I Was Reborn, and so Were They

Overall, this is a very enjoyable harem novel. The advantages are obvious, the writing is delicate, the descriptions of each heroine are in-depth, and the harem is not artificial and quite natural. The shortcomings are also obvious. The rhetoric in some places is too gorgeous, especially the description of the appearance of the male and female protagonists. There are too many descriptions and the number of words is too high. Below I will express my outlook on the book. Let's think about a question first, why do we like to read harem stories? Everyone has their own reasons, but as far as I am concerned, the core reason is probably not to marry anyone. Shirayuki and Riko in "Aria of Scarlet Bullet", Sylvia in "Students in the City", I have read too many Japanese pseudo-harems. It is clear that the male and female protagonists have such a strong relationship that they must marry each other, but they have to separate because of monogamy. They have gone through so many hardships together, and finally separated for this reason. The novel is originally something that comes from life and is higher than life. Why is the author unwilling to be willful here? Like Mr. Key in "The Opinion of the Student Council", he is the best positive teaching material. He is obsessed with creating a happy ending that makes everyone happy, and has achieved success with his own efforts. So, why do we like to read harem stories? It is because we hope that lovers will eventually get married, and passionate feelings should not be constrained by monogamy. Therefore, we hope to open a harem out of love, not for the sake of a harem. This is an important issue I discovered when reading this type of work recently. For example, "The Seven-Divided Future" is a book written by Li Bai. The characters are quite vivid, but this book seems very depressing to me, and I can't even read it. Why? Because the harem in the book is completely unnecessary, it was only forced to open because the future daughter fell from the sky. When I read this book, I thought more than once why the male protagonist needs to chase these girls. They are really good, but the male protagonist is not bad either. Why does he have to chase someone he doesn't love just because he lost his future daughter? Can you not be depressed? The author should understand one thing. No matter how beautiful and popular the female protagonist is, or how vividly she is described, most readers will assume the role of the male protagonist (excluding articles with the female protagonist as the core). Therefore, while describing the female protagonist, they must not forget to further develop the male protagonist's own thoughts and image. This will make it easier for us readers to eat sweets happily. To give another negative example, last year's annual novel "I Loaded the Love Game", this book also has a harem for the sake of a harem. There is no problem with Rin Kiyono and Miki Kujo, but the two harems of Koizumi Aona and Asuka Mai are completely unnecessary. They are just a harem for the sake of a harem. Then let's take a look at the current performance of the heroines. Li Yuxi, needless to say, is her childhood sweetheart, Su Qi's eternal tree hole, and being included in the harem is the popular wish; Jiang Chuyao, she is Su Qi's first love and Su Qi's first beauty, and Su Qi also teaches this lonely and cold little girl step by step The princess became a generous girl, and her feelings came naturally; Lu Xian, she loved him crazily. There is no doubt about Lu Xian's feelings for Su Qi, but I feel that Su Qi's feelings for Lu Xian are a bit complicated, but they are also reasonable. Su Luo, let's not talk anymore, my sister is the best, I advise Su Qi not to be ignorant and accept it honestly; Qin Muzhi, my wife before rebirth, no need to say more, she must accept it; Qin Keqing wants to ask a question, why does Qin Keqing like Su Qi? Now this emotion is still a question mark; as for Li Xiangjun, I think this role is unnecessary, but the author also needs to make money, and multiple characters can always make more money by writing more chapters. However, it is true that without the threat of Li Xiangjun, the plot of this book would go downhill. Because the story is inseparable from the enemy. With Lu Xian being solved by Su Qi, it will be difficult to promote the development of the plot without establishing a new enemy. For now, she has indeed promoted the plot very well. I hope her emotional drama will be equally exciting. Finally, I want to mention Gu Niannian. Since she is not a reborn person, I think it is unlikely that she and Su Qi have a reasonable relationship. At most, she has an unrequited love for Su Qi. I think it is better for her not to go into the muddy waters of Su Qi. It is better to end up like the previous squad leader Wang Xiaoxiao, and not to increase the unnecessary and unreasonable harem. I really like this book. Among harem novels, this book has the best emotional line and the most delicate and vivid one so far. Compared with those single female protagonists or pure harem YY novels, this book does not seem boring or sugary. The rhythm is well controlled, and the main plot is promoted at the same time. Finally, I wish the author will continue his efforts and give this book a good ending.

