
I Can Summon Outrageous Companions
我能召唤离谱伙伴
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"I Can Summon Outrageous Partners" has been well received! This review contains spoilers. I saw this book on 2022.11.5. Fortunately, the book ends at this time with the first copy of SpongeBob SquarePants. It gave me a glimpse of the author's narrative skills. Actually, in the first few hundred words of the first chapter, the main character was chased by a monster and suddenly the system seemed quite ordinary. Even if the system summoned funny children's animated characters, which was a surprise, it didn't give me great psychological expectations. But what I didn't expect was how complete the plot design of this book was. When Mickey Mouse's Wonderful House appeared in the first chapter, the book was just an ordinary fantasy novel. When it came to the second chapter, I was surprised that all the props taken out of Mickey's Wonderful House were used one after another, and they also had laughs that fit the animation. After entering the first copy of "SpongeBob SquarePants", the author is very familiar with some small details of SpongeBob SquarePants, which plays a very good role in enhancing the immersion of the "shared childhood memories" that is the main focus of this book. Example the way a certain detail appears in which episode on TV. I thought only DC Marvel or long-running migrant comics like Naruto One Piece would be studied carefully. I didn't expect someone to write about Spongebob Squarepants so seriously. This is one of them. Secondly, after converting the animation of Zi Gongxiang into text, it really has a childlike reading experience like "Alice in Wonderland". A few pictures of the original animation come into mind, which is funny but not artificial. Thirdly, a little story about Spongebob Squarepants is actually so fun with two twists and turns. When I was halfway through the copy of SpongeBob SquarePants, I thought: "What? Isn't this "Pat Star's Revenge" which was popular on the Internet two years ago? I've watched it a long time ago." Unexpectedly, after Patrick's Revenge, there is also a layer of reversal designed, which combines "Macroecology" and "The Death of Squidward", and the foreshadowings are well laid out. The reversal to reveal the mystery is crisp and neat, like a tough detective directly summarizing the truth at the critical moment, instead of analyzing it slowly like a mystery novel, which breaks the overall humorous style of the book. This is different from the word count of game data listed in "Thriller Paradise" and the inference and analysis of Brother Jue who often talks to himself and complains to himself. They are all short and clever copies, but this book is not so nonsensical and more readable. Logically speaking, it is easier for the three scumbags who wrote two books in a row before writing "Thriller Paradise" to get into the public eye. The copy of "SpongeBob SquarePants" in this book is much more complete than the "Garlic Zombies" and "Collapse of the House of Usher" in the early days of "Scaryland". The semi-original copy is much more complete (half of the credit is due to the fan comics). There are only a few copies of "Thriller Paradise" that can compare with it. After all, the whole story of "Thriller Paradise" is nonsensical and the details are often handled roughly. Advantage No. 4: Delicate emotions. My threshold is quite high, but I couldn't withstand this "childhood murder". Squidward tricked me into tears at the end of the play. I have to say that Quilt Supply tricked anime fans into tears. It was a unique experience. The emotional tone of the copy of "SpongeBob SquarePants" rises from: warm and funny, to terrifying and depressing, and then to sad and touching, with good rhythm control and emotional mobilization. —————————— So this book really has endless potential! Well written, brother! Write slowly and maintain quality. For me personally, after the completion of "Thriller Paradise", it has been a long time since I have seen such a neat, comfortable, humorous and just right infinite flow novel. Don't look at what San Zha said at the end of "Thriller Paradise": "I only wrote Thriller Paradise because the first two books didn't make money", "I didn't write seriously at all, it was just a waste of money", "I just stopped writing based on the style." In fact, as a reader who has followed the update, he was originally a "small unit drama update" similar to volume updates. Each copy was written and revised before being sent out at once. Although the writing is slow and the interruptions take longer (you can open more daily chapters to talk about life to gain a sense of presence), it still has a high user stickiness and reputation increase that can last for ten years with one book due to its copy design that is much higher than other Infinite Streaming online articles. Up to now, it has been in the top ten best-sellers in the game category. A book can make you rich. If your subsequent copies of this book are on the level of "SpongeBob SquarePants", it will only be a matter of time before you become the next person to sleep twice a day in three days in terms of performance and fame.
