The Dragon Knight's Happiness

Lao Bai's new book is paradoxical to Da Long Dao. The similar power system and background pattern hide many novel highlights. First of all, this book has lost its impetuousness and returned to the feeling of "Heavy Truck". The details are described to a higher level, and the details are vivid and interesting at the same time. This kind of writing style is not inferior to some famous fantasy novels. If it hadn't still retained some of the flavor from the past, I would have suspected that someone had ghostwritten it, allowing people to slowly appreciate the fun without it being obviously refreshing. The setting is not too complicated or monotonous. On the contrary, it is much richer and more substantial than Dalong. The narrative is mixed with many interesting settings, and it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. It also combines some real-life historical data to make the noble hierarchy look clear, reasonable and rigorous. Moreover, the number and power levels of dragons are more realistic than those of big dragons. However, any novel must be interesting first. The new book is slightly less exciting, but this should be because the plot advances more solidly and slowly. Lao Bai has experienced the glory of Dalong, so he must have his own opinions on how to write exciting points. We look forward to combining the exciting explosion of "The Dragon Is Dead" with the current calm and quiet narrative style to create a new brilliance! But the problem of fewer plot changes due to the smaller upgrade space of the dragon in the later stage also needs to be solved. If you can upgrade quickly and show off while still leaving room, it should be an ideal situation The shortcomings are that the golden finger is a bit rushed and abrupt, and the causes and consequences of the dragon's smoke should be more natural. It depends on how the author writes it. I hope this pitfall can be rounded off. The originally awkward naming style in the Eastern system has a unique charm in Western fantasy, which is hard to complain about. The author also has a unique method of transliterating Western names + free translation of surnames, and it is very interesting. Well, I can't praise it too much, lest he get carried away, but it is indeed easier to find the advantages than the disadvantages - especially in a good novel (emmm seems to be boasting again...). As for some of Lao Bai's previous incidents, if this book can bring you a good reading experience, I also hope that everyone can forgive him a little. Seeing a good novel is our original goal. I believe every author wants to write a good book and bring happiness to readers. Some things may be forced. The author also needs our understanding and support. Everyone's encouragement is the motivation for the author's creation! If Lao Bai has done anything wrong to everyone before, let him repay it with one excellent work after another! The above humble opinion must be deficient. I hope everyone will correct me and add to it.

Please help me, Lao Bai. If you keep writing this book, you will definitely get good results. After all, you are the Twelve Heavenly Kings, and Xihuan has always been late in getting good results.

I want to ask if you know Three Days and Two Sleeps. The first two books were carefully written but had poor results, but they were all excellent. In the end, Thriller Paradise became a hit. Lao Bai, even if you don't get good grades in writing, you find problems and work hard to finish writing, even if you don't make any money, and others say that your grades in "Big Dragon" are due to luck, so what, if you have developed a skill in writing, why worry about not being popular but not getting grades? If you are impetuous, you will become impetuous as soon as you become popular. How can you stay popular for a long time? ? Bye now. . . . . Lao Bai, Da Long, Liszt, your books are not inferior to mine, right? . . . 😃

Change your vest and start over again. Your account is useless. No one dares to look at this eunuch.

Come on, let's start! 1. Eunuch with about fifty thousand words 2. Eunuch with about one hundred thousand words 3. Eunuch with about one hundred and fifty thousand words 4. Eunuch with about three hundred thousand words 5. Eunuch with about five hundred thousand words 6. End I bet Eunuch of about one hundred and fifty thousand words

Can't the author learn from Tang San and Tudou? After a book became popular, they followed the template and wrote the next one, Douluo Dalu 123, Dou Po and Wu Dong, written on the same continent. The author also wrote it according to the world view of Da Long Die. As long as it is not a prison, someone will definitely read it. After all, there are few books on farming in the West. You have a ready-made and mature system that has been popular here. It is honest and practical. After all, there are only a few authors who write urban fire like an eagle eats a chicken, and also write fantasy.

Hurry up and go to another site to open a new book 😁

It's been more than an hour since I posted the book, and there are only so many people. My character is almost completely ruined. . .

The new book is good. Lao Bai, you must persist. Your strength can compete with the great gods. If you persist, persist, you must write more than one million words at least. Lao Jg is very damaging to your character.

After watching the news, I have to say that capitalism is getting increasingly ugly.