I couldn't help but say a few words, from Qingfeng. In my opinion, this is a good book and gave me a good impression, but I always felt something was wrong. Emm, the author chose to complete the narration of one thing from multiple perspectives, which can quickly make the images of the heroines three-dimensional, making the emotional drama of this article very delicate, which is a good shining point. However, the sweet and sour daily life coupled with the occasional past life memories, as well as the protagonist's "dedicated" performance in front of different female protagonists, make the main line of this book very vague. The image of the female protagonist is undoubtedly very plump, but I think the male protagonist is very thin. The male protagonist wants to open a harem, but he has never taken the initiative to develop. It all relies on The heroine advances the plot and is unwilling to rely on her past life to influence the "present" heroine's life. It can indeed show the character of the hero. However, coupled with his overly positive image and the lack of any negative emotions in the whole story, I can only say that it is a very perfect puppet. Generally speaking, it feels like this is stock trading rather than a harem. Ps1: It feels like a female author. Ps2: Open a new group quickly. Ps3：gkd

(I felt something after reading it. It seems that there are no spoilers or something has been spoiled) This book is like a chocolate, sweet with a hint of bitterness, suitable for slowly savoring alone in a lonely late night. This book is like a cake. The author uses a knife to slowly cut the cake into pieces so that when readers taste it, it will not be too sweet. This book seems to describe a youth love story, but if you think about it carefully, it seems like the life of a middle-aged man. It seems as if I have seen the unreasonable children at home, who need to be tolerated and not scolded easily; the wife beside me often loses her temper because of trivial things, and I need to comfort her easily hurt heart; the boss at work often makes some unreasonable demands, but I can only accept them and deal with them slowly; the first love in the distance, even though there is a sweet memory, can only be separated from each other due to the responsibility in my heart. Su Qi is reborn, but it seems that he is not reborn either. The problems he encounters are still those of adults, but the author describes them in a sweet fairy tale-like way.

The story about Que Shi is good, but can there be a patch to enhance the male protagonist's ability? You can't just rely on emotion and appearance to make so many women like you, ability is also very important

A sharp review Jiangnan is talking on the big screen😡 The author is very similar to Jiang's romance school. If I guess correctly, it should also be a poppy flower. (If not, please thank Haihan x) The charm in the text is really good. It's really good. There is nothing you can do about it, Jiangnan's writing is just good. Does it look good? Damn it, Jiangnan, what else are you dissatisfied with!

I've only read the first 70 chapters so far, and I can't help but come here to express my opinions. I'm really unhappy with it. First of all, the setting of this book is very good and can drive readers to read further. But the author's writing style is hard to describe in one sentence. First of all, it is a very "unique" choice of words and sentences. A paragraph can have no beginning or end, and you can't tell the subject, predicate, and object at a glance. Do you think it looks very advanced when written like this? Some of the sentence structures were so novel that when I saw them, I thought about all the various sentence patterns in English translation. Then I won't say much about typos. This can be said to be a matter of attitude. Then comes the character creation. The settings of the heroines are very interesting, and the author's awareness of lightning protection is also very strong, which deserves recognition. But there is still the problem of writing. Many plots do not have the tension, climax and ups and downs they should have, which makes the plot dull and the characters are not distinctive enough. This is especially highlighted in the male protagonist. The main character in the book is indifferent, rarely revealing the male protagonist's inner thoughts and feelings, turning the male protagonist into a tool character with an indifferent personality and no edges. It's not enough for a book that focuses on emotional drama to only write about the female protagonist. Feelings are always two-way. If you don't write the male protagonist well, what reason do you have to make the female protagonists in the book love him so much? Just give it a handsome setting, can everything be done with a perfect empty shell? Or is it that underneath the beautiful skin of the heroines, there are superficial souls who only care about appearance? Obviously these are unreasonable. I hope that the author can face his own shortcomings and write better and better books. The so-called advice that hurts the ears is what I say from the bottom of my heart. If you think it is wrong, please laugh it off.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking😍😍😍😍😍