I feel that each copy of this book is a bit boring at the beginning, but as I read it, I found that it is actually somewhat interesting. For example: I didn't have any desire to read the copy of Fruity Attack when I saw it at the beginning. After all, I had never seen Fruity Attack when I was a child. I gave it up for a few days because I felt a little confused. However, I picked it up and read it again. I found that the plot can be understood by people who have never seen it. The author is careful and will make up for the holes he dug, so that people can guess the final boss and stay curious to see what the plot will be next. I personally feel that the author is slowly improving, and his narrative ability and ability to insert funny jokes are also improving. Although the next few copies of this book have almost nothing to do with the outrageous partner of the title hhh ps: After all, everyone has different tastes, but it is good enough for people like me who just want to find a light and funny article. After reading too many bad reviews, I was afraid that the author would give up, so I wrote this article to support the author greatly!
To the author
You turned our beautiful childhood into darkness and darkness, but you childishly forced a perfect ending. The unreasonable and forced happy ending turned the noble character of those who are still burdened to move forward even in hell into a joke, and the abrupt and abrupt turns failed to bring the happiness they deserve. You have designed many outrageous characters. Your book titles, your introduction, and your core content all tell their importance, but you try every means to suppress them and reduce their appearance. Characters such as Mickey, Big Brother, Penguin, and Spongebob only left the factory once and then disappeared. In the end, they only showed their faces. Your story is incomplete. You cut off the middle and forcibly connect the beginning and the end. Readers cannot guess the subsequent development. There is no sense of expectation and sleep experience. For example, Dou Po and the main world, their plots are forcibly shortened. There are no hints, no foreshadowing, and they move to the next plot without any foreshadowing. You only dig holes but don't fill them, leaving holes one after another. For example, Lin Li's mental strength was raised from the first or second copy. As a result, Big Brain's legacy was not opened even after he became a god. The omnipotent spiritual space was only entered once. Another example is the permanent character redemption card. Only two of the five fragments were obtained in the end. You always write whatever you think of, but never fill it. When Patrick Star came out, I was thinking about SpongeBob. Since Jerry can come with Tom, why can't SpongeBob? You focus on outrageous characters who ignore logic, but you force them to be logical. In order to prevent their combat power from collapsing, you try your best to suppress their performance, but outrageous characters have nothing to do with combat power or logic. My understanding of the upper limit of Tom Cat's ability is the half-hour creation in End of the World, and the wish-fulfillment in Tom Cat. It is not a castrated version like you. It feels like a person from a high-level martial arts world traveled to a low-level martial arts world and was greatly shocked when I heard someone claiming to be an immortal. It turned out that this bullshit immortal was at most a street level. I was shocked, unbelievable, unable to understand, and dismissive. There are many, many problems, I am too lazy to list them all. Maybe you did try your best to write this story, but unfortunately the beginning and the direction of your efforts are wrong. By the way, I like the elegant Mickey, the almighty big brother, and the cute penguin, but I can't like Lin Li. Lin Li didn't make any mistakes, but his existence made me feel out of place. To put it bluntly, I felt that Lin Li didn't match their style of painting and couldn't fit in together. Your protagonist is Lin Li, but your core attraction is an outrageous character. There is a gap between the two, and this is the source of this book's mistakes. Finally, let me tell you my opinion on this book or this kind of book. Don't write in such a dark and cruel way. Childhood should be beautiful, ignorant, bright and uplifting, and it can even be vulgar, but it should not be painful or painful. It's sad, it shouldn't be dark, and it shouldn't be forcibly noble. Your book feels like the Spring Festival Gala to me. It was an interesting electronic mustard at the beginning, but now it is sublimated for the sake of sublimation. Yes, it has become very noble and connotative, and then what? Is it more important to have connotation or to make readers like it? I say it harshly, understand your identity clearly, you are not Lu Xun, you are just an online writer, don't be too ambitious and too short-handed. Although Yangchunbaixue is good, we, the common people, cannot appreciate it. The lower-class people are vulgar, but they can welcome you with applause.
