Gou Is a Talented Person in the First Saint Demon Sect

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The scenes before and just after foundation building are the most interesting. After that, each one is smarter and stupider than the other. It seems that your protagonist is the only smart person in the world. Take Mrs. Chongguang as an example. The author has always emphasized that she is Mrs. Chongguang. She is usually well protected, so she is stupid. The question is, hasn't she lived several lifetimes, and was she born as Mrs. Chongguang? How did such a stupid thing reach perfection in the middle stage of foundation building, and it was still practiced in the Chu Sheng Sect. Compared with the previous one, Yu Su is really smart. Most of the time, it's fine to just watch it without thinking, but later on, when you take a closer look, you will find that there are flaws and loopholes everywhere. More than 90% of the powerful enemies that the protagonist fights are tribulations. This kind of common sense can make the protagonist fail every time. It's like the protagonist is the only one who can hold an umbrella on a rainy day, and no one else can. The author forcefully lowers the intelligence and lowers the intelligence. Don't fix the patches that can't be put on the table. If you don't have the writing power, don't write this big framework. It's over.

We may once again see a new author become a god with a book. There are many visible flaws at the beginning of this book, such as too many jokes that make people tired, the lack of a plot of their own, and the protagonist's eagerness to restart the book that makes people say that their IQ is off the line. But after seeing 450,000 words, these problems disappeared. The main plot is the main tone, and the jokes are the embellishment. After the world view is unfolded, it becomes more and more interesting, and the plot becomes more exciting. Especially the various birth operations of the protagonist make people unable to put it down. There is also a big advantage here, that is, the supporting characters are not witty. The supporting characters are not clever, and it is satisfying to watch the protagonist being born. Otherwise, it will be like bullying a kindergarten child, and it will just be boring.

Regarding Ang Xiao's ending, I hope he won't be included in the banner. Ang Xiao is a proud man. He has overcome obstacles all the way, and during the long five thousand years, he has continued to strive for what he wants in his heart. The arrogance of "not willing to be inferior to others" is engraved in his bones. Even if the road ahead is full of thorns, he has never flinched. For him like this, the ending should be upright and vigorous. At the last moment, even though he knew that his skills were inferior to others, he still had an unyielding fire. He will face death calmly, with the most heroic attitude, maintaining the heart of "no regrets even in body and mind". After five thousand years of persistence, he lost the result but never lost his spirit. He could accept failure and accept death, but he would not accept becoming someone else's slave or lower his proud head. As Hemingway said, "People can be destroyed, but they cannot be defeated." The body may disappear, but the stubbornness and dignity engraved in the soul will always shine brightly and will not be defeated by any force. The above is my personal opinion, just a suggestion

I feel that the realm is set beyond the standard, and you can play with luck and cause and effect in the foundation stage. If you reach perfection in Qi training, you will die if you mess with the cause and effect. It is only the early stage of the foundation stage. Things can be calculated casually. Without plug-ins, others can't play at all! You can practice the Sage Way during the Qi training period, it's beyond the standard! What kind of immortality can you cultivate if everything is bound by fate and fate?

Can it be less God's perspective? The logic of inferring causes from results appears too much. It's really awkward and the logic is very far-fetched.

Originally, Chusheng, Jiange, and Daoting each had their own merits. Now, Daoting and Jiange have become the background in the background, and their presence is not as strong as that of the mana and magic that emerged later. In addition, there is a discrepancy between this life and the last life of the Bo Yao. In the last life, he voluntarily gave up and died. How can he act like the four brothers are united in this life? In many places, it feels like the settings have been changed casually. It would be more reasonable to say it is a parallel universe rather than a hundred generations. This book was really good in the early stages, but now it can only be said to be so-so.

