I Was Reborn, and So Were They

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​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not want the male protagonist to open so many harems, it is really tiring. Unlike other rebirth novels where the male protagonist is trying to make up for his own regrets in the previous life, but purely to make up for the regrets of the female protagonists.         ,,, The first is Li Yuxi. In the last life, Chun Chun was a straight-ball player and a poor hand at cards. Not to mention that after so many years since childhood, the summer after the college entrance examination was obviously going to be in a different place. If he didn't express his feelings directly, he just postponed it and waited. Who could blame him if he didn't take the initiative. Also, during the two years when the male protagonist and Lu Xian divorced, it was Xiao Qin who went to find the male protagonist. It was not her when the male protagonist needed someone to accompany him the most. I can only say that he deserved it.         ,,,,, It should have been possible for the two of them to get married eventually, but unfortunately the author directly arranged for Qin Muzhi, who really looked like a head-stealer. Originally, Xiao Qin had already made a big comeback, and even got four kills, preparing to bulldoze the base with five kills; but he was snatched away by his sister.         , ,,,,,,,, In this life, he was greatly undermined for the sake of other heroines, and he and Xiao Qin are really difficult sisters.          ,,, The male protagonist in this life is already very tired. He has to deal with so many women outside and has to worry about his sister's illness when he gets home. He can only obey his sister's request, so why can't the male protagonist be allowed to relax for a while. Just after coaxing this person, something happened at the other end. It really needs to be moved wherever it is needed. So I really hope to have a character who can be the harbor for the male protagonist, pampering him like a mother, so that the male protagonist can not think about anything when he is with her, but can relax peacefully and not be so tired.

The male protagonist opens a harem× The male protagonist opens a harem√

Open a thread and see how many people think this book should be on a female channel rather than a male channel

Overall, this is a very enjoyable harem novel. The advantages are obvious, the writing is delicate, the descriptions of each heroine are in-depth, and the harem is not artificial and quite natural. The shortcomings are also obvious. The rhetoric in some places is too gorgeous, especially the description of the appearance of the male and female protagonists. There are too many descriptions and the number of words is too high. Below I will express my outlook on the book. Let's think about a question first, why do we like to read harem stories? Everyone has their own reasons, but as far as I am concerned, the core reason is probably not to marry anyone. Shirayuki and Riko in "Aria of Scarlet Bullet", Sylvia in "Students in the City", I have read too many Japanese pseudo-harems. It is clear that the male and female protagonists have such a strong relationship that they must marry each other, but they have to separate because of monogamy. They have gone through so many hardships together, and finally separated for this reason. The novel is originally something that comes from life and is higher than life. Why is the author unwilling to be willful here? Like Mr. Key in "The Opinion of the Student Council", he is the best positive teaching material. He is obsessed with creating a happy ending that makes everyone happy, and has achieved success with his own efforts. So, why do we like to read harem stories? It is because we hope that lovers will eventually get married, and passionate feelings should not be constrained by monogamy. Therefore, we hope to open a harem out of love, not for the sake of a harem. This is an important issue I discovered when reading this type of work recently. For example, "The Seven-Divided Future" is a book written by Li Bai. The characters are quite vivid, but this book seems very depressing to me, and I can't even read it. Why? Because the harem in the book is completely unnecessary, it was only forced to open because the future daughter fell from the sky. When I read this book, I thought more than once why the male protagonist needs to chase these girls. They are really good, but the male protagonist is not bad either. Why does he have to chase someone he doesn't love just because he lost his future daughter? Can you not be depressed? The author should understand one thing. No matter how beautiful and popular the female protagonist is, or how vividly she is described, most readers will assume the role of the male protagonist (excluding articles with the female protagonist as the core). Therefore, while describing the female protagonist, they must not forget to further develop the male protagonist's own thoughts and image. This will make it easier for us readers to eat sweets happily. To give another negative example, last year's annual novel "I Loaded the Love Game", this book also has a harem for the sake of a harem. There is no problem with Rin Kiyono and Miki Kujo, but the two harems of Koizumi Aona and Asuka Mai are completely unnecessary. They are just a harem for the sake of a harem. Then let's take a look at the current performance of the heroines. Li Yuxi, needless to say, is her childhood sweetheart, Su Qi's eternal tree hole, and being included in the harem is the popular wish; Jiang Chuyao, she is Su Qi's first love and Su Qi's first beauty, and Su Qi also teaches this lonely and cold little girl step by step The princess became a generous girl, and her feelings came naturally; Lu Xian, she loved him crazily. There is no doubt about Lu Xian's feelings for Su Qi, but I feel that Su Qi's feelings for Lu Xian are a bit complicated, but they are also reasonable. Su Luo, let's not talk anymore, my sister is the best, I advise Su Qi not to be ignorant and accept it honestly; Qin Muzhi, my wife before rebirth, no need to say more, she must accept it; Qin Keqing wants to ask a question, why does Qin Keqing like Su Qi? Now this emotion is still a question mark; as for Li Xiangjun, I think this role is unnecessary, but the author also needs to make money, and multiple characters can always make more money by writing more chapters. However, it is true that without the threat of Li Xiangjun, the plot of this book would go downhill. Because the story is inseparable from the enemy. With Lu Xian being solved by Su Qi, it will be difficult to promote the development of the plot without establishing a new enemy. For now, she has indeed promoted the plot very well. I hope her emotional drama will be equally exciting. Finally, I want to mention Gu Niannian. Since she is not a reborn person, I think it is unlikely that she and Su Qi have a reasonable relationship. At most, she has an unrequited love for Su Qi. I think it is better for her not to go into the muddy waters of Su Qi. It is better to end up like the previous squad leader Wang Xiaoxiao, and not to increase the unnecessary and unreasonable harem. I really like this book. Among harem novels, this book has the best emotional line and the most delicate and vivid one so far. Compared with those single female protagonists or pure harem YY novels, this book does not seem boring or sugary. The rhythm is well controlled, and the main plot is promoted at the same time. Finally, I wish the author will continue his efforts and give this book a good ending.

Divide the male protagonist, split it in the middle, two heads, two hands, two legs and two bodies, eight is enough. Not enough body to separate, ten. Come on, I can't wait.

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To be honest, the writing is really good, but the protagonist has always given me a sense of separation. He is very affectionate and dedicated when getting along with one heroine, and he is also affectionate and dedicated when getting along with the other heroine, as if he has lost the memory of other heroines. It feels like two people to me, and the sense of separation is really obvious.

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I couldn't help but say a few words, from Qingfeng. In my opinion, this is a good book and gave me a good impression, but I always felt something was wrong. Emm, the author chose to complete the narration of one thing from multiple perspectives, which can quickly make the images of the heroines three-dimensional, making the emotional drama of this article very delicate, which is a good shining point. However, the sweet and sour daily life coupled with the occasional past life memories, as well as the protagonist's "dedicated" performance in front of different female protagonists, make the main line of this book very vague. The image of the female protagonist is undoubtedly very plump, but I think the male protagonist is very thin. The male protagonist wants to open a harem, but he has never taken the initiative to develop. It all relies on The heroine advances the plot and is unwilling to rely on her past life to influence the "present" heroine's life. It can indeed show the character of the hero. However, coupled with his overly positive image and the lack of any negative emotions in the whole story, I can only say that it is a very perfect puppet. Generally speaking, it feels like this is stock trading rather than a harem. Ps1: It feels like a female author. Ps2: Open a new group quickly. Ps3: gkd