The Knight of Light Plants a Sun in the Endless Night

The author still doesn't know what his advantages are! There is no need to be lofty. It is best to limit your peak strength to one planet and then develop it slowly. Now too many people have forgotten this kind of track! Really, the good-looking things are often from the front, and the author doesn't need to go to this invincible track at all. There are more fairy bugs, more dragons, and more different animals and plants! The reason why Dalong died back then was because of his creativity and cultivation. Taking his time and introducing us to the fantasy world is the right track for the author!

You still don't understand your advantage, it's not being tall or being a woman (to be honest, the female characters you write are basically a pile of shit💩), your advantage is western fantasy like farming (Elf Bug series, Gemstone Metal Dragon)

After reading Chapter 35, I can't stand this paragraph. The protagonist and the countess are having sex, but the lady suddenly wants to transfer her property. She doesn't want to hand over the title to the Changxiangtao family, and she also wants to use the family's wealth to train the protagonist. This gives me a sense of immediacy, like using the original wife's money to support a lover after an affair, or the partner's lover embezzling the husband's family assets together. In short, no matter how innocent and pitiful the author writes about the Countess, after reading this, I can't like the protagonist and the lady. She looks very inferior and characterless. Maybe there is something wrong with the author's writing in this paragraph. All in all, it feels bad and inexplicably disgusting.

How dare the little sunflower steal the throne of the sun god? 😎

It's a bit unsettling, so it's over, 1 million words. . . But at least the author couldn't finish the book despite having so few subscriptions. It's terrible. It's not as interesting as the book you cut off in half. I read more than a dozen chapters of that book and planned to keep it. After a while, I lost it. This book is just killing your personal IP. Look at it. It's a story about farming with an elf and giant dragon. In fact, it has basically nothing to do with it. There is basically no description of farming. Not to mention the death of the big dragon, even the warm dragon is far inferior. Maybe the author felt that the book would be really doomed if the eunuch himself was in the vest, so he bit the bullet and finished it.

Don't you find it embarrassing to write about these wings? Purely disgusting people. A routine that has not changed for thousands of years, I open my mouth and shut my mouth, I am the sun, I am the savior, I am so embarrassed that I get goosebumps when I watch it

After seeing more than 200, the author started to get sick again. This baron became an earl without doing anything. You said that it doesn't matter if the protagonist is granted the title after the founding of the country. Now I can't stand the viciousness of the writing, so I originally planned to book it all.

At present, I think Dalong and Tanedian Lianwu are the two best-written books, but it's a pity that both of them are unfinished. Have you made money and stopped thinking about writing? I didn't take the harem route in the past, but this book just opened a harem. Books that open a harem will definitely die.

It's too complicated and messy. The three main plots of farming, elves, and dragons are enough to last you a lifetime. If you have to create a bunch of messy skills and occupations to work part-time, it will be useless for advancing the plot. The lightning strike technique you learned earlier will be useless in the next hundreds of chapters, and the power system will be messed up. The combination of a priest and a knight to form a knight of light was acceptable, similar to a paladin, but later on, a part-time ranger was given a headache, and I immediately lost the desire to continue reading! ! ! The most indispensable thing for the development of farming in the extraordinary world is time. If your protagonist always becomes invincible after two or three years, and the development of your territory and subordinates cannot keep up, you will completely negate the system and characters you wrote in the early stage, and it will inevitably be unfinished in the later stage.

I read the introduction, and it's not a work of painstaking effort. This makes it difficult for me to handle it.