I just finished reading Plants vs. Zombies, so I'm going to give it a try and talk about my current thoughts (please be careful not to read any spoilers). I agree with the reviewers, the Mickey Mouse part at the beginning is not outstanding, and the best part is SpongeBob SquarePants. Maybe this book is positioned as a mixed nonsensical style, with a lot of jokes, but starting from Plants vs. Zombies, the overall quality dropped significantly, and I had to bite the bullet before reading the PVZ copy. First of all, let's talk about why SpongeBob SquarePants copy is good. 1. Natural and natural The world structure is relatively complete and reasonable, and being able to justify itself is a basic requirement for a good copy. The valuable thing about the SpongeBob SquarePants plot is that it has a natural and natural feeling on the basis of self-justifying. The world of SpongeBob SquarePants itself is relatively complete and familiar. The characters have their own personalities and purposes. This is one aspect. On the other hand, the SpongeBob SquarePants animation originally had the duality of a beautiful children's story and a metaphor for the adult world, a fresh and lively painting style, and a terrifying and realistic painting style. It often featured close-ups of deliberately dirty scenes (such as skin folds, acne, bloodshot eyes, etc.); The setting that Krabby Patty uses Patrick's meat was previously found in a children's cult comic, and this comic is also very important as the pre-text of this book. With this duality, the world of SpongeBob SquarePants and the slightly restrained dream setting of the giant octopus can be perfectly combined. 2. More descriptions of emotions and atmosphere The rendering of the horror atmosphere as the plot of SpongeBob SquarePants World progresses is really good: the extremely disgusting Crab Crab Burger (and the residents of Beechburg all like to eat it, and it is horrifying to think about it in comparison. The author also cited the episode of Squidward's gluttony as an explanation, extra points), the unknown Mr. Krabs, and the giant octopus with sharp teeth in the dream (in the end, it matched up with the real one seen through the diving goggles, which is doubly praiseworthy). In addition, the deep sea is inherently a scary place, but the Bikini Castle on the surface has a fairytale sunshine. There is a tension in this that is unwilling to face the real world - arousing our fear of the collapse of reality. This Cthulhu-based atmosphere is not a simple one, but unique to the Spongebob world, and it is well integrated. The emotions written about Squidward are also more sincere. Many people may have had the idea of escaping reality and living in fantasy, which is quite resonant. It's really hard to inspire real sympathy for Squidward. The childhood memories are also very strong. In "Who Lives in the Big Pineapple in the Deep Sea", when Spongebob was summoned, I shed tears and was really moved. 3. The level of confusion is low, and there are relatively few deliberate jokes. In fact, one of the more difficult things to deal with in this type of novel with infinite copies is that there are too many things and too many things. The outrageous props from different separate worlds, each with its own purpose, are originally the interesting part of this type of novel, like Thriller Paradise. But if you can't find a unified clue, it can easily end up as a grocery store, with bits and pieces, and you don't know what to do. Thriller Paradise relies on a strong main line of real life, all copies are unified into a horror game, and Jue Ge's acting style has always been based on IQ and being mean. The Samsara Paradise mentioned by some book friends relies on the settings of the original world and the void to unify the whole in a different-world style. The protagonist's abilities are unified by the spell-killer profession and the practice of swordsmanship, so that it does not become a hodgepodge of random skills. This book is the first copy of SpongeBob SquarePants. There are not many abilities and characters. The protagonist's main behavior has not yet been fixed. He mainly relies on exploration, so the sense of substitution is very strong and it is not easy to get into trouble. The use of props and small firecrackers is reasonable and has no redundancy. When it came to the PVZ copy, random things suddenly began to be inserted, such as big heads, little dragons, strong ones, and the Lord of the Undead. The whole world became inexplicable, destroying the sense of unity of the Plants vs. Zombies