Immortality Begins with Taking a Wife

Let me talk about the conclusion first. In fact, this book falls apart from the special guest section and loses the original charm of a novel about cultivating immortals. Why is this book so attractive in the early stage? In fact, it follows the path of ordinary mortals. The protagonist, who has a low status, carries out activities cautiously. In a small map, the status increases with the growth of the protagonist's talisman skills. Readers can witness the growth of the protagonist. Every level upgrade and every inventory of supplies are the essence. The essence of novels about cultivating immortals is growth. It is the growth achieved by the protagonist relying on his own strength. The protagonist's strength increases step by step, and his status increases with the improvement of his strength. The two complement each other. If there is a disconnection in one aspect, it will lead to blood collapse. As for the protagonist of this book, from the moment he becomes a special guest, the relationship between identity and strength is decoupled. Readers can no longer feel the sensory stimulation brought by the protagonist's growth, there is no struggle of the low-level monks, and there is no pleasure brought by gaining profits through struggle. Even the link of counting supplies is gone. Everything about the protagonist has become a matter of course, as if it should be the way it should be. It is equivalent to an untouchable suddenly crossing the class and becoming a Brahmin, and the subsequent plot becomes boring. Although a large part of the subsequent plot is full of various protagonists showing off, and outsiders are shocked, but because strength and identity are decoupled, readers cannot feel the excitement. What's shocking about this? Isn't it normal for a Brahmin to be awesome? Wasn't he born to be this awesome? The protagonist's struggle loses its meaning. And the low strength even turned out to be a failure, making readers feel that the protagonist is a piece of trash, and with so many resources poured into it, it is only the foundation building period. Interesting isn't it? The protagonist of some novels can spend hundreds of chapters in the Qi training period and still remain attractive enough, but the protagonist of this book spends hundreds of chapters in the foundation building period, which makes readers feel like a waste. The author pursues a grand worldview too much, and the various top-level battles make the protagonist lose the sense of participation in the plot. Many novels about cultivating immortals will also have top-level fights in the early stage, but these are just background descriptions. It is probably that the big boss conspires to cause chaos, and Jie Xiu takes the opportunity to cause chaos and fight with the protagonist. The protagonist mixes in the corners and corners, using the advantage of golden fingers to obtain benefits that are insignificant to the big shots. The circle that the protagonist actually comes into contact with rarely exceeds his own strength, so that readers can feel the value of the protagonist's gradual growth. This is how I wrote it in the early stages of this book, that is, before it was put on the shelves. The appearance of the guardian narrows the protagonist's next growth path. With the guardians, I can no longer write the plot of the struggle of the lower class. I started to think about it. I am afraid that I will directly intervene in the plot of Jin Yang Patriarch next, right? However, I was totally wrong. When the big boss of Chunmanyuan jumped out to cause trouble, I was completely confused and didn't know how the author should write it down. Another blockbuster after the decoupling of identity and strength, the protagonist is decoupled from the main plot and is dying. There is almost no way to continue writing. The author has no outline at all. He writes wherever he thinks of, and it is completely broken! As expected, the genius competition started. Many Ancient Platinums particularly like to play this type of genius competition routine, because they don't need to think about the plot, write random words, and then be shocked. Anyway, the fan base is huge and they will never die of hunger. But the author of this book is not platinum. If it were not for pornography, which is a big killer, readers would run away after this plot, and the author would really be unable to make a living. The following hundreds of chapters are really meaningless. Various low-level monks said: "He is worthy of being a Brahmin", "Is this the genius of a Brahmin?" The protagonist talks about being stubborn, but he is among various big guys. Anyone who suspects that he has a secret treasure can easily crush him to death. But since the class jump, the air in the world of immortality has become sweeter. The bosses are all elegant and easy-going, which creates a strong sense of separation from the previous hundred chapters. Before it was released, it was a wife version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and after it was released, it was a pornographic version of Devouring the Starry Sky. I feel that there is no problem in deleting the realm setting, or changing it to—— Brahman Brahman beyond Brahman——Super Brahman Super Brahman beyond Super Brahman——Super Brahman 2

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There are always voices in the comment section calling for the author to kill several female protagonists. It's really strange. This kind of plot is often the poisonous point of traditional immortality novels. It happens when the protagonist's ability is too strong and the environment is too harsh. The author deliberately arranges what happens in order to highlight the difficulty of mortals cultivating immortality. This book is not a traditional immortality novel. Jiao has the ability to protect his wives and concubines, and Goldfinger is highly linked to his wives and concubines, which is the foundation of his ability. According to the current progress and plot arrangement, there is no problem in accompanying him to the end to achieve immortality. So why do you want to arrange this poisonous point? Just for your so-called sense of reality? Are you sure it conforms to the basic logic of this book? Have you read this book seriously? The author knows what readers like to read, and he knows what to write. He does not need you to guide and arrange the plot. If he is really unhappy, change the book and read Yu Hua's book to ensure that it is "real" to you.

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It's outrageous. I was doing a book list and suddenly I was notified that I was involved in pornography and vulgarity. I was advised to correct it. I pointed out this book and asked me to correct it. By the way, I added this book to the book list a long time ago when it was put on the shelf. Why did it not pass after so long?

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Looking at it now, this book is well written and the data is really well designed. Logically it's all quite reasonable. Talisman records, elixirs, and magical instruments may also be defective or fake, or have been tampered with. It is reasonable for street stalls to have lower prices than shops. The author has never been stuck in the upgrade of the protagonist. Unlike most books, there are stuck in both big and small realms. If a card is missing, there may be spiritual stones that cannot be bought, and you have to find them yourself. A reasonable world of cultivating immortals is lacking even low-level resources? What to do when you get to the advanced level? And are all businessmen fools? It is said that the protagonist Chengte collapsed when he was waiting for the guest. Where did he collapse? What's unreasonable? According to the world set by the author, the protagonist has great power to rely on, so why not rely on it. What are the benefits of becoming a guest? The resources, channels, techniques, and security are all there. As long as it's logically sound. If you like to see the author deliberately torturing the protagonist, you can watch The Road to the Master. Abuse for the sake of abuse. The protagonist has never had a fight or blushed with anyone until now. This is the kind of thinking a time traveler should have. Since it is time travel, the advantage lies in the brain. Some novels are low-level and cause trouble everywhere. The only way to survive is to rely on the author. When there is no background, it is necessary to keep a low profile and reduce the sense of existence. In addition, don't talk about why I am still a trainee. I am studying in qq and I am fully determined. Why not be determined at the starting point? An account in front of me has been blocked. It's not possible to use a new account either. It is estimated that only by changing your mobile phone, changing your phone number, changing your payment number, changing your email address, and not being able to use your real name, will you be able to use it again.