who plays games knows to play cautiously and develop your strength quietly without connections or power.

It feels pretty ridiculous. He sold the Water Arrow Talisman to Jubaoge for 1.2 Spirit stones, but sold it to Shen Yuan for 1 spirit stone on the market; there are also many other inconsistencies and contradictions. X

This is too toxic! The data... The plot...