The Eternal Immortal Dynasty: Starting as a Low-Ranking Clerk

With the idea of ​​cultivating immortality as its cover, is it actually a hegemony novel in the late Han Dynasty that started in the late Han Dynasty? Anyway, let's take a look, there's no big problem at the moment. If you read it as a farming novel, there is too little description of family development, and many have been forgotten, such as the family's spiritual well, two pastures, etc.

Who is this? I have finished reading this book. Do you have any other works? Worship

The worldview structure is good. The writing style is just too wordy. In the first few chapters, I read over and over again, and I don't know how many sentences are similar to Jiulang's coming, Jiulang's staying, and these kind of meaningless greetings. It is recommended that the author reduce this kind of useless dialogue and make some substantive advancement and substantive description.

Daoji can be said to be middle grade, why must it be said to be low grade? It is easy to look down upon. Middle grade can be said to have some chance or something, and it is already a foundation.

Okay, well written 👍

The alien version is set at the end of the Qin Dynasty in Gaowu. The so-called Qianqian in the article is actually the Qin Dynasty. The author eloquently tells the story of the rise of a young boy from the countryside. The writing style is somewhat similar to The Most Romantic of the Three Kingdoms. The major sects should be benchmarking against the various princes. The customs and people's customs are vividly displayed on the page. It is estimated that the book will take the route of fighting for hegemony.

Stable writing, with a base of five million words

It is so well written that I can write about the Three Kingdoms. Very Han Dynasty style

There are also insights such as the inheritance of skills, and the treasures of heaven and earth. As the protagonist, you can only get the basic talents and abilities. The slightly better ones can only grow through the ruins in the mountains and the treasures of heaven and earth that you encounter on your own. Otherwise, you can only be a real dog like those powerful ones.

I've read six chapters, and the writing and diction are okay. I'll update soon.