The Road to Immortality Begins as a Hunter

The most anticipated book recently, the 20-year-old bookworm author should know that it's time to do whatever you want 😉 If it doesn't look good, just delete it and leave without worrying about it. I just want to post this to tell the author that the book is not good enough.

Some book friends said that when Tian Bao died in Chapter 36, the protagonist was cold-blooded and cursed the author. This was very baffling. First of all, after Tian Bao was injured, the protagonist spent money to hire a doctor for him, and then went to help him get revenge. The protagonist's wife also gave him good medicine. Before, the protagonist gave him a hunting license, taught him archery, and took him into business together. How can the protagonist not be called cold-blooded? Even to himself, it's nothing more than that, right?

This novel is one of the most beautiful novels I have ever read. At first I thought it was some kind of harem romance, but I didn't expect it to sound different. It sounded a bit like a solipsistic protagonist. The sofa is decisive and not sloppy at all. Before killing the enemy, first observe the opponent's condition. What is the opponent's state? What force is it and when is the best time to kill the opponent? This novel completely captures that feeling. If you are affectionate and righteous, if you don't have the Holy Mother's heart, you can do it if you can, and if you can't do it, don't do it. This is what ordinary people think. It is also the psychology of the public. Who is born to be the protagonist? Being born a protagonist is basically impossible to happen to us. If there was, it couldn't be us.

This novel is really good, especially the protagonist. I feel that it has written different roles such as the immortal, the master behind the scenes, the chess player, and the player. The plot development is also unique and unconventional. It does not fall into the routine of other novels of constantly fighting monsters and upgrading. Xiao Pian is also very good, his father's little cotton jacket.

I declare that the more I write this book, the better it gets. In theory, the previous Orion part should be deleted. The first part was too cowardly, too effeminate, and half-scrupulous, so I was scolded a lot by readers, and then it became normal later on. If we do this earlier, we can retain at least half more readers. The first twenty or thirty chapters of the Orion part are all failures and poisonous points. It would be best to delete them directly.

The author is great. In the several maps he has opened so far, the buried lines have all been laid out very successfully, and the endings are also very reasonable! The level of the Gray Line of Grass Snake is on the same level as that of some ancient novels, and it is much better than some of the current upgraded monster-killing techniques. It's just that the system after the 5th-level technique was not sorted out well, and the 3rd-level heaven, earth, human soul system was not laid out well at the 4th level, so it felt a bit messy, but the flaws are not concealed! Ever since the emperor was assassinated, the protagonist has become a bit like Sima Yi (the emperor's assassination is a bit too simple, I think readers feel the same as me)

The plot after Blood Knife Patriarch has a pretentious and profound imitation of literary youth, and the literary youth flavor does not conform to the thoughts and interests of contemporary people, and the imitation of literary youth is even more unreasonable. The role of hanging is like a joke. In the middle and later stages, a large chapter is devoted to how the protagonist achieves enlightenment and breaks the mirror. Deleting the hanging and replacing it with natural understanding has no effect. The combat power system is purely redundant and complicated, unintuitive and does not function as well as its settings. It is a mess, but it still feels like a useless dog. I skipped the article later and couldn't watch it at all. My repeated admonitions about the Ghost Realm completely wiped out my interest in understanding the origin of the Ghost Realm and destroying ghosts. The protagonist seems to have a different setting from Shuangwen Xiaobai's novel, but in fact it just goes from the extreme of destroying everyone at every turn to the other extreme of waste gaining power and virtue but not matching it. But I can understand this. I am always just a person who writes a book, and the strongman mentality is all based on speculation. The emotional interaction is considered delicate, but it still has a b-like imitation flavor, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. For most readers who are attracted by the title of the book, I suggest that there is no need to read the plot after the Blood Knife Ancestor. For those readers who want to read the superiority of the four classics in online articles, you can order them all.

The combat power in this book is really weird. From the beginning to the end, the nine levels are divided into 7 to 9, which is normal, 4 to 6, which is just barely enough, and 1 to 3, which is simply unreadable. At the end, the second level is regarded as gods, demons, saints, and the first level is the way of heaven. It makes my scalp numb. Under normal circumstances, would a single level like heaven be included? And the power system was changed midway, and the change was not clear. In the end, it was not written in detail at all, what Spring and Autumn brushwork It is better to apply other things, such as innate and acquired. After all, starting from level 6, it doesn't look like a martial artist, but more like someone who cultivates immortality. Starting from level 3, it feels like The author himself couldn't understand the writing As for the plot, I can watch it except for the part near the end. Personally, I didn't see the part I wanted to see. After all, in the later stage, it insists on covering domestic history, the Classic of Mountains and Seas, the Great Wilderness, etc., And then starts the Spring and Autumn writing style, and the time-travel and return is just like that, which feels useless. It's fun to watch the protagonist in the first catastrophe and the restart, but the feeling of immortality is still too little, especially the part where the immortality is too forgetful, from passionate to gradually cold, to the return of feelings, and then to the real supreme forgetfulness.

Now, it's one of my favorite novels. The front is normal, but the world, realm, characters and so on are all laid out in the back. There is a feeling of enlightenment. This is the first book I am currently pursuing, if I didn't have money. You have the Silver Alliance. Especially the chapter about becoming a mortal, it was directly sublimated. The highlight of the whole novel

The previous writing was good, but when it came to marrying a wife to kill the emperor, I felt that the three aspects were inconsistent. You can marry a wife for beauty, you can marry a wife for profit, you can also marry a wife for yourself. But I don't like it very much to marry a wife for murder and turn the festive red into blood red. He is not a weakling. He has a trump card to kill the emperor, but he chose the most humble way. Brother, you are a jerk, not an old gutter monster who does everything possible.