Proving the Dao Across the Heavens as the Dao Venerable

Please refer to the following format: Name (Taoist name): Main cultivation method: Personal magical artifact: Realms: (Body Tempering, Qi Nourishing, Meridian Opening, Foundation Building, Jade Elixir, Golden Elixir, Primordial Spirit, Celestial Immortal) Personality traits: Commonly used magical techniques and supernatural abilities: Introduction:

I'm a newbie writer on my journey to failure. My writing is poor, the plot is not rigorous, and there are bugs. Thank you for pointing out the problems~ I'm working hard to revise and correct them~ ❤️

I believe that even the most powerful cultivation techniques become ineffective when limited by the environment—specifically, spiritual energy. If immortals are merely another type of life form, rather than a higher level of existence, then they lose their meaning.

Let it be.

It's neither classical nor ancient, the setting is a headache. Logically, the author considers Yuanshi Tianzun the head of the Three Pure Ones—that's a classical setting, right? But then there's the Jade Ruyi! And Lingbao Tianzun's Qingping Sword, and Daode Tianzun's Bagua Furnace—that's ancient setting! It's so frustrating!

There are quite a few flaws. First, how could a newly formed universe have such a well-developed system after only tens of thousands of years? The primordial universe, after Pangu separated heaven and earth, went through many huiyuan (one huiyuan equals 120,000 years) before entering the primitive society stage of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors.

I added this book to my bookshelf and then deleted it, going back and forth many times. My evaluation of this book can be summed up in two words: mediocre. On the positive side, I really liked the premise, and the plot was okay. On the negative side, I didn't feel at all that the protagonist was a centenarian. If the author can't write it, don't add that setting.

I thought it would have a bad ending, but it was just a cliffhanger. They were hoping for a super satisfying grand finale, but alas.

The pacing is too slow; this instance takes too long, and there are too many irrelevant descriptions, making the content feel flat and like a diary entry. The concept is actually quite good, but if the author doesn't improve the pacing, I'm worried they'll waste this promising start.

The protagonist's actions and personality are unlikable; it always feels like the Three Treasures Jade Ruyi is stuck with a useless person.