The Eternal Immortal Dynasty: Starting as a Low-Ranking Clerk

Using cultivation as a facade, it's actually a story about the struggle for supremacy at the end of the Han Dynasty, starting from humble beginnings? Anyway, I'll take a look; so far, there aren't any major problems. However, if you're looking at it as a farming story, the family's development is described too little; many things are forgotten, such as the family's spiritual well and two ranches, etc.

Who is this author? I've finished reading this one; do they have any other works? I'm in awe.

The world-building is good. However, the writing style is too verbose. The first few chapters are filled with repetitive, pointless greetings like "Jiulang is here," or "Jiulang, please wait." I suggest the author reduce this kind of pointless dialogue and focus on substantial plot development and description.

The Foundation Establishment stage can be considered mid-grade, so why insist on calling it low-grade? It makes one look down on them. Mid-grade might be better if there are some fortuitous encounters, and besides, it's already at the Foundation Establishment stage.

The setting is quite good, but the map is a bit too small. In this environment, the protagonist should be hiding, while the family members go out to fight. It could be written as an ensemble piece, with the protagonist becoming the family patriarch. The timeline could be extended, using this rebellion as a starting point to massacre the Rongtai Immortal Clan, becoming the tyrant of the county.

Yes, well written. 👍

This is an alternate-world version of the Qin Dynasty, where the so-called "Former Qian" is actually the Former Qin Dynasty. The author tells the story of a country boy's rise to power in a captivating narrative. The writing style is somewhat similar to the most romanticized version of the Three Kingdoms. The various sects seem to be counterparts to the warlords, and the local customs and traditions are vividly depicted, suggesting a story that will likely focus on conquest.

The writing is solid, with at least five million words.

This is so well written; it could be a novel about the Three Kingdoms period. It has the spirit of the Han Dynasty.

Furthermore, there's the knowledge of inherited cultivation techniques, and the vast wealth and treasures. As the protagonist, one can only acquire basic abilities; slightly better ones can only be developed through the ruins in the mountains and by gathering rare and precious treasures. Otherwise, one can only become a mere lackey of those powerful figures.