In the Second Week, They Were Full of Malice Towards Me

This guy is a top-notch internal manager. The first book Blood Tribe was very good when it was called Black Crit and I cut it immediately. After switching to White Crit and writing a witch, it's not much different. It remains to be seen how long this book can last.

I suddenly realized that the level system of this book is similar to that of FGO. The upper limit of the character is only five stars. If you want to reach the six-star level, you can only use rare props to increase the upper limit. Low-star characters can also use props to increase the upper limit to six stars.

I just read the first chapter and saw the protagonist playing a game for more than 10,000 hours. I felt a little speechless. You play 11 hours a day for a whole year, right? Ordinary people like this are really unable to figure out how my brother offended you? If you have the guts, don't eat the eggs he lays! ! !

I suggest changing it at the beginning and adding a setting where the protagonist inherits the memory and experience of the game character. The protagonist is just a gamer and has a shitty feeling for the game character. With the current setting, you can see the conversation between the protagonist and the nun. It's really hard to bring in, I can't stand it anymore

Equipment will also be withdrawn from the environment, right? The equipment that has been withdrawn from the environment is given to the card that has been withdrawn from the environment, which can still be a waste. Not all games have the decomposition function. Generally, recycling equipment that has been withdrawn from the environment is not cost-effective.

There is no such thing as the Emperor of Ashes, and there is no such thing as the second game. It is just the dream of an otaku who suddenly died in front of the computer after clearing the game.

It's too stupid to let Dragon Girl join the resistance. She is already the one with the most power. Can't she just change the superstructure? How many people will die if we start an uprising again? Has the conflict changed since the regime changed? The dragon slayer eventually becomes the evil dragon. Besides, isn't it a contradiction that the Dragon Girl is someone the resistance hates? This point, the author lacks thinking

Memories of Ashes (Fan settings: The use of Zhuohe is to absorb pollution into the body. The higher the level, the heavier the pollution, and it will inevitably be swallowed up in the end. The protagonist of the first generation is extremely talented. The purpose of taking away the "resources" of NPCs is to save them and keep them away from pollution. In the second week, you can see people saying "I gave up my past and escaped from the Zhuohe") ... .. So painful The influence of the evil is getting heavier and heavier, and I can almost not tell whether I am alive or dead I can no longer distinguish between day and night, and the robe can hardly cover up the traces of pollution. Then again, how is this completely eroded body different from the evil person? When I woke up, they surrounded me, and there was a warm feeling in their palms The source of the evil was faintly heard in my ears. The voice As long as I pour the evil into their bodies as before, I can continue to maintain life Everything they have is given by me, whether it is to transfer the evil or become an extension of my will I can vaguely hear their voices, they don't know the truth, and they desperately move closer to me In order to survive, a few have to be sacrificed... My mission has been completed. Besides, does this make sense... The time I spent with them in the wasteland is my salvation I taught them a lot. If they are the extension and representative of my will, I hope they can remember the good memories instead of the evil in the future It's almost over, fellow travelers, forgive me...

I have to say that I am really unlucky. When I read the book "Family", I cut it as soon as I read it. The same happened with the previous book. I was not even given the chance to subscribe. Why don't you consider starting a group? It doesn't have to be many people, but readers can discuss the plot and so on. It should be okay.

This book must be finished. I'm so angry. I waited so long for the previous book, but I still didn't continue writing it.

Memories of Ashes (Fan settings: The use of Zhuohe is to absorb pollution into the body. The higher the level, the heavier the pollution, and it will inevitably be swallowed up in the end. The protagonist of the first generation is extremely talented. The purpose of taking away the "resources" of NPCs is to save them and keep them away from pollution. In the second week, you can see people saying "I gave up my past and escaped from the Zhuohe") ... .. So painful The influence of the evil is getting heavier and heavier, and I can almost not tell whether I am alive or dead I can no longer distinguish between day and night, and the robe can hardly cover up the traces of pollution. Then again, how is this completely eroded body different from the evil person? When I woke up, they surrounded me, and there was a warm feeling in their palms The source of the evil was faintly heard in my ears. The voice As long as I pour the evil into their bodies as before, I can continue to maintain life Everything they have is given by me, whether it is to transfer the evil or become an extension of my will I can vaguely hear their voices, they don't know the truth, and they desperately move closer to me In order to survive, a few have to be sacrificed... My mission has been completed. Besides, does this make sense... The time I spent with them in the wasteland is my salvation I taught them a lot. If they are the extension and representative of my will, I hope they can remember the good memories instead of the evil in the future It's almost over, fellow travelers, forgive me...

