The Wily Qin

I finished reading it in one go and tell me what you think after reading it. I read the author's last book but ran away from it before finishing it. I feel like this book may be the same. Why? Because the protagonist's temperament is too gloomy and deep, he is not heroic, and his personality is insufficient. This kind of protagonist is very convincing in the middle and early stages, and I am willing to follow it. However, the protagonist is too gloomy and deep, and does not change with current events, making it depressing. I am afraid that in the end, he will be mastered and he will still be a sinister person. He is not like the heroic founding emperor who was killed in troubled times, but like the Machiavellian emperors such as Song Taizong and Han Jingdi, which is unconvincing. The character of the protagonist in the author's two books has not changed much. I think it is a belief. I hope it will be better than the previous book and make progress. I will also enjoy reading it.

1. The protagonist's temperament is not pleasant (the author's setting has to be said to be a mistake, like setting the protagonist as a "growth" character who has repeatedly made some low-level mistakes in the past. Do you think this mistake can be avoided? Yes, but it must be written like this) 2. Put aside the character and the growth-oriented protagonist. Your protagonist is not the head of the family, but if you still write it like this, isn't that screening readers? Then you traveled through time 3. It's not that it's not good to write a growth-oriented protagonist, but you have to give people a sense of satisfaction. If you give people a feeling of suffocation and powerlessness at the beginning, who will continue to read?

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Among the protagonist's forces, there are forces that do not listen to propaganda but tolerate it. A big family conspired to rebel and brought him down with heavy losses, without killing anyone. The enemy general who killed many of his own soldiers was unanimously wanted to be killed by his subordinates after he was captured. The protagonist recognized his loyalty and licked him wildly. After he conquered him, he tolerated it in every possible way. At any time, I lament that my old brother is disloyal and disrespectful, and I want to suppress him. Similar plots abound, for fear that readers will be offended.

The author's personality is such that I feel like he cannot write about the kind of courage that a founding monarch should have. I will write about the Lord of ZTE in the next book. After all, this is the author's weakness. The original was okay, after all, he was the second-generation monarch, and here he can only be regarded as a copycat second boss. Although the controversy is a good thing, it is really criticized.

His strengths are obviously in the conspiracy and power struggle genre, but he insists on writing about Gou Qin, who is equivalent to starting from scratch. As a result, the war and farming scenes are basically dry and tasteless. The first few chapters still emphasize that development will be followed by war 😥 It is obvious that the author's writing style cannot support such a plot. The characters are becoming more and more one-sided, and even the protagonist Gou Zheng has not been well shaped. It can be seen that according to this rhythm, it will take at least four to five hundred chapters, which seems stinky and long... Or the plot is too long. Hurry, strengthen Gou Qin's strength, or stop for a while and reorganize the outline, so that it won't appear to be a rush of work. 🤐 I have been fully booked until now, but the more I read, the less I want to read. It is boring and procrastinating. The amount of updates of one chapter a day cannot guarantee the quality...

Some time ago, I saw a comment suggesting that the author should write a protagonist who time-travels and becomes the emperor of the Gao family of the Northern Qi Dynasty. I think it is just right. The protagonist written by the author cannot support the courage and charm of a unified and self-made emperor, but it will be fine if he time-travels and becomes the emperor of the Gao family. He is not the founding emperor, but he inherits the powerful foundation of the Northern Qi Dynasty. He is feminine and suspicious until he becomes crazy in the later period. It is just right.

The protagonist is always gloomy and does not have the heroism and charisma of Han Gaozu, Wei Wu, and Gao Wang

There is nothing charming about this protagonist. Knowing that something was going to happen, and then just waiting for it to happen, unprepared, at the very least, not even trying to convince the three brothers.

Alas, what's the point of the protagonist, a foundation master, if he doesn't fight in person? Which foundation master is like you, who fights for his subordinates and accumulates military merit and prestige. Who would think that you can sit back and enjoy the results safely at home? Li Yuan also has a good son. What do you have, can you ask your clan to help you beat him? Why doesn't the clan become independent on its own? Why do you have to let a guy like you, who is cruel on the outside and cruel on the inside, do it on his head? Isn't the best place to gain prestige in troubled times on the battlefield? You don't think it's in the rear where you can fight hard with your generals on the front line. Then who does your army recognize? 😒

After reading a few of the author's books, I feel that the author is too obsessed with so-called power tactics and positions the protagonist as a top politician like Jiajing, rather than a statesman.

The protagonist has the prestige of the founding king. The founding king was all defeated. As for him, he is in the rear all day long. He has no domineering attitude at all. It's all about power and rubbish.

