Tokyo: Unnatural Forensics

Tokyo Forensic Doctor's Harem Romance (×) I'm in Japan, handling corpses, identifying abalone, and even becoming a top scholar (✓)

I read up to chapter three but couldn't continue. The protagonist seemed both awkward and abstract. He was transferred to forensic medicine because his words offended patients and caused numerous complaints. I felt it was completely unnecessary for him to sacrifice his promising future to become a forensic doctor, especially since his family came to settle such a trivial matter.

Wasn't the first autopsy scene a bit too much? The old man seemed like a disrespectful old scoundrel, always causing trouble at home, tormenting his son and daughter-in-law at the slightest provocation, and eventually couldn't take it anymore and was killed. After death, he even said it was the consequence of being unfilial and that he deserved to be given a proper rite of passage.

To be honest, the scope of the story is really quite broad right now. Does the author have the ability to keep it complete? There are a lot of forensic and detective details, a lot of romance, some power struggles, and glimpses into the supernatural world. If you were to write all of this content clearly and thoroughly, it would be impossible to finish in less than seven or eight hundred chapters. Anything less than that would either be an unfinished or abandoned project.

The most immediate feeling after reading the first few chapters is that it's very awkward. On one hand, it describes the protagonist as a transmigrator who has no sense of belonging to this world, and on the other hand, it describes the protagonist as feeling very angry about the darkness of society and wanting to take responsibility for performing autopsies.

Hopefully, the author can figure out what everyone wants to see. People want to see forensic investigations, not low-brow political commentary.

The author inserts too much personal bias and pads the word count to an extreme degree. Aside from these two points, it's alright. He told him not to include his own agenda, but he ignored him. I got ten days of free reading with my new QQ Reading membership (just kidding!).

Readers aren't paying to read your testimonials or listen to your tired tropes. Please put that stuff away, okay? 😥

The beginning was absurd, and it was difficult to maintain the plot from the start. Even changing it to reveal the truth without letting a single criminal escape would have been acceptable. However, considering the author's name, I tolerated it and forced myself to continue reading. Adding Ju-on and some supernatural elements later on would have made it watchable.

I'm relieved to see everyone criticizing the sword formation.