Warm Dragon

Except for the background, the general framework of this book is almost exactly the same as Da Long Hangs. Maybe it's because I've read too much Shuangwen, but I always feel it's very bland, that kind of feeling that I seem to have read but not read anything at all. The family is happy, there is a dragon at the beginning, and the journey has been smooth sailing. The snow ghost in the background feels like a resource now, without any pressure. The dragon is unfinished, but even if it is unfinished, it is a rare classic novel in Western fantasy farming. I hope this novel can surpass the dragon. In short, this book is very dull.

As a fantasy writer who engages in daily routines every day, the protagonist has no desire to explore the world and has no motivation to read it.

It can be seen that the author wants to make handsomeness a meme, but the method is not working. It is mentioned more than ten or twenty times in more than one hundred chapters. Every time I see it, I have the same feeling, why is this happening again? In it, upgrading is basically supplementary. Power infrastructure, treasure acquisition and various miscellaneous matters take up too much text. Generally, it is an upgrade flow, borrowing various magical treasures to advance. The main line inside is too slow. Others have harvested abundantly after planting, and there is a complete sense of expectation. You have several elf bugs, all of which have advanced. There are more than a hundred chapters, and you have planted a lot but can't see the harvest. Those who have upgraded don't know the combat power level inside. They suddenly arranged Sword Butterfly, and there is no description of Sword Butterfly bringing superiority to others. It just keeps accumulating, but it won't be released. In general, the thrill of farming is not enough, and the thrill of upgrading is not enough. What is left is the novel world view that keeps readers interested.

I don't quite understand why the author wants to be so slow Even if the volume is small, the development is still so slow I saw in the latest chapter that the contracted dragon can directly penetrate the meridians, then why doesn't the protagonist contract with ice cream? Don't say that one mountain cannot tolerate two tigers. I mentioned before that the Shadowflame Dragon is Sleeping The real point is that I feel too lazy to read it. I think I can still accept all kinds of lightly updated books, but this book is really unbearable.

The more I look at him, the more poisonous he becomes. He keeps dragging his feet and letting it go. His three-sword style, I am really speechless😒

Didn't you cancel your order? Or is it that the average subscription is more, so that you continue to write some off-topic content so brainlessly? Upgrading Little Menglong depends on just the two of you, can you just eat a little bit? Why waste dragon breath in the early stage? If it doesn't work, I'll cut it and rewrite it Personal combat power is seriously separated from the manor. Isn't the fantasy upgrade article better than what you wrote? Do you think your combat power system is well written? What everyone is reading is your farming articles. It's not because you play upgrading. It's because you don't update enough. You write a lot of articles about upgrading and fighting monsters well. There are not many articles about farming that are good.

I came here because of the farming article in the introduction. The early stage is indeed well written, with good writing and good plot. But since the appearance of the Snow Giant. This book has changed from a farming story about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, to a long-proud astronomy story about winning and winning without limit.

Isn't that Eunuch Bai?

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If you fall behind, you will be beaten. Don't you understand this principle? The routines from five or six years ago are still being used today, and I can't even say that, but are they just trolls? You are really 6, eat something good.

It was better than Dalong in the early stage. Dalong was a stingy father and a weird sister. However, he kept clearing up later. He was so angry at the second brush that he didn't dare to brush it again. The protagonist's parents in this book are loving. This is very good. I didn't feel angry after reading it.

Both this book and The Great Dragon are very creative, creating a magnificent world of dragons and magic, and the definition of dragons is also very interesting. The early and middle stages of the book are particularly fascinating, but the biggest problem is that it has to touch the origin of the world in the later stages, and then it collapses. As a novel about dragons and magic, is it really necessary to touch the origin of the world and control the entire universe? I think there is no need to worry about macro-problems like how the world came about, how did dragons come about, and why dragons are like this. As a legend of sword and magic, it is quite perfect to tell the story to the protagonist establishing a dynasty and solving the immediate crisis. If you have to solve all crises once and for all and control everything, it will bring about the collapse of the entire plot. When the dragon died, it collapsed here, and the book collapsed here again. I hope the author can learn a lesson.

This book should be about humans and dragons complementing each other. The protagonist scientifically develops the territory, and then makes the accompanying dragons stronger and stronger, so that each other can conquer the world. As a result, the territory is useless now. The main character Tiantian Qiyu can take care of everything. He only has more than 600 pictures to ride a dragon... This is really "cool". The protagonist sighs that he will be cool, cool cool cool cool cool cool cool cool cool

The first chapter is disgusting. Everyone else has Western names, but the protagonist's family uses such bullshit Russell and Roland...

