In the Primordial World, I Devour Three Thousand Heavenly Daos

To be honest, looking at the world now, as soon as Naruto Douluo comes out, the emotion of disgust will immediately emerge. It's not that these are not good-looking, but I don't know what the crazy studio did recently. Full-screen Douluo Naruto and the like, no matter how good the thing is, it was killed by these beasts.

As soon as Douluo Dalu came out, the crowds became less and less crowded.

The author should pay attention to his sense of proportion. In a world with low martial arts such as a pig's trotter, a golden immortal swallowing a little Li's flying knife, there is only 60% success rate. Then, only a high martial arts or even a quasi-sage with no immortal martial arts will have a success rate? Not to mention fairy tales and fantasy, I'm afraid even becoming a saint is not enough, your power system will collapse after only twenty cards.

The Great Emperor Ziwei in the novel "Emperor Ziwei", what's the use of setting up a chat group and adding a few mortals? There will be one day in the sky and one year in the earth. The bones of other people will melt in the time it takes you to drink tea and take a nap.

It was originally written quite well, but when I saw that the main character, Ziwei Emperor, didn't have any real character in the group, I felt that it was worth a lot.

The author's book is very good, very good. Let me give you some suggestions. Let the protagonist learn from Lao Tzu's method of transforming the three pure things into one thing. Let the protagonist transform into three clones. The first clone and other protagonists accompanied Laozi out of Hangu Pass in the West during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and transformed Hu into a Buddha and accompanied Duobao to stay at the Buddhist Gate. It's also considered to be a universal food for Buddhism and Taoism. The second clone allows the protagonist to appear. The Ziwei Heavenly Demon settled in the Demonic Path. The third clone is drawn. Confucian clone. For the protagonist, the game world tastes the ups and downs. By the way, spread your own reputation for the protagonist. This is just my personal idea for reference only. I hope the author can consider it.

Don't read the comments... I asked you why you wrote such ghostly virtues later, and it turned into a hegemony article... To be honest, a batch of people have been screened out before. If you look at the group of people who abandoned the book, you will also screen out the group of people who read it.

It's broken, it's broken, the setting is broken, the plot is broken, I can't watch it anymore.

Why did so many people abandon the book when Douluo came out? The main reason is that the protagonist Tang San has incorrect views. Most people in our country cannot stand this kind of person.

You can imagine the plots from Emperor Ziwei to Xiao Li Feidao in a world with low martial arts! ! !