world. Although it was said in the end that these players may have entered from the main world, and a series of reasonable explanations were given, they still could not eliminate the sense of discomfort while the dungeon was in progress. Moreover, the current setting of the main world is relatively weak, and forced intervention is a bit out of touch. Personally, I think the main line of the design of the copy is still very important. The main plot of pvz, which gathers seven brains to summon gods, is not very beautiful when combined with the world of pvz, and it seems very forced. In the end, the resurrection process was gone in a single sentence, and a task of beating a god suddenly came up, which made me unable to complain.,,, What on earth are you going to do? Compared with the copy of SpongeBob SquarePants, the pvz version is not as detailed and rich in description (even the mystery plot), there are too many bad jokes, and there are often a lot of saliva dialogues as if to make up the word count. With the sentence "Guri's System", it can be seen that the author wants to use it as a memory point, but it is really bad and too deliberate. All in all, after reading this book so far, SpongeBob SquarePants is indeed wonderful, and I even want to recommend it to others. However, the subsequent situation was quite disappointing and I felt very pessimistic, which is why I planned to give up the book temporarily. Before I leave, I write down some thoughts to explain myself. There are many personal subjective feelings and are for reference only.
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Well, I think the author's positioning may be a bit biased. After looking at the first two worlds, I think the author has the potential to become a three-day-and-two-sleep type author. He writes stories and wants to have fun. The author can completely describe the plot and worldview like three-day and two-sleep. Ding Lai said that not entering can very well relieve the reader's nervous reading pressure, and also creates a contrast that makes people laugh easily with less funny fun. Especially since the author also rewrites childhood classics, this is more likely to contrast with the reader's long-standing memory. Also, I think the author's idea of writing a light-hearted story is a bit condescending and inappropriate. My definition of light-heartedness is to be as dense as Qiyue Youlan's "Steve", so I think the author should not focus on fun, but should focus on plot and contrast. The first world is very good, not only because it has a basis in realistic works to attract attention, but also The characters in the latter part are also very vivid and the twist is enough, but the twist in the latter part is a bit disappointing. As far as the pvz I have watched so far, it is a foreshadowing and I want to write it like the first world, but the ending is a bit anticlimactic, the stamina is not enough, the deus ex machina is a bit unsatisfactory, and there is not much fun. I believe that everyone who has watched it is looking forward to what childhood can be reversed. The above is my personal humble opinion. If there are any differences, the individual shall prevail. I hope the author can see this.
Favorite world
Spongebob Squarepants: Very creative, very touching Xuepo Cangqiong: Very funny, I laughed to death Fruit Attack: Not bad, the main character has a distinct personality and is the protagonist of the original work I feel that the author started writing without much outline after having the idea, so some worlds are not perfect due to tight time and other reasons, but overall it is good. It shows that the author's writing style, creativity, and conceptual ability are all there. The highlight for me so far: Tom and Jerry, everything with them is very visual, so the author is considering adding some familiar friends, such as the characters in Conan (with private goods) As for the stand-in, I thought it was okay when I watched it, but after reading it It feels a bit baffling because I don't know much about the story of Jackie Chan's world (I've seen it but am not familiar with it) Points for improvement: There were obvious jokes in the early stage, such as showing the origin of the jokes, or showing several jokes at once, which seemed a bit nonsensical, and the protagonist's colloquial language that often scolded the system, these have been changed. I hope there will be more characters, like Mickey Mouse who go through the motions, so that it will be more natural to write humorous points. To sum up, the author, cheers up!