At the beginning, I felt that it was okay to sew and copy book reviews. Even if I can sew and copy it well at the end, it is also a good way to quote and thank you Who knew that the more I write, the more confusing it becomes with various new settings and the preface does not match the postscript From the First Saint The order for "Left Foot Steps on the Right Foot" was cancelled. It was disgusting to read. The first book to be fully ordered and read from the starting point. It is true that great writers and great writers do not lack readers like me in Yegou, so take care of yourself 🙂

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This book is one of the few that I have updated to a later stage in the past few years, but in the later stage, the shortcomings of the author's writing skills were also exposed, which is really a pity. First of all, the structure of the author's entire book is a bit too plain in the later stages. The climax of the book is actually when the protagonist proves the golden elixir. During that time, the author devoted a lot of space to the portrayal of Dang Mo, Empress Xiao and even Tingyou, so these supporting characters could give readers a strong impression and shock at the time. But in the later stage, these outstanding characters in the early and middle stages have all been abandoned by the author. The author began to focus on describing the struggle between the first generation of Four Peak Masters and the Nascent Soul Taoist Masters, the so-called Shangxiu. This has also led to a problem. The struggle between superiors has always been the most difficult part to write online. Not every author can create something like the Great Desolate Prisoner's Finger like Chen Dong. I think Hajihe's battle scenes in the early and middle stages are of a good level, but in the later stages, it can be said that the fighting scenes were abandoned. This also makes it impossible for the outstanding characters in the early and mid-term to have any scenes in the battle. Then the downward revision of the perspective makes it even more difficult for these characters to be of any help to the protagonist. The characters who spent a lot of pen and ink in the early and mid-term hardly play a big role in promoting the plot in the later stage, and the appearance rate also plummets. In addition, the author's design of the character of Chu Sheng runs throughout, and even the name is related to Chu Sheng. But in the later period, I actually felt that the character of Chu Sheng did not stand up well. The author portrayed Chu Sheng as a humble mortal seeking truth, but it did not allow people to bring into the complexity and delicateness of the role of Chu Sheng. This made it difficult for me to admire and like the character of Chu Sheng. Instead, I was more inclined to think that Chu Sheng was just a lucky guy. The Taoist masters are just small characters with extraordinary talents. None of the Taoist masters has charm rooted in personality. The author seems to want to give Si Chong a personality that is somewhat opposite to that of Chusheng, so as to create a conflict of ideas between the two, and finally shape the characters of both parties at the same time. But I have to say that the author's design here is a bit rough and failed. As a result, in addition to the protagonist, the two most important characters in this article did not perform well. This directly led to the protagonist's personality in this kind of game being not distinctive enough. There is even some disconnect with the growth between the early and middle stages. The author wants to make up for this coherence through the link of Yuan Shen, but for some reason, there is always a faint feeling of being unable to do anything. Finally, the author's skill is actually reflected in the integration of various small conflicts and small stories. What the author lacks in my opinion is the overall layout of the five million word book, which leads to the fact that these small stories and small conflicts cannot be embedded into the overall layout of this five million word book. When concentrated in the early and middle stages, short stories cannot be used to connect the later periods, and only a fixed pattern of constantly creating information gaps is used. Without a smooth short story as a connection, it seems that the story is not as interesting as the early and middle stages, and one of the biggest fun and selling points of this book is lost. The spiritual temperament of ordinary people who are happy and happy is the style conveyed by this book, and then mixed with a little drama portrayal, so that there is good and evil, and the readers feel comfortable. But when the protagonist becomes an upper level cultivator, the energy and spirit of this common man can no longer be revealed, and most of the spirit and spirit of this book are lost. I hope the author will work hard on the next book. I can't comment more on a five-star book. The author himself is already at the top of the current online literature. I just hope the author will not forget the needs of readers.

Is there any novel similar to this kind of high-level novel? Invincible flow is the best. I beg you.