So the protagonist is the dead eldest brother, and then he takes over and develops the country? The author will not be his eldest brother who is not good to him, so in the novel, he must torture the protagonist eldest brother crazily 🤤🤤 (forget the previous one, why is this one the same) and the author's war part should not be the same as historical records. It is too explosive. The last book was like this. I hope this one can be improved. It can't describe any details of the war. Your book is still about rebellion from beginning to end, and there are a lot of war passages, so you have to work hard and attentively.

When a book is free for a limited time, the book is finished and cannot be read anymore. Author, your writing style cannot match the story of the founding emperor who was created from scratch with one knife and one gun. Your last novel was several times bigger than this one. In the future, you will either write about the ancestor of the resurgence during the decline of the dynasty or about 1.5 And a half of the founding emperor who have the same foundation as the previous one.

I'm really drunk. I haven't read it on the bookshelf, and then I restricted it. I can't stand it at all. This background and era actually created such a 🤡protagonist (a euphemism)

There are so many surnames, but if you choose a bad one, it will affect your mood. I originally wanted to subscribe, but after thinking about it, I decided not to subscribe. When I saw the names of the protagonists, I really couldn't stand it.

In the Battle of Hedong, the protagonist personally went to the front line, commanded the army to cross the river, and captured Hedong. He had a basic base. Isn't this a battle? The Bingzhou Army attacks Hedong. The protagonist leads the counterattack and repels the enemy. Isn't this a battle? Marching into Guanzhong, the protagonist leads the army to defeat Du Hong and defeats the enemy in the battle of shadows. Isn't this a battle? Sima Xun and the Zhang family jointly attack Guanzhong, and the protagonist sits in the camp to resist Sima Xun. Isn't this a battle?       ，，，，？ Yao Qiang didn't even capture Luoyang, so Gou Zheng doesn't need to lead the army into battle!       ，，，，，，，， At least it has to be Huan Wen and Murong Ke. If you are talking about conquering one or two counties, and the protagonist has to personally go out to fight, then why do you need Deng Qiang, Gou Wu, and Gou Xiong? What kind of Zhuge Liang's behavior is that he must personally do everything and die on the battlefield? ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUT off the main reason that he did not have any generals who could lead the Ming army to defeat the Mongols in the field. Take Qiu Fu as an example, he was very powerful in peacetime battles, but as a result, an army of 100,000 people was wiped out. Murong Chui liked to personally conquer the Northern Wei Dynasty at the age of sixty, but his sons failed to live up to expectations and participated in the Battle of Hepo. The 90,000-strong army was wiped out. He had to conquer the Northern Wei Dynasty personally at the age of seventy and died on the battlefield. To complain, after Murong Chui died, the generals of the Murong family were all a bunch of scum. On the other hand, under the protagonist, Gou Wu and Wang Meng are both generals, and Gou Zheng has nothing to do to compete with his men for credit. Zhu Yuanzhang's men Xu Da, Li Wenzhong, Feng Sheng, and Lan Yu (to be determined, it is too dangerous to use troops) can command an army of 150,000, so there is no need for Taizu to personally conquer it, and it is not a battle to destroy the country, so why bother?

His subordinates have always been passive and slow in their work, without the vitality of the group. This was also the case in the last book of Emperor Shizu of the Han Dynasty.

It doesn't have the demeanor of the founder of a unified country at all. It's a bit like the founder of a separatist regime. It's too manipulative and petty. It's no wonder that the poor results are not unreasonable. I have removed this book from my bookshelf because I can't read it.

The writing is okay, but some people don't like the image of the protagonist. They like the upright image of Li Shimin, the kind who cheers up and exudes heroic spirit. They don't like the dark protagonist. I can only say that everyone has their own characteristics.

I'm wondering how the protagonist can defeat Liu Yu. He is a man with incredible commanding power 😂 Not to mention Xie An and others

Isn't this pig's foot going to go crazy again in his later years? With the author's urinary nature

I'm finally willing to open a new book, but the surname Gou is enough 🤭

I see that many of the comments in the comment area are criticizing the author. I have also read a lot of historical novels. Who can tell me what I think? First of all, I only read the author's books recently. I have ordered all of the books like Emperor of the Huns and Emperor of the Han Dynasty. I have also read a thousand chapters. The experience will be better than chasing more. From the three books, it can be seen that the author's writing skills have indeed improved. At least the scenes describing the war will be more graphic and immersive than before. Secondly, we can see that the consistent feature of the author's three books is that the protagonist is never portrayed as a perfect person. This is a point that I like very much. But one drawback is that the protagonists of these three books are seriously homogeneous, and their characteristics are all martial arts. He has average strength but is very suspicious, but he is fierce at critical moments Another thing I like is that some of the supporting characters have their own little thoughts and sometimes even give readers the feeling of being a bit abusive But the author's books are very attractive to me. I have the desire to read every book. I can only say that radish and green vegetables have their own differences. I love it. The author's books are just to my taste This is a feeling that some other great writers have not brought me

