Hunyuan Immortal Sect

Immortal product. A great headmaster flow, the writing is a bit sluggish but the characters are very vivid. Currently there are two major events in the development of the Hunyuan Sect: starting a business in Yuxiangdan and fighting in the town. Looking forward to continued development. The protagonist's IQ is online, and almost all the plots in it can convince me. There are very few lottery-style adventures (saving the prairie prince is like finding a needle in a haystack and winning the lottery, but the others are fine.) Most of the plots have to praise the protagonist for being brave and resourceful. The development within the gang and Yuxia's methods are very realistic. It's been a long time since I've had a book that I couldn't get enough of reading 150 chapters in one go. Actually, I think it is better than Zhangmenlu. Zhangmenlu can feel that there are some places where the writing power is not enough...

It happened that Su leaked the news about refining the Yin Soul Pearl, and Xiao Ling knew the master of the weapon refinement. It happened that this person was difficult to deal with and refused to join as a guest, making it more difficult. Xiao Ling completed the task and got a great achievement, and Feng died suddenly Bold guess, Xiao is the next chief, Jiang Zichen is in danger

At the beginning, I did feel like I had read it. I came from Tianyuan, raised it for a long time, and finally killed it. The writing rhythm is indeed better than before. Maybe I know that everyone does not like to torture, so compared to Gou (abusing readers) in the early days of Tianyuan, this book has a somewhat refreshing tone at the beginning. After all, if you have a leader, you don't have to coerce in the sect. The external development is slowly expanding step by step. Now it is invincible at the same level, and it has already surpassed the rhythm of Tianyuan! But based on visual inspection, this book is still circulating in human society, and it probably won't change the map to the fairy world. According to the setting of the underworld, there should be more cross-border adventures! I just don't know if the one inside that flag is another small chop. It's probably similar. The author will recover quickly and update normally as soon as possible~😡😡😡 Cheers! ! !

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Being a sect leader on the second or third level of Qi training is almost like investing 20,000 to 30,000 yuan to open a company and become the general manager in a remote area of ​​Gansu.

Feng Yanzhi's death finally makes it clear. In the first book, when you got rich in the later period, you only care about your mother-in-law and not your apprentice. In this book, you clearly have good skills but only give them to your mother-in-law and don't give your life to the hero. What kind of three views do you have! It really chills the heart of the person who came here with you to read the book. This heartless and unjust book deserves to be shut down!

To tell a joke, the Beast Controlling Sect does not control beasts when fighting 😐

How can I put it this way? This novel is not like a novel about cultivating immortals at all. Sometimes I feel like it is more like a historical novel. It is about a beast-controlling sect from the beginning to the end. There is no such thing as spiritual beasts. Every time they fight, they are just like ordinary monks, throwing one spell at a time. You think it can be solved if there are more spells. Solution, from beginning to end, there are only 1 or 2 people. They are immortals in love, but they can live a few more years than ordinary people. This is the first time I have seen such a weak immortal cultivator. There are also spirit insects and puppets that Pig's Feet has spent so much resources to raise. They have never been used in fights. Pig's Feet shouts unity every day, and the result is that there are a lot of people in the sect. The thorny head, here shouts a severe beating, and in the end he didn't even fart. Lin Zixiang, who was originally a good character, was forced into a villain by pig's feet, the only buffer between the two of them. Senior Brother Zhong was also forced to die by the author. He taught all the secret techniques, and even the foundation builder could die. It's not as good as There is no secret method for these. What do you think? There is a lot of paving the way. I thought that Lin would end up with inner demons due to his master's foundation building failure and his first foundation building failure, which would eventually lead to his own foundation building failure. The result was Zhong's failure and Lin's success. This was to create a conflict and force a conflict. Alas...

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What kind of thing is written? People under 20 years old can read it. Xiaobaiwen

I have read about 300 chapters. The writing of this book is smooth and the plot is full. The protagonist endures hardships and uses the tact of a low-level person to play both sides and gradually expand the sect. It is very good. But there is always a hole in my heart that I won't express my displeasure with. First, developing the economy with a service attitude of the modern economic system has been successful. The ancients knew all these things, but the immortal cultivators with sharp ears and eyes actually didn't know how to do it 2. The son of a rich man can't sit down in the hall, let alone the leader of a sect. Although the author forcibly explained the protagonist's several chance adventures, they are still too far-fetched 3. Female The main character is a failure, not that it is bad to have a female main character, but because the author wrote it, I wanted to deprive myself of three bedrooms and two living rooms, carry the main character with me wherever I go, and keep kissing me. I am tired of it. The most unbearable thing is that the bad character of the main character is still a success. I felt so bad when I saw this and came here to complain.