{"TopicId":"1228394637397262336","TopicName":"First Saint"} 1. Three stages: Early stage: Not bad, it is also the most interesting, novel and attractive period Mid stage: Where does the decline start? In my opinion, it should have started after the time when I proved the fire in the sky Later period: It is no longer the top three in the monthly ticket. There are a lot of poison points (almost unstoppable). Laohe uses the villain's strength to decrease in the later stage to block them Poison points: There are many, you can read the end of each chapter by yourself A one-sentence book review The First Sage: The mystery created in the early stage is okay, but in the end, the villain is actually not created well. The creation of the First Saint is very separate from the previous one. There is always a feeling that the ancestor made a puppet and hid it behind him (just kidding, in fact, it was not written well) Highlights: The early creation Such as Feixue, Chongguang, Ang Xiao's early and mid-term, and Shizun's early and mid-term. You can also look at them in the later stages. These are okay, and they will basically not appear later. Simply, Ang Xiao Feixue and others are the background boards after the protagonist's enlightenment. This is a mistake. Poisonous point: To put it simply, you only need to watch it carefully (middle and late stages) , you will find that it is all poisonous. To put it simply, it is like a piece of clothing, which is sewn with cloth. But in the end, you will find that 99% is imagination (setting) and only a little bit is fabric. I don't plan to pursue it later. It is watery, procrastinating and poisonous Summary: It is suitable to take a look at the early stage, and you can also make do with it in the mid-term. It is recommended to persuade you to quit in the later stage.

In the past, I would start keeping tabs on the book a few minutes in advance, and keep refreshing it when the time was almost up. Now I watch it normally, sometimes I forget to watch it and I save it for a day or two. I feel that the recent plots over a long period of time are not that fascinating, and some special descriptions take up a lot of space. I feel that some people may not like to read them very much. In addition, some jokes have been used in the recent content, and some characters have been strengthened. It seems that, to put it simply, now it is just a normal watch, objective and casual, whereas before it was very immersive and immersive. Now many places seem very abrupt, or unnatural, with more intentionality (not the plot, but some descriptions), which is obviously much worse than before. There is also a feeling that the detailed world view in the back is not laid out and set up well, which leads to some plot frustrations and patching that seems unreasonable. This also leads to rhythm problems, which makes it difficult to write and write wonderfully. It feels like it is not as dedicated as before. What happened today? What did you read? Oh, that's it. Maybe my requirements are indeed too high, but this requirement is based on the previous content.

The settings are pretty good, and the playfulness looks good. In addition, the author and the comment section are full of yellow paint. Removing the pigment content can reduce the amount by two-tenths

What a rush, what a rush. At first I thought it was just a popular novel about being reincarnated and playing in a harem, but I didn't expect that this is how a novel that doesn't treat people as human beings should be written. The newly born sword species is everywhere!

This book is so true to life that I really felt immersed in it.

The writing is indeed good🙂

The first few dozen were written a bit casually, probably because the author didn't expect the results to be so good, but the later ones were much better. Now I have read more than two hundred chapters of the game between Jindan Zhenren from all sides, and it is very exciting to watch the protagonist's dealings. At first, I thought there were too few books, but now I feel like there are too many🤣

I've finished reading the main text, and I'm done spreading flowers! Lu Yang and [Ang Xiao] are really funny together. I can't help it. They are both from the Chu Sheng Sect, a little fox and an old beast I just started reading this novel and lost interest after reading a few chapters. Then I read it again. Really, the more I read, the more I get obsessed with it. Lu Yang's astonishing wisdom (the founder is Tingyou) and the astonishing power (the master is the demon), Lu Yang's two fathers I think the grass worms made of foxes are very cute Almost all are booked, it's the best way to spend money on reading novels One more episode The ending is quite satisfactory. Of course, my favorite part is the part between Ang Xiao and Lu Yang in the middle and late stages. The ending part is indeed almost interesting. The author's writing style is humorous. I like it very much. It is interesting to watch Additionally, I also added the Cao Lu Chong I drew some time ago. The style of painting is too green and I am obsessed with my hand. To be honest, I am not embarrassed to post it. Since it is finished, I will post it by the way