It would be great if there was a passerby who had been watching their farce in the past life and was reborn after being affected by Chiyu. Then besides the author, there will be another script creator.

The author's writing style is very good. You must write well and write 2 million words. Don't be too lazy or unfinished. You can afford to wait.

Finally finished reading this book. There are some stories and suspense in the front, but the plot becomes more and more monotonous and repetitive as you go to the end, and the writing becomes completely bland from the beginning. The holes dug earlier have basically not been filled, so although the ending is relatively good, there is no sense of completion and satisfaction after reading it. It seems that the author does not know how to take back those foreshadowings. Overall, it is a disappointing book. But at least it's over. Thanks to the author.

Author, look at others😭😭😭

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not want the male protagonist to open so many harems, it is really tiring. Unlike other rebirth novels where the male protagonist is trying to make up for his own regrets in the previous life, but purely to make up for the regrets of the female protagonists.         ，，， The first is Li Yuxi. In the last life, Chun Chun was a straight-ball player and a poor hand at cards. Not to mention that after so many years since childhood, the summer after the college entrance examination was obviously going to be in a different place. If he didn't express his feelings directly, he just postponed it and waited. Who could blame him if he didn't take the initiative. Also, during the two years when the male protagonist and Lu Xian divorced, it was Xiao Qin who went to find the male protagonist. It was not her when the male protagonist needed someone to accompany him the most. I can only say that he deserved it.         ，，，，，，，         ，，，，，It should have been possible for the two of them to get married eventually, but unfortunately the author directly arranged for Qin Muzhi, who really looked like a head-stealer. Originally, Xiao Qin had already made a big comeback, and even got four kills, preparing to bulldoze the base with five kills; but he was snatched away by his sister.         ， ，，，，，，，， In this life, he was greatly undermined for the sake of other heroines, and he and Xiao Qin are really difficult sisters.          ，，， The male protagonist in this life is already very tired. He has to deal with so many women outside and has to worry about his sister's illness when he gets home. He can only obey his sister's request, so why can't the male protagonist be allowed to relax for a while. Just after coaxing this person, something happened at the other end. It really needs to be moved wherever it is needed. So I really hope to have a character who can be the harbor for the male protagonist, pampering him like a mother, so that the male protagonist can not think about anything when he is with her, but can relax peacefully and not be so tired.

The male protagonist opens a harem× The male protagonist opens a harem√

Open a thread and see how many people think this book should be on a female channel rather than a male channel

Divide the male protagonist, split it in the middle, two heads, two hands, two legs and two bodies, eight is enough. Not enough body to separate, ten. Come on, I can't wait.

White tea can fly with peace of mind. If anything happens, you will carry it on your own₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

To be honest, the writing is really good, but the protagonist has always given me a sense of separation. He is very affectionate and dedicated when getting along with one heroine, and he is also affectionate and dedicated when getting along with the other heroine, as if he has lost the memory of other heroines. It feels like two people to me, and the sense of separation is really obvious.

I was deceived by a scumbag and became penniless. Now I am divorced and have two children. My spirit has been hit. Now my mental state is worrying. After reading your article, I feel that my youth is back and my mental state is much better. I hope you can update it soon. This is saving my life.

