Longevity: From the Great Zhou Divine Dynasty

Realm division Martial arts: skin and flesh, muscles and bones, internal strengthening, marrow cleansing, blood exchange, holding elixirs, divine will, dharma, human immortality Immortal Tao: nourishing essence, collecting qi, entering the orifice, gangsha, jade liquid, golden elixir, mysterious light, Yin Shen, Yuanshen Zhenren, Chunyang Zhenjun

Can't this type of novel use a different formula? No matter what the protagonist was like before, or even what his personality was like, or what his experiences were, as long as the protagonist starts practicing, all kinds of messy things will happen. Things that other cultivators cannot encounter after hundreds of years of practice, the protagonist can experience in one year, and many times more things can be done to him. In short, you have to do a lot of bad things to be the protagonist, otherwise you won't even be considered a supporting role. Can you change your mind and find the protagonist in all kinds of troubles? If you really want to write it like the protagonist, it would be good if only two of the 1,000 cultivators can survive. Those two still rely on luck. The protagonist is the protagonist who has many troubles. Can you write it in a different way?

The protagonist's IQ also has problems, and he has joined the big faction, and he doesn't know how to find something similar to the "Earth Spirit Placenta" to repair his cheats and enhance his foundation. I guess the protagonist will not look for it even if he ascends to Yangshen, because the author forgot that there is such a setting.

The protagonist is almost like a fool. He can't hide anything. Moreover, the protagonist is a time traveler. Just write about the indigenous people. He doesn't know anything.

To tell a joke, the skills for seeking immortality in the seventh level of martial arts can't even be found in the first level. Immortality is only considered by the lower class people. Who doesn't know each other in front of the seventh level? As long as you are in the same world, intersections are unavoidable, but in the end, this is the skill that I asked you for because of guilt? Are you kidding me?😡

We were given by the boss the boss gave the novice protagonist three powerful thief talismans in chapter 3, namely invisibility, running away, and one-time attack, and asked the protagonist to enter the village quietly without using a gun. After giving the boss a rubbish first impression, the novice protagonist turned around and told his friends. Some readers said that it was inappropriate to tell a friend about the opportunity, but the author immediately arranged for the protagonist to take the opportunity without even looking at it, and immediately split it with his friend. At least let the protagonist take a look at what it is and see if it's suitable for him to divide! But the author doesn't want to divide it directly. This is a unique author, let me tell you about it. 🤣🤣🤣

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that there is nothing wrong with the plot and writing. It's just that the character of Pig's Foot is a bit false and poisonous. The Pig's Foot family is very kind to Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot also enjoys the family's kindness to Pig's Foot with peace of mind. However, Pig's Foot's state has a feeling of being distant from the family and feeling like it is separated from the family at any time. Is this how the time traveler's sense of isolation is written?

Wherever the protagonist goes, there are people who don't like him 😅. Other people's families are like brothers and sisters, and they are all crazy about protecting others. The family relationship of the protagonist's family is weak. On the surface, they appear to be harmonious. They solve problems by themselves. The protagonist's own character is also imprudent. . . . . 6

The upgrade was too slow. At the beginning, I even boasted about my golden finger, but ended up still hanging around at the lowest level for a long time.