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It was a very enjoyable book to read. I finally finished reading the main text today. There were no updates throughout the whole process. It was completed in one go and I felt even more comfortable. When I first read it, I just thought it was a cover of "The Road to Immortality", and it was stitched together with the system of cultivating immortals in "The Immortal Tribe", and then mixed with many interesting books to relieve boredom. What makes it better is that the writing is fluent, the plot is refreshing, and from time to time the author is immersed in his own art and does not know what the world is... It was not until the first big plot, "Chongguang Seeking Money", that I felt shocked, and the unique charm of this book began to show itself. Only then did I realize that this was a group portrait online article. The plot of "Ang Xiao" pushes the characterization to the pinnacle. A large-scale Chongguang, combined with the larger stage of the Jindan period, the character's charm has increased exponentially. It is a pity that the subsequent World Honored Ones, Tao Masters, and Peak Masters never surpassed Ang Xiao's shaping. In fact, the writing is not bad, but Ang Xiao is so exciting that it will be difficult to surpass it in the future. Character creation is a highlight of this book. The setting of the realm and the advancement of the big plot with the cause and effect of three lives as the main line are also very exciting, and you can experience the worldview that increases in dimension along with the realm. Time is no longer linear, cause and effect can be changed arbitrarily, or even reversed in the end. The present that we think of is actually the observed future, which is so exciting that it is terrifying. Human beings are originally four-dimensional creatures trapped in linear time. By ascending the dimension, we can see and access all timelines and possibilities, that is, a five-dimensional perspective. The divination of the Foundation Establishment Realm, the sparks calculated by the Jindan Master's fingers, and the deduction of cause and effect are all the power of this level. Sixth Dimension can modify the past timeline at will and grasp the possibilities. The World-Honored One's change of cause and effect, and Sword Lord's choice of the future are probably at this level, but they only have the temporary impact of choice, between the fifth and sixth dimensions. The Avatar masters the superposition of all possibilities, and can even create a book of centuries that can create and modify timelines and future possibilities at will. It is a perfect six-dimensional creature. Based on this, it can be inferred that the deity after transcendence may set out to the seventh dimension or even higher. It is no longer possible to participate in and influence the macro narrative, so it shows the characteristics of forgetting and disappearing. This kind of realm setting is much more interesting than the classical cultivating immortal power, but it is also more difficult to write. In the later stage, many parts of the plot were actually on the verge of collapse, and could only be patched repeatedly. It can be seen that it is difficult for the author to perfectly imagine such power, let alone describe it so that all readers can understand it. After all, we are just 'downgrading our thinking' after all. Fortunately, it landed safely in the end, and the ending was decisive enough, which is much better than the ominous later years of "The Road to Immortality". The plot of the full text has a tight rhythm, except for the first entry into Hades, which is a bit delayed. Many fighting plots are actually unnecessary and can be regarded as a fly in the ointment. As for what the author said in his remarks after finishing the book, the lack of preparation for the ancient times in the early stage, which led to the mechanical deity in the later stage, is of course also a problem. This is a test of writing skills and the handling of detailed outlines, so it has to be polished over time. As a villain, it is rare that Chu Sheng can stick with him until the end. Although I thought that the final boss was going to be Mo Jie in the later stage, I finally turned around and gave Chu Sheng the dignity of a boss. It was good, and he was not completely reduced to the plaything of the two immortals named Ming Xiang and Tai Yuan Xian. When the seven emotions are cut off, the mortal First Saint is completely dead, but the First Saint as the final boss is truly completed. An absolute villain with nothing to redeem himself from, and a Tao-seeking AI that has given up on humanity, it highlights the full humanity of our Parameciums who never forget their original aspirations. The beginning of the chapter is about Lu Yang's conspiracy and treachery, and the ending is about Xuande's morality and humanity becoming a god, which brings the concept of the book to a higher level. Paramecium came from the world of order. Although she was jointly trained by the First Sage, Jiange, and Taoist Court, she finally kept her true heart and did not become the second First Sage. This further illustrates the tenacious vitality and appeal of the world of Order where the traveler lives. Of course, loyal ministers are more treacherous than treacherous ministers. The mysterious person is dark, with a dark heart towards the bright moon. Who says that Lu Yang is not a good boy... At most, he looks a bit evil. The number of days changes, and artifacts become easier to find, and they will return to virtuous people. This is a natural principle. There is no virtue in being a first-time saint, and there is no virtue in failing. The eternal night will eventually break.

