An Ordinary Fantasy Adventure in Faerun

Having read Abyss, Star Forger, Green Dragon's Nest, Illithid, Marry Sister (Shadow), and Throne of Shadows, do you know how much I look forward to this purebred DND, especially the background of Baldur's Gate 3, which gives me a feeling of playing for the second time, a familiar pleasure, and like the person above said, time will give the answer.

Damn it, why did you choose the physics and melee professions? The legal system is the benefit of time travel. Bye bye.

DND with Baldur's Gate 3 as the background has no poisonous points for the time being, and the writing is smooth. Although there are too many settings and the plot is a bit slow, for an old DND reader like me, this is already super exciting, especially since I have been blogging for a long time. They say the author is water, because you have never seen The Star Caster of Pagoda, which is known as the number one DND in the past two years. Although it is true, it is a real water setting. Unlike this book, the setting of the author can at least promote a little plot. I really, really hope that the author can keep writing. I will go to the post bar to recommend it to you. As readers, we don't want the author to generate electricity for love. Our sincere ability is limited, so we can only try our best to provide you with comfort. Come on. Time will give the answer. If this book has one million words written at the current level, it will definitely become popular in the dnd section. In recent years, there have been all nondescript dragon-style dnds. Serious dnds either have poor writing skills or too many poisonous points. Even food and grass are difficult to find. This book is already a classic.

It's overly gamified, and the first few chapters also have a lot of settings, which makes it unbearable for an old guy like me who has read dozens of pseudo-DND novels.

After seeing Chapter 14, I finally settled in Bengbu. I feel uneasy about killing a wolf in order to take office. If you are an indigenous protagonist, that is reasonable. Why are you pretending to be a modern person?

I'm very surprised. For me, what I like to see in online game novels is the process of character identity creation. This kind of straightforward and dense information output is very enjoyable to read. The first five chapters are so comfortable to read I don't know much about games such as Baldur's Gate. For me, it is a background similar to Heroes of Might and Magic or Diablo, which allows the author to have an extremely profound world as a basis for writing. What attracts me is how the author writes Some people in the comment area compared this book to Star Caster. In fact, it can be seen that the writing style of this book is slightly lacking. One shortcoming is what the protagonist's motivation is. If it is just a game of life, the upper limit is too low. The protagonist chose a tiefling for the strength of the character. This is an unusual character (abnormal), which undoubtedly requires higher standards for the story See the subscription, and rate it with Liangcao+ to see how well the author grasps the climax of the story.

I've finished reading it all, and my opinion is don't read it. The description of Goldfinger in the early stage was good, but its true colors were revealed immediately. The author's plot has no tension, and the description of the fighting scenes is soft and waxy, which can be called bland. Along with it, the writing style is average, and the portrayal of the characters is mediocre. Even though the painting draws on various outstanding characters from Baldur's Gate 3, it is still a mess. It can be said that there are enough characters but none of them stand out. Regarding the improvement of combat power, I wrote whatever I thought of. There is a lot of nonsense. I suggest the author not to open a second book.

This book is a long-winded one. The text seems to be rich in details, but in fact the information density is very low. A lot of space is wasted on repeating inner monologues, listing irrelevant and trivial environmental details, talking about cars and wheels over and over, etc., Which does not advance the plot well at all. The character-related settings (equipment, abilities) originally used to support ability enhancement and plot advancement are also the same as the inner monologue. They are all self-talking words that are repeated back and forth. Even a piece of equipment can write the same ability description over and over again in three or four paragraphs and hundreds of words, which makes people feel numb. The graduation thesis is here after starting from the starting point, right? In fact, if this book deletes the inner monologue Che Lulu's words, deletes half of the water's setting Che Lulu's words, and uses all the remaining content to promote the main plot or even the branch plot, then this book will definitely be a masterpiece in the genre. However, the author's writing style is like this, and it seems that he is trying to change it, but overall it seems to be inconsistent, and the rhythm has not changed much. I have entered and exited this book three times. I wanted to read this subject, but I couldn't bear to exit after clicking in. The author still has some writing skills, but his desire to talk nonsense is so overwhelming that he can't resist it. It's a pity. (I reasonably suspect that the author is a group setting party, and created a lot of setting materials such as environmental descriptions, social details, character biographies, and subtle inner changes, and then the hoarding addiction broke out, and he was reluctant to choose and throw them all into the text. Try to rape the reader's brain...) (Author, this is a disease, it needs to be cured 😅)

I really regret reading more than 150 of them, they are so long-winded! ! ! There are a lot of psychological descriptions at every turn. To do something, you have to go through, plan, change, analyze, determine, act, new changes, explain the reasons, explain the situation, psychological description. At chapter 10, I think it will be better in the future, in chapter 50, I think it will be better in the next chapter, and after 150 chapters... I can screw you! I've never seen anyone so verbose! ! I shouldn't see people who continue to spend money to buy content when they tend to be verbose, just like buying a fresh meat bun, with a meter thick skin and a few centimeters of filling! ! No matter how delicious it is, it won't even taste good in your mouth! Full!

For the first time, I understand the concept of "hydrology". It's really full of nonsense. Author, please teach me how to write a paper.