How Can Anyone Have Such Powerful Superpowers?

Xia Panqiu makes me sick at the moment, not because he and the male protagonist don't deal with each other, of course that's part of the reason, but as a national public official who handles dangerous matters, she can't manage her own emotions just because the protagonist's abilities are a bit similar to her former colleagues. Is this the emotional management that a person in a key department should have? The author's writing of this part is a bit awkward, not to mention the lack of manpower in the special department. Since she is responsible for guiding newcomers as a leader, she is unqualified, especially for such an important department. Maybe her special ability is more useful for observing the psychology of people with abilities, but it can also be used behind the scenes. Why do you have to throw her out to disgust people? Speaking from real life, if there was a guy like this in the SWAT team, would you dare to trust the SWAT team to save you from the kidnappers? Not to mention that novels should not be brought into reality. This book is based on reality, but it just has a little more supernatural powers. The entire world view is still real society.

Such awesome management can only be imagined by humans. It allows people to do things that make them lose their heads, and can also deprive you of your abilities at any time. If this kind of thing happens in reality, only normal people will rebel.

After seeing the latest chapter, I want to say that the protagonist is a bit too miserable. What the hell has he been deceived into? I encountered an accidental awakening of abilities, and was sarcastically criticized by the person in charge of the official. After entering the workplace, I encountered workplace bullying. I encountered four fatal incidents in one month of work. I took 60,000 a month, which was not enough to buy a cemetery. Each of my seniors was more unreliable than the other. After several times, the two seniors could not beat each other. They were pure drags. It has been more than a month since I joined the company, and I have not even been included in the company group. This is still official! The most ridiculous thing is that the protagonist of the new incident was dragged into the other party's secret realm. The two seniors gave up without even turning around to save them. If it weren't for the big mistake, they were sent on the spot. The immediate boss was ostracized by his colleagues. There are a lot of moles in an organization who want to take out the protagonist's underwear. There is also the underworld residual scroll that is unable to complain. Help, is your official organization at all reliable and professional? Every time you perform a mission, you have to have new people wipe your butts. It's even worse than northern Myanmar. You have to work hard when you go out, from C to one against five. When an incident occurs, one of your teammates will be killed, and the remaining four are all the heads of the protagonist. When you go home, you have to help your teammates practice being a father and a mother, and you get 60,000 pure black slaves a month.

The organization in this novel is the kind of decadent organization that is very classic in novels. It is nepotistic, oppressive and backward in the system. It seems like those who rebel are really being forced out. I understand that you want to take control of your own abilities, but the question is, can you explain it clearly from the beginning? Is it difficult to add this clause to the signed contract? You have to wait until everyone is familiar with your abilities and have reached a certain level of cultivation, and then you are informed that I will have the authority to deprive you of your abilities with one click, and I still ask you to hand it in in person. How arrogant? You either do this kind of thing when you don't have the strength at the beginning, or you hide it as a back-up, how could you do this? And that person named Xia, can he also be an HR person? There is a psychological problem, and there is no review or corresponding guidance. You are more private than private. Good guy, now that you know that anomalies are everywhere and there are opposition groups within, you don't unite all the forces that can be united, and you still push it outwards? What a family business. There are other people in this organization who know that there is a mentally ill person (Xia), but they don't provide guidance or find anyone. They just let it go, well, it's more of a family business. Also, what kind of nihilistic self-destructive tendency does the protagonist have? If you really have no self-destructive tendencies, the first time that woman targets you, she is already dead and you have self-destructed. Then there must be no consequences. You just have a name and look good, but there are no actual symptoms, right? What is the second phase of night emo NetEase Cloud.

Many people in the current plot, whether they are good or bad, are easily startled and then become hysterical, just like those idiots in Japanese anime who always shout Nani Masaka Bakana. There is always an uncomfortable feeling when watching them.

What do you mean, author? Set a fan value of 100 to speak, and let no one complain about your poor writing! The emotional description in this novel is messy and poor. Is this meant to describe two heroines? But your plot writing is poor and you haven't nailed any of it. A scene like Xia Panqiu could actually have been completed when Lu Wu appeared on the scene. It would have been better if she died directly, and the relationship between her and the protagonist heated up too quickly. The other heroine, Lin Ying, did not have many supporting roles, and the background was not explained clearly, which made her feel very outstanding. In addition, the protagonist's character was not well developed, and she did not feel like a normal person. It's okay to be put in small shoes by the heroine, it's okay to be monitored by the heroine, it's okay to be emotionally manipulated by colleagues, it's okay, it's okay to be told that you can forcibly strip away abilities, it's okay, it's okay to be assigned a dangerous mission... Doesn't the protagonist have any other ideas? There is a lonely description at the beginning, but the optimism at the end is not like that of a normal person. Moreover, a newcomer in Tiance Mansion can adapt to the constant scenes of murder and fights. Do you think it is normal? There is also the issue of Tiance Mansion. I can understand the emergence of the ability to peel off Huangquan fragments, but understanding does not mean accepting it. For example, it is like you are working for the boss, but the boss can take away all your money at any time. Can you accept it? Sooner or later there will be big problems within Tiance Mansion. Moreover, it is impossible for newcomers who have awakened their abilities to be under the surveillance of Tiance Mansion. Wouldn't those who are not under surveillance naturally push him to the opposite side? In this case, the villain forces cannot be completely eliminated. In addition, the real police generally follow the route of defeating the few with more and safety first, but the Tiance Mansion takes the route of competence first and defeat the many with less, for fear that their own people will not die quickly enough. And can't we give those who have had their abilities stripped away a chance? Just because they are not good at their abilities does not mean that they are not good at other things! Not even giving them a chance to do logistics research and development, I feel like Tiance Mansion is quite arrogant. In the end, there were a lot of factional conflicts within the Tiance Mansion. The protagonist could be assigned a position even if he killed a bad guy. This was due to the impure ideological unity and the inability to distinguish between right and wrong. It really just focused on abilities and not on ideological education. The more you read this book, the more confusing it becomes. It is said to be a refreshing novel, but your description is not exciting enough, and the plot rhythm is not clear enough

The official organization is such a child's play... I feel like even the management system of a small private unit is more reliable than this...

The beginning of the novel, the world building, and the description of the group portraits are all relatively good. If you keep it up, let alone the gods, it will at least be a high-quality book. Except for the relatively intellectually calming writing written by the official organization, it basically has no poisonous points. However, it fell apart as soon as it was put on the shelves. The emotional drama of the Japanese-style ambiguous pornographic novel was out of control. It was awkward to read, stupid and embarrassing. Take care of the author.

I quickly finished the review. The part before it was put on the shelves looked really good. After it was put on the shelves, it felt like a studio. The emotional lines were written randomly and the plots came and went. And up to now, I really don't know the differences in the personality characteristics of the several female supporting characters you wrote. You don't have a clear sense of image. After I saw the latest chapter, I regretted it. I really shouldn't have to look at myself to feel angry.

Handing over the fragments of the underworld and forcibly depriving unimportant rights is even more excessive than the superhero registration bill of Marvel next door. It cannot be tolerated if it is not contrary to nature Hostile countries must be very supportive of Tiance's policy. After all, it is really rare to see idiots who deprive themselves of martial arts.