Eye of Evolution

After this book entered the plane of evolution, I felt that there were many problems. I took out some questions to discuss with book friends and the author. This book is characterized by half reference and half originality, and the setting is a highlight of reading. But when you enter the plane of evolution, it becomes blurry, neither real nor digital. The first problem is that the setting progress of this system is too slow. It should have been rolled out quickly after entering this plane to facilitate the development of the plot, instead of rewriting settings over and over again. Simple spiritual power recovery has been discussed in detail in several chapters. Chapters 1452, 1557, and the latest chapter 1626 are all involved, but no clear data relationship has been established. The amount of natural spiritual power recovery, cultivation recovery amount, and absorption of spiritual crystal recovery amount should be clearly defined as the number of spiritual power rotations per week × a certain ratio × the current spiritual power value. The second problem is that the battle process is nonsense, and the whole process is crushed by priority. The battle damage cannot be understood, and there is no reference system for the battle damage at all. Book friends who follow the early data analysis flow must be in darkness. The lack of opponents with similar ranks is also a problem, and they are constantly on the way to defeat and escape. There is also the problem of too many skills, which are suspected of being used to save the situation, because for the protagonist's position, three or four skills are enough to use well, and it will not feel uncomfortable to win every time. Needless to say, when it comes to copying books, people have different opinions. Recently, there have been too many inner dramas about the protagonist being possessed by the drama queen. The author's writing skills are pretty good, but what readers see is not only the writing style, but more importantly the author's creativity. The inner drama makes the plot advance very slowly. This is not to say that there cannot be inner drama, but that these inner activities can actually be mentioned in a few strokes, leaving some space for readers to imagine. It is really tiring to watch too many inner dramas. Finally, I would like to summarize my opinion: It is better to complete the system setting as soon as possible, or to digitize it. After all, digitization does not affect the authenticity, and then shift the focus to the plot itself. The update progress should be updated at regular intervals 😭 Some people have obsessive-compulsive disorder and will keep updating 😭. It's too late to update and I think everyone can understand if I take a leave of absence.

After reading about 300 chapters, I feel like the protagonist is like a dog-licking novel. Sometimes I clearly don't have the equipment for this part, and my girlfriend also has it, so why should I give this thing to Shuyi?

Three chapters: The protagonist hit a meteorite in the eye and traveled through time. There is a sister who can only cry and tell the protagonist that our family has no money and cannot compete with others, so we should give up martial arts. I recalled that the person who was penetrated was beaten to death by his classmates, because the school system will not punish him even if he is beaten to death as long as it is not intentional. Then a classmate went to the hospital and said that you were so lucky that you didn't die (when I watched it, I was thinking, is this intentional? An attempted murder?). The reason for targeting the protagonist is because of the school beauty. Then in the next chapter, the school beauty comes and uses her own industry to help the protagonist find a profitable job. When the protagonist goes there without reporting the name of the school beauty, the junior supervisor starts to ridicule him. . .

Come up with some ideas. Will the evolved eye be the eye of death? This eyeball was given to his son by his father, saying that there was a chance he could resurrect his sister. But there is still one person missing in his family - his mother! ! ! I guess his mother died unexpectedly, and then his father heard that collecting the relics of the God of Death can resurrect people (or he can become the God of Death to resurrect people), so he found a way to get an eye. Because his goal was too big or for some reason he gave it to his children and asked them to collect it. (Maybe her sister also had an eyeball that was robbed) This is purely personal, don't criticize if you don't like it!

It is a very interesting book. Although the routine may easily turn off a large number of people, you can see that the author is very careful in writing, and the story is quite thoughtful. You can even see that the author quoted classics, quoted the source and research of the story, and in order to be rigorous but also joyful, he did not hesitate to transform himself into the author of the happy Pipi Monster 😁. It took me four days to read the latest update from the first chapter. Although it is very time-consuming 😵, this book makes me feel that it is worth it. Come on^0^~ Author!

Thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, the author doesn't have to watch other people gossip! We have a group of fans to support you! If you have anything to say, let's talk about it, and we can all shoulder it together! The work is really good!

For novels of this type, it would be much better if the setting is influenced by laws, causing technology to weaken. Really, many novels only know about nuclear bombs. To be honest, as long as you can't reach the level of crossing the void, technological weapons can teach you how to be a human being.

Is it possible that the setting of this hidden sect is a powerful lord territory hinted by the author 1 It may be a foreshadowing for a great unification 2 There may be no such thing as a great unification in the evolutionary plane, which is closer to reality. This plane is equivalent to being held captive by that powerful lord 3 It is really a background of this plane, but the possibility is very small. Because there is no check and balance, and there is no rule, it means that the main energy of this sect is not focused on this plane. The above is purely personal speculation, the author is the biggest, big big! ! ! !

The real protagonist: There is a heroic boss brother and a heroic boss sister-in-law. Even before awakening, there are dark gold equipment waiting for you, and the high-level rare leader Erha is always ready to lead the way. False protagonist: Just after time travel, the rich and powerful second generation comes to provoke him. His parents and sisters are all missing, and he still has a younger sister to feed. You have to rely on yourself for everything, being angrily attacked by elite monsters in the wilderness area, and embarking on the awakening mission in embarrassment with the most useless mental attribute for awakening. 😁😁😁

I ordered it for five yuan because of the review, and it was extremely poisonous. Why did the book list recommend it so much? I took it.