It's quite good. It's more real. For a real emperor, especially the founding or resurgence leader, "suspiciousness" is not a character flaw, but a professional instinct. His core mission is not to make people like him, but to maintain the balance and security of power. Qin Shihuang, Liu Bang, and Zhu Yuanzhang are all masters of insight into people's hearts and checks and balances! Shuangwen often simplifies everything. The protagonist has his own halo, and the people around him are brainless to support him. The supporting characters are all like tools. They are unconditionally loyal to the protagonist without any small calculations of their own, and they will do whatever they want. But a story like "Gou Qin" directly exposes the complexity of human nature and the entanglement of interests to you. The emperor does not have a "sage filter" and is suspicious, weighing, and checking. His subordinates are not NPCs, and each has his or her own position and little thoughts. This kind of realism that doesn't talk about human feelings and only talks about logic makes people feel satisfied. Gou Qin's novel can write this feeling of "being alone and alone" on thin ice, and the pattern is established.

This political system is too messy. There is a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. Where do you think of writing about the Jiaofangsi and the Ministry of Households? Can you consider the background of the times? There are many modern terms. The Western Jin Dynasty already has the prototypes of three provinces and six ministries, and You are a time traveler, why don't you just decide on it? The funniest thing is that there is a household department, a branch, and a department of work. I am really writing nonsense. Can you study the historical materials carefully? At least half of the chapter is in the wrong word count. No wonder the grades are not good.

Situation Chart of the Qin King's Zhengtong Four Years

The author's next book will be about the Anshi Rebellion. He traveled to An Qingxu, killed Anlu Mountain, replaced the Tang Dynasty, and established the Yan Dynasty. The title of the book will be Yan Shizu🤭🤭

Does this book have any flaws? Yes. The part where the protagonist defends the gate and endures humiliation and heavy burdens. It's really ridiculous. After all, he is the commander of a thousand people, and let the general behave like that. Magical indeed. But! Except for this paragraph, this book is really good. The intention is very profound. The difficulties at the beginning of the uprising are very well written. Each character has his or her own thoughts, calculations, and demands. How to maintain the stability of rights, etc., Is very brilliant. The writing is very realistic, and there are reflections in the plot. It can be seen that there are profound thoughts. Hey, I'm very sorry. This is also the case with the market. The first order for this book was over 600, which I think is too little, too little. Summarize the reasons. A failed plot. Update is slow. The selected historical period is unfamiliar. Market readers, readers only like those that are fun and hold the protagonist high. The rest is good. Some people say that the author cannot write war scenes. Actually, I don't think so. Rather, it presents the author's details appropriately. A fight with hundreds of people, a small battle, what to write about. A quick glance is enough. In my opinion, apart from the above, there is nothing wrong with it. The first order is not everything. It depends on future development. Xuanjian also ordered more than six hundred for the first time. You can't say what's going to happen in the future. I am quite emotional. And I am very optimistic about this book. Treat the reader protagonist as a treasure and cannot bear any setbacks. It is already the trend of online writing nowadays. This makes this kind of book that links reality and has a profound plot even more rare. Moreover, this book still has a lot of fun, and the places where it should be fun are not bad either. Not completely abusive. As long as the author stabilizes his mentality and maintains quality, his results will definitely improve little by little. I believe in my vision. As long as the author writes seriously, doesn't mess around, and insists on completing the book, he will definitely succeed. Definitely not, all readers cannot bear the grievance. There will definitely be readers with high tolerance who will not appreciate this book. Internet writing is not entirely fun, but it can also be fun and write profound themes at the same time. Leave a message. Leave a paw print. Looking at the results, I doubt my aesthetic ability. I can't tell the difference between good and bad books. This book is great because it lasts a long time. It is not an Internet garbage that will collapse after a wave of expectations. What's the point of building up expectations, getting good results, but then quickly falling apart? But people can make money, and they are really awesome. Alas alas. Bad money drives out good money. Capital is like this, and so is the market. No way. I don't believe that I am not good at aesthetics, I will leave this post to prove it. What a pity. The results shouldn't be so miserable.