Let me ask such a question. The system of this book does not need to be so restrictive... And author, I don't know what your outline is, but it is getting more and more deviated from the first copy... The copy of SpongeBob SquarePants is good-looking. Firstly, the animation has a wide audience, and secondly, it is the first one. The content of the copy is unusual and gives people a sense of expectation. Third, I can see the protagonist's love for the characters in this world, and I am willing to pursue it. There is another very important reason here. I don't know if the author has paid attention to it, that is, the mice that come out for the first time are good, so there are ups and downs when there are bad ones. Plants vs. Zombies is also good to watch, because it has a wide audience, but the relationship between the characters and the audience is not that good, so I am very happy to see the familiarity. I only express my opinion on this Fruit Attack world from my point of view. First of all, I feel a little tired from reading. I summoned good friends, and the dungeon is full of weirdos. I am worried in the main world and even more worried in the dungeon. Then I have never watched this animation. Even if you mentioned the plot, I have no feelings for these characters. The performance of the Riddler in the dungeon just makes me feel that it doesn't matter what they are like... At the same time, the main world The character's actions also confirmed this feeling for me. I didn't feel the protagonist's closeness to these familiar characters. I just felt that this was an ordinary dungeon in a popular sense with an animated skin. The protagonist just came to complete tasks and fight monsters... In this case, there is really no other attraction except the plot, but you really hide your plot ideas... Of course, people have to be realistic. Cooking power is not worth mentioning in the face of life. I am just giving an opinion. , Can you make a normal dungeon next time? You don't have to rack your brains to reverse the plot. Everyone can relax for about ten chapters. The audience is very satisfied. There is no need to watch how starfish eat every day. It's okay to follow Pikachu and fight Ultraman. It's okay to follow monsters to fight Ultraman. It's okay to follow the bald man and be chased by a bear. Everyone will be happy easily. As long as you can see the characters you are familiar with are still very energetic, it is very satisfying, and the goal is easy to set. After all, in It is difficult to survive in a funny world... If the above problem cannot be solved, then I have another suggestion to increase the depth of the plot of the main world, because most of the people attracted by the introduction of your book are memories of childhood and reading jokes. If there are familiar ones, just chase the familiar ones and wait for the familiar ones. There needs to be something to string the copies together, otherwise the audience will read the book like picking grapes. To put it bluntly, the data may not look good. If this still doesn't work, then I can only suggest playing the family card. The bond of friendship and struggle is still very popular. At least be closer to the characters in the script... This way it will be more efficient when cutting people. If I think about these three national treasures, I can only say... They won't change my heartbeat even if they are gone...
As a bookworm who has read novels for many years, and has read almost all genres, I sincerely suggest that the author revise the introduction. Please listen to me explain the reasons and analysis in detail. 🌹First point🌹 The Bikini Castle chapter is quite good. It has its own novelty and characteristics, and even allowed me to see a hint of the story characteristics of San Zha. However, your introduction did not bring out the best of each of your story chapters. Characteristics of "Magic Revision" In fact, the author of each story is very careful to set up a new storyline to avoid becoming the kind of junk food that just retells the plot of the original work and becomes his own story. Fandom ≠ plagiarism. The author really grasps this very well. 🌹The second point🌹Actually, this is not the first time I saw the name of this book. I should have read the book recommendation a long time ago, but I clicked in and read the introduction and then left. Why? New readers may not understand, but those of us who read a lot of imaginative articles actually know very well that in terms of power types and power levels, if there is a ranking, basically all superheroes and many film and television characters and anime characters may not be worthy of holding the shoes of animated characters. The main reason is that animated characters and plots do not need to consider rationality, and often even use exaggerated and absurd expression techniques, such as unexplained immortality or splitting the earth's sun with one punch. If a Tom Cat is really put in the Avengers, maybe Thanos will have to call daddy when he comes. To put it far, to put it far, it is actually a very simple question. Readers like us know what kind of power this is, so we will subconsciously feel that this is not an invincible and refreshing article? Combined with the fact that there are actually very few good books in your genre that can be referenced, I will assume that your book is just a big-brained book, and the writing and plot may be just plain writing, so I will automatically avoid your book. I think the author This book has three characteristics. One is the choice of power system, which means that the direction of the imagination is very novel. This is well explained in the introduction. The second is the magic change of the plot, which does not become a cliché. The third is that it is not an invincible novel routine, but a copy of "Hard to Survive". However, the introduction basically does not mention the two features of the book. So, author, the introduction is really important! 🌹🌹🌹Personal opinion, for reference only. I also hope that the author's book will be a big hit in the new year!