Revolving around the Chu Sheng Sect, the plot ends here, and if it ends, it won't be an anticlimax. Ending the First Saint, returning the sea of ​​light to a "blue sky", the protagonist will finally transcend, and the ending is open. But I think it would be better if it was extended a little more and had a second part. Transforming into a spirit and cultivating the transcendent world is like ascending to another dimension, soaring your consciousness. When you reach the upper world, you should create a fairy body or something like that. At the beginning of the formation, it is just like a casual cultivator who is easily bullied and has few resources, so it is a bit excessive to use fellow villagers who are promoted later as talents, but it should be quite reasonable to use them as tools as subordinates. After all, cultivators are most likely to inherit their own inheritance, which is easier to control. If we set up a small world, then there will be a limited number of dimension-ascending games. If a big world is set, infinite "sea of ​​light" will continuously generate dimension ascenders, building a higher-order world like a matryoshka doll. Just like in black hole cosmology, this universe is in the black hole of the parent universe, and the parent universe is in the black hole of the larger universe...

In my opinion, the focus of a work is always the story. The setting structure itself is only the foundation, there is no need to dominate. But if the design is exquisite, it can also give a lot of help to the work. Now that the First Saint is over, I will take the Book of Hundreds of Worlds as an example and chat about it. Since it was put on the shelves, the performance of the book "First Saint" has been rapid, and eventually it helped the author win the title of Twelve Heavenly Kings and achieve the order of 100,000 yuan. Its world view setting, etc., Combines "Xuanjian Immortal Clan" and "My Simulated Road to Immortality", which is quite eye-catching and has attracted many people to discuss. But for me, purely in terms of gold fingers, the backend gold fingers of "Book of Worlds" can only be regarded as average, or medium, not good but not bad. Because of the rollback cheat, it naturally has the ability to reduce the dimensionality of the plot. As long as you read the file a few times, the single-threaded plot resistance design will be easily broken through. If you simply read files repeatedly, it will easily make readers feel bored. At the same time, as the protagonist grows and becomes stronger, it is generally impossible to revert to cheats frequently, and it is easy for cheats to disconnect. Therefore, normally speaking, rollback cheats can only be considered average. After bringing a sense of freshness in the early stage, they will quickly drop out. In fact, whether it is The Road to Immortality or The First Saint, the reason why it can become a topic lies in its plot design. In order to adapt to the flashback cheat type, both books have made great efforts in plot design, giving many supporting characters the possibility of multi-line development, so that every flashback can have a fresh plot. Coupled with the high-pressure plot, not only does the protagonist need to go back and start over, but it also gives readers an extremely rare high-pressure plot experience, which leads to a hearty feeling. In other words, if a lot of effort is not put into the plot design, the plot will soon become boring to readers if it is just a cheat sheet. But in the book First Saint, since a lot of thought was put into designing the plot, Goldfinger would not be left out in the cold, and it was impossible for Goldfinger to just disappear. Therefore, the author of Chusheng has refined and improved his golden finger. Not only can the protagonist return to settle the experience to generate talents, but he can also settle other people's experiences through gold to obtain talents. This update successfully solves the problem of Goldfinger disconnection and allows it to maintain a sense of presence throughout the entire text. In other words, updating the setting of calculating other people's experiences has upgraded the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds" golden finger in the First Holy Book from medium to high. But it can't reach the super or top level. Why do you say this? Because in my opinion, the talent given by the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds" settlement is too powerful, and it has reached the level of a supermodel. The high-pressure plot that previously gave readers the greatest sense of satisfaction seems less stressful because of the overly intense golden talent. For example, the talent of "Dragon Slaying Platform", its actual combat performance completely surpasses that of the monks' magical powers. Although it cannot be said that the combat power has collapsed, it still greatly affects the design of the magical battles. If the battle of magical powers is described as a contest between warriors, "Dragon Slaying Platform" is like suddenly taking out a firearm. While its strength is super high, it also makes the combat design easily fall into a lackluster situation. Therefore, in my opinion, the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds" written by the First Saint is only a top-quality golden finger. If you want to further optimize the golden finger design of "Book of Hundreds of Worlds", I think some restrictions should be added. The essence of Goldfinger's design is the control valve for plot advancement. Meaningless restrictions are indeed forcibly suppressing combat capabilities. But it is a normal balance adjustment to limit the strength of the super model. Only by adjusting the balance well can the plot advancement be more stable. Returning to the subject, when it comes to the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds", I personally think that the most important restriction that should be added is to deal with the experience of others through gold settlement. Because of the permanent certificate of talent, it is theoretically possible for the protagonist to eventually collect dozens of gold properties and obtain several talents. And the stacking of these talents is definitely more expressive than four or five magical powers. Therefore, while consuming gold to settle other people's experiences to obtain talents, it is best to also consume the pages of the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds". In fact, the closer to the later stage, the less likely the protagonist is to return frequently. Because it is difficult for readers to accept that the protagonist dies faster after becoming stronger. Therefore, no matter how it develops, it is difficult for the number of pages of the "Book of Hundreds of Worlds" to be used normally to exceed twenty pages. On this basis, adding the setting of calculating the number of pages consumed by other people's experience does not affect the actual plot advancement, but is just an invisible balancing mechanism. Secondly, increase the cooling limit on the use of talents. In fact, the best restriction should be the limit on the number of uses, such as the reincarnation of fairy spirits. However, this restriction is not flexible and controllable enough. It is better to weaken it into a cooling CD restriction. For example, the talent "Dragon Slaying Platform" can only be used once a year. In this way, talents will only be used when necessary, avoiding the problem of why "Dragon Slaying Platform" is not used for instant kills in general fighting. The above is my humble opinion on the feasibility of the golden finger optimization plan in this book.

