Speedrunning the World, Starting in South America

This book is really awesome, I really like it. The last time I liked it so much was by The Brothel Scholar. If this book were written by Zhu Tianliu, it would be so cool

This rhythm is the same as that of a motor, except for passion there is only passion, biubiubiu~

First of all, this work is an absolutely great book. Although the ending is a little rushed, it is indeed a very awesome work. I can definitely admit that I have become a fan. When will you create a Discord group and see? I don't consider myself to be a very good reader, but I have written quite a few short and medium-sized novels, so I shamelessly comment on them. Let me rank them first and talk about which of the topics written by the author I personally think are the best. The American chapter is absolutely outstanding. There are almost no criticisms in the reviews of this chapter. Both the description and the progress of the story are excellent. The Man in the High Castle (Germania) is somewhat polarizing. I personally like this chapter very much. , But this topic is also the author's problem, so I won't list it for now, here it is between top level and Renshangren The Ukraine chapter belongs to between Hong and top level. The two factions are fighting with each other and the writing is very Maozi-like, the smell of gunpowder smoke and alcohol rolled in the cold wind. The Brazilian chapter is a bit of a joke at the beginning, and it obviously borrows from Brazilian movies such as Elite Force. However, this is a new author after all, so it is understandable, and subsequent developments have brought the taste back. The Saigon chapter is about the relationship between the top and the best. Private Watkins' description is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The description of the Vietnam War and Indonesia is very good, but Zhou Yi's description is too little and there are too many characters. In addition, the author is suspected of participating in the operation to capture Maduro alive, which leads to delays in the update. If you don't think carefully, it is easy to get confused. The real world chapter is between the master and the NPC. The assassinations in Africa, Mexico and Kiev are all very interesting, but the author's ending seems very hasty. Whether it is the origin of the system or whether Zhou Yi wants to avenge the death of his good brother, the follow-up of the assassination in Kiev, and more (the origins of the Ukrainians, etc.), There are many foreshadowings that can fully support the writing of two more large chapters. It is hard to imagine that this is a book written by someone who has not studied Chinese very much. The writing style is very delicate, like an experienced professional writer, and according to the author's self-report, he could write it after reading several books. I think this writing talent is too high, too high, which is obvious to everyone. Many people are guessing that the author is the vest of a big hand, but no one has thought that this is a complete new author. I can only say that I am in admiration. The author's style is very prominent, with cold black action mixed with political thriller and a touch of human warmth. Whether it is the son of a Brazilian farmer in the first chapter, Ivan in Ukraine, or Cuba in the American chapter (I personally think that the American chapter is definitely top-notch), Kate Lehr in the Man in the High Castle, and Watkins in the Saigon chapter, these are all flesh-and-blood little characters that the author has described as being affected by the larger environment. In terms of the overall style, this is definitely a unique style that is rare on your site. I am not a person who likes to criticize, but I can responsibly tell you that the author's style is hard to find on your site or even in the entire online literary world. In the words of an old man in the book review area. He has such a righteous taste. And the author has a very deep knowledge base. It can be seen from the book review area that everyone can hardly find many bugs or unrealism in this book (referring to other similar books where people often say that the villain looks like a fool, or some military fans and book friends talk about guns every day) Just because the name is really from the local area is already very confusing. You can see very professional long-distance sniping content from the Kiev sniper school chapter, and you can also see the port fire in the Ukraine chapter... After talking about the advantages, here are some questions from the author There are too many characters Yes, everyone can understand the author I want to write a broader picture. This is not a criticism of the author's bad writing, but a question of degree. The author mentions too many characters, which makes the story line a bit complicated. For someone like me who reads every day, the flow of the book is not very smooth. The author's writing of group portraits is a bit over the top. This is most prominent in the Germania chapter, where the names of people appear. A lot of them, intertwined with war refugees, rebels, German military officers, Japanese, and Chinese. The various story lines are very fragmented. The last chapter is in Ukraine, and the next chapter is in Berlin Katerell of Germania is insufficiently portrayed, and the final confession is a bit too sudden, and even becomes a background board in the middle , the appearance of Zhou Yi and that colleague caused Kate Lair's sense of existence to plummet. The large number of characters brought confusion to the relationship, and it was too difficult for readers to understand the plot The ending was good, but the cn's resistance forces were not described in much writing. The confession at the end of the article made many people who could not get on the radio feel confused, and even some did The biggest problem of the author is that he wants to write too much and cannot grasp the balance. The protagonist Zhou Yi is a bit passerby in the back, and the portrayal has never been able to stand up The halo of the protagonist is a bit serious Zhou Yi is too "fierce". Yes, Zhou Yi's life is too smooth in the whole book, except for his parents. , The portrayal is almost a perfect person, which perfectly fits the tough guy of Hollywood in the 1980s and 1990s. The invincible combat power is comparable to the centaur god of war who has the upper body of Lu Bu and the lower body of a red rabbit. This is not to say that the perfect person is not good, but once Zhou Yi appears, many things are too bland. Everyone loses the thrilling feeling and feels that everything is planned by Zhou Yi (it seems to be only once If he failed, the assassination attempt in the Brazil chapter failed. Zhou Yi did not expect that someone would take the first step) Zhou Yi was injured too few times in the whole book, and the extent of the injuries was too weak. Although there was some mention of genetic injections, they were just mentioned and passed. Someone mentioned this in the book review area. The protagonist's life is really rough. It's a bit too smooth And in the face of hand-to-hand combat, Zhou Yi will almost never fall behind. Sometimes it's Zhou Yi's invincible one-sided "neck-twisting" (yes, this is a unique joke in this book, there is a real count of how many people's necks Zhou Yi twisted in the whole book) I want to see blood flowing into the mouth of a river! Although the gun battles in the entire book are exciting and tactical, they are not "powerful" enough or "domineering" enough or "fierce" or "strong" enough. Armored vehicles and tanks never appear head-on, and the enemy's weapons rarely include machine guns and other heavy firepower (do machine guns appear in this book?). Aircraft are completely reduced to Zhou Yi's TP tools, and there are very few fighter jets. Mentioned (Apart from passenger planes and the US fighter jets in the Brazilian chapter, has anyone else been mentioned in this book?) The system is also unknown to some passers-by. The system written by the author is purely integrated into the world view, and colleagues who have traveled through time have only made a few mentions. The function provided by the system is the same as a storage ring. If it were not an important clue in the plot, it is difficult to say that this is the "golden finger" of the protagonist In addition to genetic enhancers, the system can provide some weapons and equipment in the near future world (such as MGS4's Metal Gear "Moonlight", or a modern main battle tank, the rogue warrior suit in Call of Duty, etc.). With the author's professional knowledge and excellent writing style, it is completely possible to write more intense and large-scale military confrontations Of course, I am here to shamelessly promote some of the equipment settings I have written before, such as the wireless high-mobility special biochemical soldiers that require humans to wear special instruments and be controlled by brain-rooted needles, and the use of 12.7Mm bullpup general-purpose machine guns in combat, etc. Of course, these are always flaws, and the author's overall writing is quite exciting. The author can also create a purely fictional worldview to write about, without involving the real world, so that the problem of Shen He is alleviated. Your new chapters are often locked because your writing is too real. Other online article authors can only write some exciting things, but what you write involves a lot of real history, especially the Kangmi content. Finally, the author is really promising. He is completely talented in writing, and his talent is very high. He has the potential to become the Tom Clancy of the Internet literary world and even China.

