Cyber Sword Immortal 2121

There is nothing wrong with the other procrastination, except for the protagonist, whose cultivation level is so low that he started causing trouble everywhere before even building a foundation. . You can never complete something smoothly, you will always miscalculate, you will always be exposed, and you will never learn the method of upgrading first and causing trouble later. . How to put it? It's like the male protagonist in a cultivation novel who has been seeking death during the Qi refining period. I don't understand. Now that I know that the talisman in my head is so crucial, and I have an artifact in my hand, as long as I build the foundation, everything is different. If I drag it, I drag it, it's worse than Korean lol. At least they still have operations and know how to avoid battles and develop, but the protagonist keeps doing it, never develops, and keeps wandering. . Either they are being beaten, they are being hunted, they are either trying to save their lives, or they are fleeing. . You said, no matter how good your idea is, how can this book be popular? With online novels, you can do art if you want, but you must not delay it.

I feel that this is a description of the true cyber setting of cultivating immortals, instead of putting on a cyber skin, a prosthetic limb, and artificial spiritual roots. It is said to be cyber cultivating. At its core, it is still the setting of ordinary cultivating immortals. In this book, it is different from ordinary cultivation settings. The monks have uploaded their thoughts to the network, and by controlling the network, possessing intelligent robots or some technological products to fight. Appropriately written about the technological version of magical powers. It's just that there was a lot of content in the early transition to becoming a monk, and when I got a half set of prosthetic limbs but couldn't use the "internal skills" and still had to practice the "external skills" of the physical body, I mistakenly thought it was the kind of novel that has a cyber setting but maintains the original physical body.

The main reason why this book is not popular is not the advancement of the story or the increase in the protagonist's strength. There are only a few chapters in one volume, more than half of which are death memories, which fragments the original overall story. It may complete the events and world view, but also brings a great sense of fragmentation. If it is written as a unit story, it is fine. It is completely fine like a physical book. However, the author writes online articles and has not written a unit story like a physical book. As a result, after reading 400,000 words, I have 200,000 memories, and there are 100,000 protagonist dialogues, plus 50,000 background stories and 50,000 story advancements. This kind of recall writing method is rarely used even in physical books, and only one unit story can be used once at most. It feels like watching Naruto and One Piece in the past. The plot is so well followed that it gives you memories of 7 or 8 episodes. You don't want to follow it anymore. The physical book is okay, but the online book is a catch-up mode. It's not like a physical book comes out. Even if a physical book comes out, half of it is memories. The second and third books are all, and it's hard for me to say that I can continue to follow it. . I have seen this technique used most often in mystery novels. The author seems to intend to use this writing method throughout the whole text. Since he does not intend to write mainstream cool novels, then don't choose a niche writing method. It is too selective for readers. It doesn't matter for self-interest novels, but the author seems to intend to write commercial novels. This book is now a match for the brainwaves. This book is really good. If the brainwaves don't match up, I just xed it. I recommended it to several friends and they couldn't stand it. It's a pity that the world view and setting are really good. Please subscribe and support it. This book now feels a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon. The author can consider collecting the opinions of readers. It is useful to keep it but not to throw it away.

I'm numb, and every day I use poison to produce a fairy grass, which is a big deal. It's so beautiful. My day

I saw a picture a few days ago. It was of Esteo, a Japanese painter who focuses on combining mechanization and tradition. It seemed a bit appropriate.

I finally understood that the so-called martial arts is actually mechanical prosthetics, so wouldn't it be better to just call them mechanical prostheses? The names of programs, systems, weapons, etc. Are also messy. It's weird to have to use Taoist terms when it can be described with more modern names. There is a reason why this book is not popular. Just these messy names can dissuade many people. If you don't insist on reading, you have no idea what the hell they describe.

There is no point in the author's overpowering the battle, but the weak protagonist has great story value. The protagonist does so many things but doesn't get any improvement in strength. What's the point? You can neither change yourself nor change society. This way readers can see the world from different angles, and then what? No more. The main character can't do anything. There is a reason why this book is not popular. Talking about science fiction: Battle at the Wellhead, Cheng Pan transforms society, and achieves self-transcendence on his journey to dimensionality. Which one is not better than you? Do you still need to write novels about the struggles of small characters? Which reader is not a little person struggling in reality? This book only has a smart protagonist and a supporting cast of fools. At the beginning, the Tianshi Mansion didn't check who was causing trouble in its territory? Why make trouble? The protagonist uses public opinion to make Brahma and the Third Pharmaceutical Hedging, and the Tianshi Mansion has no brains. 1. Survivors of the Tianshi Mansion Incident. Second, public opinion whistleblowers. The two incidents happened within two days, can't big data still lock the protagonist? Wouldn't Tianshi Mansion investigate the protagonist? Tianshifu has higher network authority than Brahma and Third Pharmaceutical. Check whether these two companies are investigating why the protagonist is involved. Can the protagonist run?

The protagonist picked up a sword, knew it was dangerous and was reluctant to throw it away. Then he was beaten to the point where he lost the sword and ran away. I picked up another kidney, but I couldn't bear to throw it away, and then it was blasted with a hammer and snatched away again. What does the author mean by this arrangement? ? ?

After reading a little bit of this book, although there are various problems, most people didn't get the point. The feeling of alienation caused by technology on people is the theme of this book. All the discomfort you feel is actually resistance to alienation, which is also the core of cyberspace. Many people regard cyberspace as high-tech and low-life, but I think the essence of cyberspace is the alienation of people. Only with alienation can everything follow. Including the strange "cultivation of immortality", the obsession with religious forms, and the attribution of science and technology to the terms "martial arts" and "cultivation", which are nothing more than seeking spiritual comfort on the way to alienation, thus showing more bizarre paranoia

Please expand on the plot. So far, it has always been a one-man show for the protagonist. Except for the protagonist, there is only a killer and a policewoman, and there is no interaction. The rest is just the background. No matter how good the setting is, it cannot survive without a plot.