After reading this book, it was generally in line with expectations. In the middle, I felt that I was motivated to continue reading. However, I always felt that there were a lot of foreshadowings that were not explained clearly, and the sudden addition of many Taoist ancestors was indeed a bit abrupt. The later completion was relatively hasty, but overall it is still an excellent work.

The husband starts from the mainland, and there are various gods, including: The fantasy god of great supernatural powers, the God of Gou Daoliu, the god of light comedy and music, and the new and strange god of Kai... Now there is Heshou, taking advantage of all directions, to merge Tao and become a god. 1. The beginning of Qi refining and the twists and turns Beyond the starting point, the beginning of practice all needs a good golden finger and a wonderful story. The same is true for the beginning of a book, so that it can retain thousands of readers. And the content of this book Goldfinger is a major category of simulators. It can only reach the middle level, and the upper limit has been roughly determined. However, with the changing storyline, the protagonist grasps the "information gap" and changes during restarts. The same story extends into completely different story lines, intertwined with each other, and orderly. The story is full of excitement and at the same time reveals a deeper reversal behind it, which is fascinating. The protagonist determines his path in different story lines, and the readers are also immersed in the diverse story lines. It is very interesting to tell the story in the early stages. 2. The foundation of the Great Dao, taking advantage of all directions In the starting point continent, all the Dao coexisted, and hundreds of companies competed for it. There were also countless people who imitated and used it, but most of them were ordinary. The golden fingers, background, realm setting, etc. Of this book all have certain practical elements. However, when combined with multiple Taoisms, they have extraordinary effects and skillfully create a good Taoist foundation - world view. [Dark Crowd] The flow of darkness, plotting against each other, reversing layer by layer, cultivating from the top to death, cultivating from the bottom, [Great Realm] The realm is extraordinary, building the foundation is like becoming an immortal, it can be counted as cause and effect, and there is no way to avoid it, [Book of Hundreds of Worlds] can cut off cause and effect, start a new life, and carry the non-cause and effect treasures from the previous life. It is not surprising to take one of them alone. It is the combination of the three that creates an extremely exciting protagonist story under a "primordial saint" and desperate world view. He can explore the pits one by one, rely on the prophet, seek treasures, and then start again. The existing world view and setting are reintegrated in this book, bursting out with new foundation and vigorous vitality. In the middle and early stages of the story, it is wonderful. 3. Golden elixir fruition status, all five elements are prepared From the starting point of practice, the higher you go, the more difficult it becomes. You need to support books, monthly tickets soar, attract the attention of many readers, and then you can go further. However, there are many books for practitioners at the starting point, and the number of positions on the monthly ticket list is limited. How to succeed? This book has five elements, so it is a success. First, it is updated. It has made great progress at the beginning of the month, with an average of more than 8,000 per day. Second, it is relaxed, which fits the current reading mood. It cleverly integrates jokes and jokes under the dark and chaotic world view, and the writing is fun. Hengsheng makes people feel relaxed and happy in a desperate situation, and is full of emotions. Thirdly, the character design. The protagonist has a clear character design, is cautious and prudent, and must avenge any revenge. The supporting characters have many arcs and are not rigid. Each has its own characteristics and has the wisdom of the character. The fourth and fifth are the story and world view settings, which are the foundation for building the foundation. At this point, in the middle and late stages, it can be said to be a moment of glory, 4. The Nascent Soul transforms into a god, and the future is long In the starting point continent, there has always been no shortage of geniuses. Some became famous with a book, and some changed their way of cultivation. Once they were enlightened, they accumulated for many years and finally achieved one. You Heshou, after several reincarnations and rebuilding, under this new vest, accumulated in several lives, took advantage of many opportunities, and finally achieved enlightenment. Unfortunately, in the end, I still have little qualifications and insufficient experience, and it is difficult to fully control the world outside the path. I tried to reduce and seek emptiness, but I reduced too much and left only a lot of emptiness.