Only by comparing with the master's position can you know how good the master's position is. I miss Lao Qi's nth year. This book by the author is actually worse than the previous one, Early Kojima, but it is better than After Kojima. It is difficult to write a group portrait article. The people in this article are too stereotyped, and no one is impressed after reading it. In addition, when writing about a martial art, you must have feelings for the martial arts. There are many differences in this book. The protagonist is too selfish, just like the original one. Also, in the future, you might as well write a book about a eunuch. Every woman you describe is stupid.

What is a sect? The sect is the carrier of inheritance and continuity with concepts, techniques, and knowledge as the core. Instead of giving you a token, you become a sect, which is called a gang. One has no ideas, the other has no skills, and the third has no core and unique knowledge inheritance. This is not called a sect, but a gang.

Feng Yan has been written to death. You don't have to love her, but please don't hurt her. Feng Yan had no shortage of spiritual stones to buy foundation-building pills, so why did she die? All those who were sincerely loyal to the sect died, and the rest were just followers of the sect. In the end, is the protagonist going to be a loner?

The beginning is a bit like being a master, and it feels good to read. It is the refreshing type that I like. There is no stimulating and exciting novel where the protagonist is inexplicably powerful, can hit 999 points with one punch, overcome tribulations and blow up people's mountain gates, or fight with more than ten levels of newbies with a full halo. It feels so good to read one book, but makes me want to vomit after reading another one.

He has an unpleasant personality. He is a powerful person and a virtuous who is decisive and not killing. He is also motivated by sex. He said that he must be shameless and not give in, but later he actually fell in love at first sight... It is better to describe it directly and endure the humiliation.

Let me tell you my point of view 1. There are too many typos. The names of people, exercises, places, sects, and weapons can all be wrong. They are common and everyone can see this. 2. I was so disgusted by the sex scene with the heroine. 3. The supporting characters who have contributed to the protagonist and the sect will not have a good end. You can write them to death, but can they die? 4. The plot is simple, basically just write whatever comes to mind 5. The supporting characters cannot create their own characteristics. For example, Huang Ye is basically a tool of the protagonist, without his own emotions, personality, and motivations. It's just that he has the ability and brains to do things. 6. There is too little description of sect management and the relationship between sects. Basically, the protagonist is practicing and hunting for treasures.

This second- and third-level qi-training leader will be humble to anyone he sees, or else he will kneel down and beg for mercy. No one would join this sect, right? Joining it wouldn't cost anyone a life, right? Don't kneel down and beg for mercy, don't be killed like mowing grass, the power belongs to yourself. For example, if I have the power of lawlessness, I will kill hundreds of people every day just for fun.

Well written 1 Close to human nature, real life is just like that 2 IQ is online, the plot is reasonable 3 The writing is good 4 The story is exciting Much better than the so-called ranking list

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I was suddenly pissed off by the author. Fortunately, I still thought this book was good. The logic and plot were relatively delicate. When it came to the wedding scene, I suddenly felt like a different person was writing it. It was so disgusting.

So far, the writing has been very stable. The plot progress is not delayed, it is interlocking and full of suspense. The relationship between the characters is handled properly, and the conflicts are not triggered. It makes people hooked! !

This type of plot has happened too many times, it's a bit boring🥱

Whoever Song Xian goes to will be destroyed.

I feel that the author's basic writing skills are very solid, but the routine is very unattractive.

The author does not have many works, but his writing style is very sophisticated, and the quality is at the forefront of fantasy writing. Although there are some controversies in the plot design and character arrangement, the flaws are not hidden, but the update speed is too slow, which does not quench the thirst.

11 Angry votes!

I've been raising it for more than a year and I'm just writing this little bit. Isn't it enough for anyone to read? Answer me

Repeat a routine over and over again, and come up with new routines. If you really can't think of one, read other books instead of finishing the whole book with one routine.

Three days of fishing and two days of drying nets

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