I Became the Stand-In for the Chosen One

1. The funniest thing about this book is the appearance of this "immortal cultivator". To be honest, if you don't know how to write, don't get involved in fantasy. Why not just write about the city? I have to write about fantasy, but I don't understand fantasy well. Writing non-trivial things really leaves people speechless. (Especially in the fight against pornography in the world of cultivators, it's so embarrassing) If you write like this, it's better not to forcefully wear the skin of a cultivator. 2. The protagonist is a complete punchline, and the whole book just keeps jumping around and doing all kinds of tricks. This is really a bad impression. The protagonist gives people the impression that he is a Neptune who is lying and getting screwed everywhere. Is it easy? Pleasurable? Daily? Isn't that how Shura Field was written? 3. The protagonist's emotional problems with the heroine. It's okay to use the system as a guide to conquer each heroine, but you can't write the protagonist as a hero just to conquer them for rewards. Developing feelings during the process of conquering, and giving out sweets while conquering is the real content. The so-called system rewards are actually for the protagonist to conquer and give out sweets. On the contrary, this book reverses the priorities and neglects the basics, making the protagonist look like a stallion. 4. The narrative rhythm is wrong. The development of each heroine, hey, I can't say it's stiff, I can only say it's forced. If you want to say development comes naturally, I think Green Tea is the only one. It always takes various unforgettable experiences to create emotions. Can you write wonderful stories and deep feelings while you are stuck in the sect? I can only write about a scumbag who cheats everywhere for profit😅. That's all. In addition, there are quite a lot of seniors in this book. I am too lazy to compete with my seniors, so I will compete with you.

I have just finished my second taste of tea, and I am looking forward to Chang'an's new work (ps: Jiang Manyue will always be a god, I love it so much, kill the madman and add the hero's first blood, the empress of the palace)

Guys, I studded. Believe me, I will definitely win this game, and Lu Qingming will definitely be in the palace. I will reward you with 10,000 first to show your determination.

Betting on whether Chang'an can recreate a million-word glory

What should I do if I want to stab the male protagonist to death after reading the first 5 chapters? The smell of scum.

Let me tell you, now I am a junior junior sister Now I want to bite the protagonist to death. How do I describe this character in the book written by Chang'an ? The one who gets the most stomachache in the end is her Obviously she was the first one I met, and I was always by his side, and I kept lending him spiritual stones. Why did he get together with the Saint? Then who am I? (That's all)

It has an invincible beginning, an extremely toxic plot, and an absolutely terrible ending. The female protagonists and supporting actors in this book are all very good, and they are of all types. They are just a few older ones. They are not necessary. In addition, for the ending, it is really better to just say that the protagonist cheats and defeats the boss. It is really uncomfortable to read. This book is just a piece of chocolate-flavored shit. If you don't want to be disgusted later, I suggest you not to fall into the trap. It is really expensive and the ending is broken.

What kind of retarded plot is this? The protagonist used the Sky Frost Sword Intent during the competition, and then said he couldn't lie or it would be difficult to explain later, and then turned around and tricked Susu into taking the title of the dog-licking saint. Is this deliberately disgusting? You don't really think it's fun to damage a girl's reputation, do you?

There are some big poisonous spots, and there are constant small poisonous spots, but the book is not bad and it is a pity to abandon it. Therefore, it is recommended that readers with weak poison resistance can read the book before going to bed, so that when they see the poisonous spots, they go to sleep and they don't feel poisonous when they wake up. It is effective in personal testing🤣👍

The further you get to the back, the more you lick the dog. I'm convinced. I can't stand it anymore when I see Lu and Qin blackmailing the protagonist for the treasure.