Leave a message, I saw that the Pleasant Goat chapter slipped away, I can still read it if I keep messing around, this chapter chooses the clone, the forced tiger charm is disgusting, so I left a message to withdraw it
I was almost dissuaded by the title and introduction, but luckily I read the book review. It's a very nice book. If you keep writing it, you may get a good one.
Come on, author, looking forward to the next book
I hope the author will write the next book according to the script of SpongeBob SquarePants instead of writing about SpongeBob SquarePants. I mean the style is still the same Cthulhu weird style as SpongeBob SquarePants. The writing is really good.
A brief review (I have a lot of personal opinions, hope everyone knows)
I have been reading novels for many years, and I am basically tired of the traditional ones, so I prefer more fancy novels. I started reading this book just after I opened the SpongeBob SquarePants copy, and I have almost finished the plant copy. When I first read it, the SpongeBob SquarePants chapter was amazing, with a tight rhythm and an excellent plot (it is very well connected to the macro-ecosystem, but not completely sewn together). It is a rare good book (last time I read Fantasy World Travel and Thriller Paradise, but the writing is still slightly worse and needs polishing). In general, SpongeBob SquarePants can be said to be a fairy grass seedling. —————————————————————— Let's talk about the plant chapter. In terms of look and feel, it is a bit inferior to the sponge chapter. The plot advances slowly (the short copy is a bit longer compared to the sponge chapter), and the characters feel relatively immature (the protagonist, who has experienced the sponge chapter and learned a little about systemic urinary tract disease, feels that there is no growth [personal feeling, author, don't listen to me, I don't know how to write a book]. It may also be that the protagonist has not had enough experience and has not started to grow.) Anyway, I feel that this chapter is a bit watery (the short copy is actually more than ten chapters longer than the sponge chapter). All in all, this part is good grass. ———————————————————————— Secondly, there is the update. The author sometimes breaks the chapter at the climax (he is in a hurry), and the author is probably not a full-time author and has no manuscripts to save (he really wants to keep books, but is afraid of dying). —————————————————————————— Finally, this book is worth reading now.
I really enjoyed watching SpongeBob SquarePants. I suggest that I open another horror fanfic. I've already thought of the theme and it's called "This World is a Little Weird". Come on.
Very good idea. I thought it was a funny novel when I read the introduction. I finished reading it and it was so depressing. I wouldn't have imagined it if it was written about Tom and Jerry. It was imagined by Tom when he was dying in the wild.
Except for the slow update, there is nothing wrong with it... 🙂 The quality of the update must be guaranteed~
It's rare to see a good book. The foreshadowing and plot of the first world are perfectly connected.
I liked the first copy of this novel better, I had that feeling of empathy.
Come on, author, although I don't have the money to give you a reward
Help, I can't stand it anymore after watching the new ones.
Do some bad work quickly Now I realize that Lin Li has never interacted with female human characters except for kicking a few girls in Dou Po and performing eye exercises on the teacher: 0
World building
What world do you want to see Lin Li reach in the future? Use your imagination! It's best not to write something that other authors have already written badly. Most people have seen the best childhood memories, or childhood games. Or an ordinary world, but if you have any novel ideas, tell me and I might copy them into the book, hehe!
