The Gloomy Immortal

The same routine is used too much. The first part is fine, but I feel a little tired of it after seeing it. Multiple routines are alternated. Every time I go to a place, conflicts will immediately occur, killings will be demonstrated, and then the young and the old will come. No matter how high you are, you must protect your shortcomings. , It is always like this every time. I have tried several conflict scenes, and skipping them does not affect my understanding of the plot. I feel that these enemies in high realms have the same mentality as in low realms, irritable, arrogant and arrogant. If the conflict occurs and does not ease, you must kill to pay for it.

The map of the first Shenzang Realm immediately changed. The character has become wiser, and the neatness of the protagonist's previous actions is gone. Let's not talk about forcibly suppressing the protagonist's realm. Even if the protagonist has a golden elixir, it is very slow to do a small Qi training. Isn't your favorite part about the protagonist's ability to be reborn, dimensionally reduced, and crushed? The first map was pretty good, but the second one just turned sour for some low-level slap-in-the-face routines. What a pity

In this issue of Sanjiang, I groaned that I was still alive after testing the poison. Who can see it?

What is the protagonist's personality like? , Are you cold or cold? You won't mind your own business, right? Is he a lone ranger? , I don't like too many women, it's best to just ignore them in one go

The author's fairy tales are so right. This book made me see the shadow of Daoguo. I hope more people can help recommend 🤭

The protagonist has an unlucky physique, he always gets into trouble. He fights the young and the old come out. He pretends to be cool and fights and kills all the time. It's a rubbish novel.

I'm very curious. Wouldn't it be enough to just say that the owner of this body is dead? I can use this body to explore the secret realm. I have to do a lot of things. Or I can directly tell them the materials I want and exchange them with my practice experience. When my strength is almost restored, wouldn't it be good to leave the small world and find a way to break through and become an immortal?

A lot of thought went into the opening. A very novel setting and a very novel beginning. But the further I went on, the more I committed the same problem as all online writers. In order to rush the manuscript, I did not polish my work carefully. Falling into the old routine of upgrading, killing monsters, and changing maps. Moreover, the character plot settings fall into the general casual novel mode. That is, full of hostility. However, this is not unique to the author of this article, but is basically the case for all online article authors. So there are fewer and fewer so-called great gods. After all, everyone is a worker and needs to eat.

How can I put it, it's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to throw it away. The author's writing is okay, but it feels a bit empty. In fact, it is more interesting to write something from scratch, but it cannot describe the psychology of an old monster who has lived for hundreds of years. This kind of emptiness can easily be boring to everyone.

The villains all follow the same mold, confident and then shocked