The Gloomy Immortal

The same formula has been used too many times. It's okay at first, but it gets a bit tiresome later on. There should be more formulas to switch things up. Every time, they go to a certain place, immediately cause conflict, kill to demonstrate, and then the younger and older ones come along. No matter how high their level, they always protect their own. It's always the same.

The game immediately changed after leaving the first map of the Divine Treasure Realm. The characters became less intelligent, and the crispness of the protagonist's previous attacks disappeared. Leaving aside the forced suppression of the protagonist's cultivation level, even a Golden Core cultivator's fight against a Qi Refining cultivator felt incredibly tedious.

This issue of Sanjiang features books that survived poison testing but are still groaning. Which one is worth reading?

What's the protagonist's personality like? Is he cold and aloof? Will he be a busybody? Is he a lone wolf? Does he dislike too many women? Women are best left unmentioned.

The author's fantasy style is just right! This book reminds me of Dao Guo. I hope you can recommend it to more people. 🤭

The protagonist seems to have a knack for bad luck; wherever he goes, trouble follows. He beats up the younger ones, and the older ones always show up. He's constantly showing off and fighting. This is trash novel.

I'm curious, why not just say the original owner of this body is dead? Why not just say you're a powerful being using this body to explore the secret realm? Why make such a fuss? Or simply tell them what materials you want and exchange them for cultivation experience. Once your strength has recovered enough, leave the small world and find a way to break through to immortality, wouldn't that be better?

The opening was meticulously crafted, with a novel setting and a fresh start. However, as it progressed, it fell into the common trap of many online novelists: rushing to meet deadlines without polishing their work. It succumbed to the cliché of leveling up, fighting monsters, and changing maps.

Well, it's the kind of story that's neither good nor bad, but not worth keeping. The author's writing is alright, but it feels a bit empty. It would have been more interesting to write about something coming from nothing, but the author couldn't quite capture the psychology of an ancient monster who has lived for hundreds of years. This kind of vagueness easily makes the story boring for readers.

Villains are all cut from the same cloth: confident, then shocked.