Beware of spoilers! Personally speculated that Jiang had an abortion in his previous life from the woman's point of view. At that time, Su Qi was still a loser and didn't have much money. In addition, he had to take care of his sister and Aunt An. Maybe he didn't want Su Qi to have too much burden on the future, so he secretly aborted the child, but neither of them explained clearly in the end, causing Su Qi to leave. Based on the author's delicate description of human nature, similar things do happen often in life. Lu left Su Qi. Based on her description of the treatment, I think she knew that she was not going to die soon, so she divorced Su Qi and didn't want to tie him up and make him sad. But before he died, he saw that he was in love with someone else, and felt unwilling to do so, or felt betrayed, so he wanted to drag Su Qi to go to heaven with him. Bloggers who have sorted out cases on the Internet have also introduced some similar cases, which are indeed in line with human nature.

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I have to say, the author's introduction to this book says it's all sugar. Isn't that crazy?

I dare say that in the whole starting point, I can't find such a detailed description of multiple female protagonists.

Joy, it's so painful. Now I even feel that rebirth is nothing. Let's just end up like our previous lives. Everyone can accept their destiny and let nature take its course. It's a hundred deaths.

Seeing that a mother and daughter appeared in Chapter 17, a pair of sisters, a former love, a first love and an orthopedic sister, I doubted whether this book could survive. I'll save it until it's over, otherwise I'll feel bad if I get banned that day.

The vocabulary is gorgeous and the characters are tangled. It's like a harem novel of youth pain literature. It's rare, but it's quite interesting.

Qin Muzhi didn't know what time she cried before falling asleep. She only felt that her eyes were so swollen that it was difficult to open them. She leaned back habitually and didn't touch anything. The cold air penetrated into the quilt, and the warmth she had finally accumulated was lost from the inside out. Yesterday I went to the hospital alone for a prenatal check-up. The child was healthy. Although she was strong and ran around in the hospital, her heart became more and more fragile. When she returned home, she habitually said "Husband, I'm back" when she opened the door, but the only response she received was the whistling sound of wind blowing from the window she forgot to close. Her sadness could no longer be contained. She thought that when he knew she was pregnant, he rushed over and hugged her and circled her, but now she couldn't share the news that the child was healthy. Su Luo went to find him, and he couldn't help but miss him every day, his cooking, his company, his warm embrace, and even wanted to find him. But he had to grow up with someone who could prove that he had been in this world. He could only go to him when his children grew up and started a family. He would definitely be willing to wait for me. He broke his promise in this life, and he will definitely keep it in the next life. "The child is really smart, and he is a lot like you, Su Qi, but the first word he learned was daddy. I couldn't help it when I heard this word. My tears flowed uncontrollably. When the child saw me crying, he cried too. I could only hold back the tears and laugh to coax him. Su Qi, in the next life, you must never do anything sorry to me again in the next life." "Today he brought his girlfriend back. I am really happy to see that even though he lacks the love of his father, he can be as strong and sensible as you. He can take care of others just like you. He learned to cook early. When he comes home every day, he finds that the light is on. I feel as warm as if you are still here. I think I want it too. I broke my promise Su Qi, I want to find you later, I want to watch him live happily, so if you come to me later in the next life, I will forgive you, I will always wait for you, I will always be your legal wife." ps: This is my first time writing a fanfic, please give me your advice, thank you everyone for watching. The following are some uncomfortable thoughts that I want to express. Although I know that it is immature to pick up my mobile phone and do these things after twenty-three days, but from the first model to the present, my grades dropped from the lowest 985 to the first class. It is really uncomfortable and sad. I am afraid that I can't hold on. After the tug of war yesterday, the teacher invited us to eat ice cream. I I have forgotten that since I was in high school, eating too fast has created a stomach that can smell the smell of lunch after dinner. I have a terrible stomachache when I take one. Even if the temperature in the classroom is high, I feel so cold at that moment. But when my deskmate puts his coat on me, I really feel so warm and warm. I really like this kind of company.

I went, it turned out to be a eunuch 😒

No? You just finished the Easter match and went down again?

Okay, okay, update soon.

It's a pity. If you want to read more, it's fine. I've already opened a copy.