Armored Train in the Apocalypse

Yours is much better than the one written by Fuji Cola, in terms of logic, writing style, and character creation, so I wonder why his grades are so much better than yours. These grades should be yours.

I can accept not raising idle people, but I cannot accept being overly exploited, let alone being overly oppressed by having to prepare my own food! A small piece of bread and a bottle of water will replace a day's worth of food, and it doesn't look good to tease others.

I saw Chapter 160. The first part was really good and made me want to read on. Until the second half of the Steel Council New City, the protagonist's dual talent gene collapse began, and the perception could be said to plummet. Since I didn't read the back part, I don't know if there is a cure for the protagonist's gene collapse, but it is a bit unacceptable. I can accept that the protagonist's team encounters a major danger, similar to the protagonist in Doomsday Cockroaches where the protagonist arrives alone due to force majeure factors. The Inner Mongolia part, even if I start over, I still enjoy reading it, but I only have one year left to live, and it is very annoying to watch. Even though I guess Lin Xi is the key to saving the protagonist's gene from collapse, I still can't watch it. Other books are getting bigger and bigger, how come it has become "first find out the cause of destruction and save the world" to "save the collapsed gene before saving the world". The gap is getting smaller and smaller. The gap is a bit big.

Internet writing is a struggle that will lead to success. Your current results are partly due to hard work, but more of them are luck. There are many people who are better at writing than you, but whose grades are not as good as yours and who even fail a lot. No matter how many personal matters you have, they are all excuses. If your career fails and you have no money, your marriage, your family, and everything else will be a castle in the air. You have to make it clear that among all the things you do, what are the things that make money and what are the things that cost money. The tickets are all for you, I hope you can wake up.

It's not suitable for me. I can't stand it after reading eight chapters. Society is already a little dark, but you still write it in such a dark way. Can't there be light? I don't like it.

In this recent episode, I personally feel that the "main theme" is okay, and I was quite excited to watch it. But if it were really brought into a post-apocalyptic environment, this kind of mobilization would be a bit outrageous. After all, after surviving for so long due to intrigues and intrigues, part of the sense of belonging and honor at the national level has been worn away. I believe there must be people who will spontaneously resist Japan as mentioned in the article. But there will definitely be people who make a fortune from war. There are people in this world who are exquisite and refined, let alone the end of the world. All in all, it was quite a twist. At first glance, it seemed exciting, but after thinking about it after watching it, it seemed unrealistic. I also know that it is just a novel, so there is no need to be rigid. Some realities are more outrageous than novels, but it is just screwed up.

There are currently 24 chapters updated, and the early pace is tight and good food! There is no female protagonist yet. Is it suspected that the mother and daughter are involved in a murder? Currently, it seems that if you engage in more counter-attacks, the whole group will be in good shape, and the combat power will not collapse, it can be regarded as high-quality food. So the author updates the keyboard twice a day and the grass really doesn't grow? Currently updated to Chapter 55 The plot is still in the early development stage and is relatively dull, with no special highlights. According to the content of the article, the heroine should be a mother and daughter, and generally there seems to be no problem. Regarding the problem of squeezing passengers in the book, I think it is completely acceptable at the moment. The protagonist is still in the stage of running for his life, and the plot has not yet begun to establish a gathering place or develop a strong force. Moreover, the part about the passengers is so well written that it is very easy. There is no problem in the end of the world, and it is not a problem for the dead Taoist friends to survive the poor Taoist. We can still look forward to what the specific development will be, but it has indeed planted the seeds for the emergence of poisonous spots. In addition, the most unbearable thing is the author's operation of opening a single chapter to ask for monthly updates. Anyway, I saw that the number of updates increased after it was put on the shelves. It was really unbearable (as if I heard the echo from my wallet). As we all know, there is a shortage of books. Especially new books, you can only read five chapters at most. When you are done, you just throw them on the bookshelf and continue sifting. One day when you have nothing to do, you will open the bookshelf and continue reading one by one. When I saw that there were not many new books on the shelf, I just started to read them and waited for the update. After Chapter 10, I open the comments and look for Shen Nong. After all, there are so many new books that are unfinished, unless they are a big climax or a new genre. Besides, everyone is an old bookworm. Who doesn't have a few books that I subscribe to every day, or an author I particularly like. Another: (Don't argue, don't argue, it's purely a subjective opinion. If you ask, you are right. Just say yes, yes, yes, yes)

I don't understand why we have to kick them out of the car? Keep them as backup for when you have room. Or are The Expendables bad? Or sell it directly on the train. Selling it is not another source of income. ?

So far, the overall performance is pretty good. Among the apocalyptic themes, it is already in the top 10% of outstanding writers. The superpower system is passable. The character group portrait currently looks good. The male protagonist has surpassed 99% of similar novels. However, the characters of the rest of the team are not enough. It's clear. The combat power system can only be rated as passing at a rough glance (there are too few battles to compare). The background is not very good. It's still in the fog at the moment. I can only guess based on dialogue and memories. Let's see how it is written later. As for the plot, the word count is still short so I won't comment yet.

I'm speechless. Who is taking the lead? Why are all the apocalyptic articles now filled with trains?