Proving the Dao Across the Heavens as the Dao Venerable

Please refer to the following format: Name (road number): Major exercises: The natal magic weapon: Realm: (forging the body, nourishing Qi, unblocking meridians, building foundation, jade liquid, golden elixir, soul, immortal) Character traits: Commonly used magical powers: Introduction:

I am a newbie on the street. The writing is poor, the settings are not rigorous, and there are bugs. Thank you for pointing out the problems~The author is working hard to revise and correct~❤️

I feel that no matter how awesome the skills are, once they are restricted by the environment, they will become spiritual energy. That's not so good. If immortals are just another type of life, rather than a higher level of life, it would be meaningless. Just like an ordinary person eats at a fly restaurant, but if the world's richest man can only go to five-star hotels and is not allowed to go to a fly restaurant, what's the point? The richest man in the world should be I can go to five-star restaurants and fly restaurants, but I generally don't like to go to fly restaurants, it's not that I'm not allowed to go. The same is true for immortals.

Just let it happen. . . . . . . .

Classical is not like classical, prehistoric is not like prehistoric, and the setting makes my head hurt. Logically speaking, the author thinks that Yuanshi Tianzun is the head of the Three Pure dynasties. Is this a classical setting? But here comes another Yu Ruyi! There are also the Qingping Sword of Lingbao Tianzun and the Bagua Furnace of Daode Tianzun. These are the settings of the ancient times. It makes me feel so uncomfortable! According to Yuanshi Tianzun, who is the head of the Three Pure Ones, what he holds is the orb, while Lingbao Tianzun is the Jade Ruyi. According to the prehistoric period, Daode Tianzun is the head of the Three Pure Ones. What an obsessive-compulsive disorder of mine! It's heart-breaking! ! !

There are quite a few flaws. First of all, is a system that has been developed for tens of thousands of years since the birth of the universe so sound? After the creation of Pangu in the prehistoric universe, it went through many Huiyuan (one Huiyuan is equal to 120,000 years) before entering the primitive social stage of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. Secondly, I feel like I can't see the protagonist's need for time travel at all. . . First: Since the newborn universe must be full of spiritual energy or bursting with spiritual energy, the resources for cultivation must be more than most worlds! Second: the protagonist has supreme skills and has no need for them at all! Third: As an old man who has been teaching for most of his life and is 99 years old, the protagonist can be said to have a high level or experience, and there should be no need for understanding of various aspects of life. . . . . Then here comes the problem. Why travel through time?

I added this book to my bookshelf and deleted it again, going back and forth many times. My evaluation of this book can be summed up in two words: tasteless. Let me talk about the good side first. I like the setting very much and the plot is okay. On the negative side, I don't feel that the protagonist is a centenarian at all. If the author can't write it, don't add this setting. Now when I read a book and see the protagonist's settings such as the King of Soldiers and the rebirth of a boss, I just don't read it, because few people can write a protagonist that fits the setting. Also, can you create some original worlds? I'm almost sick of these worlds, such as A Chinese Girl, Jin Yong's Ancient Dragon Martial Arts, and Yang Shen. Too many people have written them.

I thought it was a bad ending, but it turned out that I wanted to have a super exciting finale, but nothing happened.

The pace is too slow, this dungeon is too long, and there are too many irrelevant descriptions, making the content too flat and like a running account. The setting is actually not bad, but the author does not strengthen the control of the rhythm. I am really worried that this good start will be wasted.

The main character's actions and personality are not lovable. I always feel that Sanbaoyu Ruyi is following a loser.