1. Talk about the advantages. The Demon Gate is really good-looking, and He almost makes good use of the information in the book. With a nascent world view and a plotting fairy tale, Paramecium gradually climbs up with "talent" as the starting point. It is inevitable that she will be tricked by people, traps, and opportunities. And this "trap" was the enemy's trust in the previous life. The interest rate difference, after being successfully transferred to the next life through the [Book of Hundreds of Worlds], becomes the information gap of the Paramecium. It can be said that the wind and water are changing. It not only brings out the excitement, but also brings the character to life a little bit, which directly fills the sense of expectation! 2. Let's talk about the highlights. Stitching..., Although... There are too many stitchings, but He is able to write out these popular new settings at the moment, and he can also integrate Nayin Fifty into appropriate places, which greatly improves the 13 frames and the sense of substitution in the book. It is undoubtedly a strong writing power, and it can be regarded as a new one in the first half of a sentence. 3. Talk about the disadvantages. It's still stitching, there are too many stitches, but the shortcomings are not new, and it seems that the plot is getting more and more confusing in the later stages, but He is really good. Although it is a bit fast, it also clarifies the direction, and the ending lands smoothly! 4. Looking forward to the new book! I look forward to the new book being able to continue to live up to my expectations, to have a lot of fun, and at the same time to write new ideas and bring out the new! 5. Sprinkle flowers at the end, cheers for the new book. Also... What about the extras? Hurry up and update, and these... Why do the extra chapter names look so weird? At first glance, they feel like they don't match the content of the chapter, which is a bit strange.

There are flaws in the later writing, but the author's update speed makes up for this. I hope there will be some extras 😍😍

I feel like I already know the follow-up development of your existing plot. No matter how much I jump, I can't get anywhere The only focus now is, do you have any new books to recommend? Or a good-looking book, which is in short supply now

Read from 2.8-2.22 Book of Hundreds of Worlds Qi Training-Talent Building Foundation-Real Person Golden Pill-True (Human) Lord Nascent Soul-(One) Dao (of) ) Lord Hua Shen - Cornerstone of (World) Nayin Five Elements Realm Jie Tian Pseudo History 129600 years Being called The person with the word came up to me The First Saint Praise Oh, I never thought that I was actually the clone of the World Honored One Ignorance The Four Immortals 🐕 False Hold You all should know that I am far away The Great Deeds of the Mai Ancestors Remnant Consciousness of Heaven and Man Hui Guang Ascension of Gods - Collapse of the Other Side Good People Book of Hundreds of Worlds

Good story, cheers for the author