I originally read the first copy and thought it was a novel worthy of catching up with the river crab next door. I didn't expect that it got worse and worse as it was written. I really regretted not reading the comment section first before reading the book. But to be honest, SpongeBob SquarePants and Plants vs. Zombies are really well written. In the subsequent dungeons, to be honest, your plot writing is generally not a big problem. The characterization in the dungeon is really poor, and it can't be improved anymore, and the characterization of the protagonist is getting worse and worse. The most important thing for me when reading fan works is to see the collision between a protagonist with a distinctive personality and various unique characters in the original work. But now the character of the protagonist seems to be limited by your writing or imagination, like a piece of wood or a robot that will not grow and will only follow the established procedures. The portrayal of the characters in the plot is like a lot of popular faces. I hope the author can improve it, although it may be too late. Readers have left when they should, and I slipped away too.
Thank you, Lin Li
I don't have much time to draw fanfics since school started (sorry If you have the chance, please refine it🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 The sunflower on the left is personified, and the zombie doctor in the middle looked like before he died Damn it, I really can't draw ugly, my drawing skills are not enough
Personal evaluation of each copy
SpongeBob SquarePants: 9 points (horror, sublimated ending) Plants vs. Zombies: 6 points (decrypted, you can watch) Fruit Attack: 7 points (continuous reversals, good-looking) Xue Po Clan: 3 Points (it's rubbish, don't watch it) Pig Man: 5 points (too little information, not enjoyable to watch) Main World: 6 points (the plot is old-fashioned, but watchable) Let's talk about it later... I won't follow it for now.
My opinion
This book is actually pretty good, with the Spongebob chapter at the beginning being considered the pinnacle, and the next few copies can also be read, at least the ideas are good, until the Pleasant Goat chapter. . . The clone is conscious and has memories, threatens the protagonist, and is against the protagonist. It is so disgusting that I vomited. I ran away when I saw this. Is it useless to have a big star of the faction come out? The main body Tiga can't beat the Holy Lord? If you say it's Dagu, I can accept a tie. The main body Tiga can't beat the grandson when he beats the Holy Lord? It feels more like deliberately bringing out the shining Tiga behind him. The impression is very poor.
After three days of chasing, let me tell you my feelings 1. The first few copies are okay, at least 80% out of 100. 2. Author, you are writing a novel, not cheating on an exam. Every time someone mentions your foreshadowing in a post, the plot behind it will accelerate suddenly. I read the copy in one go, and I can feel it. People who subscribe to it will only feel worse. 3. I have always had a point of view. If the protagonist of a novel has the desire to get a partner, and his environment can arrange a partner for him, but in this case, there is still no one or more female protagonists, it means that there is a problem with the author's writing ability; if the protagonist has repeatedly stated that he is an old sp and longs to be single, but there is still no female protagonist, then I suspect that the author is the kind of person who doesn't even top up money to play Azur Lane, so he has a little brother. 4. The setting of the main world is somewhat fragmented. At the beginning, it was a doomsday wasteland style. Ordinary people and low-level awakened people could not travel freely between cities. Ordinary people did not even know the information about other cities. Later, a patch for the capital city was added. The current information is that the human side has at least two major leaders, the capital city and the central city. The gray beasts are like nomads, divided into tribes to oppose the human side. The question is, it is known that the human crystal is beneficial to the gray beasts, and the beast crystal is beneficial to humans, and there is a certain border line between the two sides, indicating that the overall combat power of humans and gray beasts is equal. Then why are there gray beasts around human cities, instead of the gray beasts being expelled beyond the borders of human influence? If there is gray fog around human cities, then it means that humans cannot fully control their own territory and allow gray beasts to come and go. Then why are humans not exterminated? Gray beasts can completely raid human cities and use their overall high-end combat power to defeat individual cities one by one. Unless all of humanity's high-end combat power is concentrated in one city, it will be impossible to defend it. However, if concentrated in one city, other cities will definitely be wiped out. Humanity, which does not have enough population and can only survive with high-end combat power, will still perish. 