Can you sleep with 20,000 words after a month off? (No)

Although I am also a two-dimensional player, I have 160+ wives when I play Azur Lane, at least one for each character, and all the characters in my shipyard are fully equipped and strengthened. I am so philanthropic, and all the cuties are my wings!

The beginning of yysy is too strong. A wasteland-style scavenger is described like a young lady, which does not fit the background.

Chapter 7: Death from poison. It's hard to imagine that this woman grew up in a wasteland environment. Even if her emotional intelligence is negative, the protagonist is also true. It's not why you are so good to her. She threatened you at the beginning and was threatened again after you helped her. The protagonist is still not angry. The male tomb robbers who are afraid of power and morality are better than her. What kind of life do you live in real life to develop such a character?

I was so disgusted by the woman at the beginning, can there be any Shen Nong to show me the way?

The single chapter description posted yesterday still failed to survive the next day, so it was reported and sent. I will briefly summarize it for everyone who has not seen it. —————————— 1. The chapters and book reviews are now restored, and you can talk. However, it will take some time before everyone posted them during the sealing period. ———————————— 2. The update time is more casual, but 4k is guaranteed every day. Sometimes there are two chapters, sometimes two chapters in one. The number of words updated every day in the new book issue is limited. Please forgive me, there will be more updates when they are released. —————————— 3. There are other things that everyone wants to see in Shura Field. I know everyone is in a hurry, but don't worry, let me make a dumpling before eating that plate of vinegar. ———————————— 4. Finally, and the reason why the single chapter was reported yesterday, is the issue of group building. The original intention of establishing the group is to allow everyone to communicate and discuss, daily gossip, or game linkage, and... The author will post some warm daily stories about the protagonist and other characters in the book in the group from time to time. Because there are a lot of sensational parts in it, I am afraid that those with poor receptivity will burst into tears and not have enough tissues, so there is a requirement for fan points to join the group, and no more than 1 fan point is enough. ———————————— Above.

(Although it is a small aspect, it is really too poisonous!!!!!! Extremely poisonous!!) The author's writing about paying wages to the cat girl and having weekend breaks is too deviant from reality and logic. While clearly looking for the base of the revolutionaries, the characters were asked to think about why the plot suddenly became so random and mindless when it came time to win people's hearts. In addition, this kind of treatment, even now, is equivalent to paying off people's debts for many years and giving them a high salary and relaxed treatment. tnnd, the local tycoon wouldn't spend so much on raising a college student, right? It's so dramatic

Damn, this book title has almost no stickers. The male protagonist is like a timer and his reaction is basically "..."

Good guy, if you don't get through the second episode, wouldn't it be a butter movie?

No, why did you only steal the equipment? Isn't it usually the case of removing the equipment, then resetting the character's experience, spitting out the training materials, and finally disassembling them to exchange for card drawing tickets?

I really can't stand the image of nuns that the author wrote. He just lets the people below him do bad things as they please. Oops, he also says that others are like subordinates who are of low status and unworthy of being the protagonist, without even thinking about what he used to be.

In Chapter 70, the protagonist saves a cat girl slave, and in the next chapter he hugs a random male partner to show affection. So you tell me that the purpose of saving other people's girlfriends is to introduce a new female protagonist? What an excellent brain circuit.

Extra, the group is full, I want to watch the extra 😭

I had endured the initial bad points and thought it would gradually get better, but it turned out to be a huge mess. What a 🐢🐢 plot. I really regret that it stained my eyes.

Two additional chapters have been added in the group, and a new book has been released. If you are interested, you can read it.

The group is full and I can't watch the extra episode.

Can you open a new group? I can't join the group if I'm all subscribed.

It starts high and goes low, has inconsistent settings, and wastes a lot of pen and ink on supporting characters to show how cruel the world is. So let me ask you, where is the plot of all the posts I posted? This is just the beginning of trying to be cool in the name of Ashes, but there are always a bunch of inexplicable restrictions that prevent the protagonist from being happy. It takes dozens of chapters to write about the characters, but the total interaction between the characters is only a few chapters. In general, the setting is very attractive, but the writing is a mess.

The group is full, I don't have any extras to watch, who can help me fill in the missing pieces 😡{"NickName":"White Crit","UserId":372750242}