It is recommended to completely copy the settings of the dragon is dead. The ones that have been successful are still my own works, so there is nothing wrong with it. It can be regarded as making up for the regret of a bad ending. I just don't know if the author will have a chance to make a comeback this time. To be honest, it was a pity that the ending was unfinished when the dragon died. The author can become a god if he works harder. No matter what the reason is, I hope the author will work hard.

Write well, author, and don't lose your fighting power. Don't use your personal power to fight one against ten thousand, otherwise farming will be pointless. Farming, elf character, population, economy, development, equipment, army quality, legions, etc... There is so much to write about. You must be more correct in your three views. If you surpass the dragon, you will fail. Learn from the mistakes of the dragon and try to write 3 million words.

Haiyue said that his ending was a tribute to you, an old-timer.

The current article is a bit disappointing. The author portrayed the dragon in such a legendary way, but the fights were all based on hand-to-hand combat. It was as powerful as Dragon Mother's dragon, and it disappeared in an instant.

To be honest, this book is really good and the updates are great. I don't understand why the score is so poor.

Bai Yuhan is always bad at writing the later stages, especially the ending. Don't start a new book if you don't have a good idea. He always writes great things in the early and middle stages, but ends in an anticlimax in the middle and late stages. This will really ruin his character...

I feel like this book is better than The Dragon Is Dead. At that time, I really enjoyed watching the dragon die, but now I want the protagonist to level up all the time and level up very quickly. This one pays more attention to details and rationality. I like watching the protagonist get along with the fantasy beast and his family

It's unfinished again. It's been very bad since the birth of Menglong. What the hell was it written? Dalong has canceled the sequel. Does your book have anything to do with Dalong? Oh, the elf borrowed some settings, but the elf in your book is useless at all, it's useless at all, garbage Bai Yuhan

I haven't read it for a few months. Why is this book so popular now?😁 Don't you think the book club group interferes with writing novels? Why can't I write it myself? This Baron Charles is no longer prime minister, and I don't know if he has fallen in love with the wildcat sisters.

Rubbish, what was written in the later stage? I can still make up my mind in the early stage to help the author justify himself, say he is realistic, etc. What is this now? Is the combination of Chinese and Western so perfect? The Sword of Fire, after sublimation, the Burning Sword What about the Sword of Wind, the Sword of Thunder, the Sword of Yin It's not that I don't know how to write, it's just to fool the readers The Burning Sword, the Sword of the Burning Sun, the Hurricane Speed ​​Sword, any name you choose is better than the Burning Sword And when the dragon comes out in the later stage, the battle scene is written like a three-year-old child fighting. You place a field, I place a field, you suppress my field, I break your field, I use a special move, the opponent is dismembered, the opponent is resurrected, the opponent is weakened, I use a special move again, the opponent dies What is written

😄 Dalong is good in front, but not in the back. After I finished writing, I felt that I was good enough to write about other subjects, but the response was not good. Dragons and Elves are back again. The front is good again, but the back is straight away Now it's a big deal if you can subscribe. The reputation and strength let readers understand clearly.

Personally, I feel that the success of Dalong is due to the family's farming tradition. If this book can make it clearer about farming➕cultivation➕the family may be able to surpass Dalong. It's a pity that the combat power is as low as ever.

Unknowingly, I have read more than 300 chapters, but when I think about it carefully, it seems that I haven't read anything. The main character is mediocre. He just relies on Menglong to pretend to be a slap in the face. There are not even 300 chapters of flying dragons. Riding a giant dragon has 700 or 800 chapters. Delete the book.

It's been over three hundred chapters, and I can't even ride a flying dragon. And the 70 chapters where you get the dragon egg are all useless work. When you said you wanted Black Oil Dragon, I really looked forward to your future farming and the possibility of developing industry and the like. But now these seventy chapters have done nothing. So much to do but not go. For example, you are not the only one who owns the black dragon. Why don't you go buy some black oil and research and use it first? In your case, aren't you going to make an internal combustion engine or something? I just don't want to go, I just have to wait for the dragon to come out. If you really want to, you can do it after the dragon comes out, but don't be so impatient. There are more than 300 pictures, and I can't even ride a flying dragon. When will the dragon ride next? A total of seven or eight hundred chapters can be written at this pace to ride the dragon. It's almost over. After riding the dragon, do you want to finish it casually? The previous article about farming was so good. Why don't you write at all now? It's in that water. I don't believe that the recent subscription has not been deleted. If you do this, it won't end until the end.

I used to have sex with Dalong for free. At that time, I was still looked down upon by students. Now that I am working, I can make up for the regrets in my heart. Come on author 👏