The plot is compact and without much moisture. The protagonist kills decisively and is not a virgin. As long as you get into the villain's position, you will basically be killed. The American history in the book gave me a sense of déjà vu like Call of Duty. To a certain extent, it was like playing a game perspective. Therefore, it is best to read the entire volume before reading it, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to continue reading. Furthermore, the description of the FBI and CIA in the book is too outrageous, and that's all it can say in the book. In reality, the FBI in each state is at odds with each other. Since the police in each state have their own interests, they basically dislike the FBI and CIA. Especially when investigating major anti-terrorism cases, it is said that the FBI and CIA take over. In fact, it is more of a police on-the-spot investigation, and the investigation results are given to the FBI. One more thing I want to complain about is that it would be too inconsistent for the author not to strengthen the protagonist anymore. It is impossible to use Wushuang as in the game. Now there is only accelerated healing and space, and the book next door is starting to rely on super warriors. It would be too fake if it didn't include some technological mutation, it would be like an anti-American drama.

The writing style and the character are both fine. It's a pity that it's an urban novel. It all depends on the protagonist's invincible aura. Otherwise, I would have died 800 times. No supernatural power at all. What a waste of time in the real world!

According to the current trend, vacation is far away and writing cannot be started In addition, this book is waiting for review and release...

It's well written, but the title of your book is a bit misleading. I thought it was the kind of novel that travels through the world of movies. It turned out to be an original story. I thought I would see characters such as John Wick and Killer 47. Then I took a closer look and saw that it was original. I felt a little disappointed.

The author who was a spy wrote spy novels, and the author who was a tomb robber also wrote tomb robber novels. Now I am reading a novel written by an author who is a mercenary (it doesn't look fake anyway). I don't know whether I should worry about the author cutting off the novel because of being in it, or worrying about the author cutting off the book because of being injured.

The author went to Venezuela for a raid yesterday. Are you there for the special military operation? Author

The writing is so good and professional that you can withstand the sour attacks of those trash-talking people, and they will organize themselves to give you negative reviews because you really know how to write novels. After that, the tickets will be given to you. Don't believe it and don't think about all the nonsense your colleagues tell you. There were many good writers who were deceived before, so bear with it!