5. The latest Pleasant Goat volume has too many problems, mainly three. The first one, why does the opponent know that the protagonist has a substitute? How does the opponent know that the Tiger Talisman is effective on the protagonist's double? Why do the Holy Lord's men know that the protagonist will be forced to jump between plot points, when they can use the Tiger Charm on the double? Maybe I read it too quickly and still didn't understand it after reading the copy. Article 2: After the avatar is divided into good and evil, and the evil avatar works for the Holy Master, the question becomes, does his evil intention outweigh his desire for survival? Or is the desire for survival greater than evil thoughts? If his evil thoughts are greater than his desire to survive, then he should take pleasure in hindering the protagonist and not care at all about his own survival. If his desire for survival outweighs his evil thoughts, then he should not go against the protagonist. Not to mention secretly surrendering, he should at least take advantage of the opportunity to send information instead of frantically obstructing the protagonist, especially in the end using HE to threaten the protagonist. I don't think any boss would like an employee who relies on his ability to show off to his boss. The third point is that the settings of Big Gray Wolf and Dad are unreasonable. Gray Wolf has a certain degree of immortality, and with his inventions, Big Brother's level will definitely not be reached, but it is still weaker than a cat and mouse. However, it is not reflected in the script at all. On the other hand, Jackie Chan, Dad even brought a machine that can resurrect people. This setting is completely absent in the original work. It is purely a machine added by the author to make the protagonist HE instead of NE. Although it is a magically modified script, I think there must be a certain respect for the original settings. 6. All copies are HE, especially the last Pleasant Goat. I also said it in the third article in 5. It should be NE. It is too deliberate to force dad to use the machine to change it to HE. There are so many dungeons, not even a single BE, not even a single NE. It's so fake. You can't even play a video game without having so many APs.
I don't really like this way of writing about the underworld ruining childhood. I was tricked into entering it by the introduction. When I saw the first SpongeBob SquarePants world, I already felt uncomfortable. After reading the comments, it turned out that it was really the underworld ruining childhood. Either you write an original grammatical world, or you just write a pure infinite flow. This kind of mixed writing style is not pleasing to both sides. It is too niche and unpopular. It may be the author's self-pleasure article.
Copy of childhood memories
[Reason for Recommendation] This article belongs to the Summons of the Heavens novel. Here we can see the anime friends who have been with us for a long time in childhood, among which I like Big Big Wolf very much. The protagonist who traveled back in time was chased by monsters at the beginning. When he was on the verge of death, he awakened the system and summoned Mickey Mouse and successfully escaped. Overall, this article is very good. If it gets a perfect score of 10, it will at least pass. It is still worth reading. [Brief Review] ①The author's painting style is more similar to Happy Town. Readers who like this style of painting are well worth a read. ②This book is mainly a plot similar to opening a copy. Now it has SpongeBob SquarePants, Plants vs. Zombies, Fruit Attack, Pigman... My favorite description of each world is SpongeBob SquarePants. The setting of this world is very good, the rhythm is compact, and at the end of this world, it makes this world even better.
Good guy, let's release the water point process to collect fan value (what?
I really don't know how to color... Also, this color scheme is really from the underworld
Mr. Monster's Sea World
Squidward is dead, He was killed by his best friend Lin Li himself. There is no sorrow and no resistance. He knew that death was the best destination for him. After all, he is just a monster with a deformed head, feeding on disgusting starfish every day, crawling on the ugly seabed, unable to see the sun or the hope of survival. So, death is undoubtedly the best choice. Mr. Lin Li opened a crack in this dim world, a beam of light shone in his heart, and he was finally able to die. Before he died, the ocean of life became cleaner, the chaotic sounds in his ears disappeared, and he even saw the friend in his dream... SpongeBob's square body, yellow skin, long nose, everything was so similar to that in the dream. Squidward thought he had entered a dream again, but Mr. Lin Li's actions made him understand that this was not a dream. He smiled tiredly, and then fell asleep quietly amid the comforting sounds of his friends... This should have been his end, but when he opened his eyes. The familiar little yellow square was playing in his yard, singing cheerful songs, and Patrick smiled stupidly. Only then did Squidward realize... It turned out that everything living in wastewater was just a dream. "SpongeBob! Patrick! Keep your voices down!!!" "Okay~ Squidward!"
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