The Immortal Mortal

To be honest, I enjoyed reading this book. The plot has always been in conflict, and the protagonist has been on the opposite side of various major events, and his life and death are precarious. As a mortal cultivating immortality, I feel that the protagonist is still too domineering and overt, not sneaky enough, and puts himself to death too obviously time and time again. Without the halo of the protagonist, death would be impossible. Mortals have clear grievances, revenge for hatred, and repay kindness for kindness. This excellent characteristic is reflected very well in the protagonist. In addition to this distinctive feature, in a world where there are so many practitioners, ordinary people are practicing hard, and the cleverness or cunning is not particularly reflected. I feel that the protagonist is a bit too expensive. Basically he is fucking other people, so it stands to reason that others should be fucking him most of the time. Also, every time you upgrade, basically everyone in the original world is gone, just like opening a new instance. If you can level up, others can also ascend. At least the upper and lower worlds can be more integrated. Many people wrote and wrote and then lost it. They had no choice but to come and lay the soy sauce. The story ends hastily, which is a wise move. To be honest, I couldn't stand it any longer. I was starting to feel tired. I finished it in a week. But overall, this book can be considered a very good book about mortals cultivating immortals. At least there are some mortals cultivating immortals in it. Compared with many protagonists, it is obviously better to make money, at least secretly.

The reason why I'm so impressed by this book is that it's so bad but it's still very popular.

Full of loopholes and no logic. Without putting any effort into it, I just put it into play wherever I wrote it. I just finished writing this chapter and forgot about the previous chapter, which is totally wrong.

When I first read this book, I was amazed. I felt like I had finally found a good book. After reading about 1/3 of the book, I started to feel tired. The plot feels a bit templated, but it's understandable. After writing about this subject for so many years, that's all I can write. It is a pity that so many wonderful characters written before have gradually disappeared as the protagonist ascends. The author probably wants to express that the protagonist is so talented and beautiful that he is far beyond ordinary people, and the friends around him are constantly falling behind and too far behind to follow. However, how lonely it is to have no friends around when you are cultivating an immortal and upgrading? How cool it is to think about it. Halfway through, I can't stand it anymore. More importantly, I am increasingly disapproving of the male protagonist. The male protagonist's name is Wuji, but his behavior is too Wuji. No matter what it is, he will always stand on the opposite side of everyone, and insist on his own inner justice. It seems to be very powerful; before ascension, that's all, if you have the confidence, there is nothing wrong with being young and arrogant; after ascension, you are inferior to others, and you are not as powerful as others, but you don't know how to hide your strength and bide your time. If you want a tree to stand out in the forest, isn't it looking for the wind to destroy it? It is not wisdom. Once or twice, it can be said that the young man's ambition was too high, and he did not restrain himself after that. . . . What is a mortal? The author focuses on the clear distinction between grievances and grudges, and repaying kindness with hatred. This is good, but the passion of young people only lasts for hundreds of years. To put it nicely, the heart of a child will never change. To put it badly, it is like watching a child who will never grow up. , The sharp edges and corners are constantly colliding in the world, and I feel distressed at first, then I hate that iron cannot become steel, and finally I am tired, why can't this child grow up and learn something? The most ordinary person can always cherish certain creeds in his heart, but he will continue to grow: when he is young, he will have a vigorous and passionate belief in justice; in middle age, he will have a mature and smooth appearance that is soft on the outside and strong on the inside; after a long time in the world, he will be tolerant and transparent; instead of being static. Immortals are the ones who can break their eyebrows. Mortals may have unwilling persistence in their hearts when faced with adversity, but they are irresistible and can temporarily hide their pride Maybe it will change in the future, but I don't want to watch it anymore. That's it

Oh my god, it's so poisonous. He died because of a woman's betrayal in his previous life. In this life, I tried my best to save a woman because of a little kindness, but got nothing in return. I am really an invincible love brain. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, I would have died ten thousand times 😓

Upgrading map by map feels like farming monsters and playing dungeons. The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes

To be honest, I thought of reading this author's book because of the strongest Qi Shao. Because there is a shortage of books now, I suspect that Qi Shao and the author of this are not the same person, right? If Qi Shao's writing level is above average and can be read, then this book is simply below average. The foreshadowing is not filled in, the logic is terrible, the writing is not at all, or even very poor, and the words used to describe the protagonist can be used as derogatory words as synonyms! There are some places where the plot is missing and there is no description. It's a book shortage, and I can't stand it! I figured it out when you wrote it! Keep looking at it like this! I almost vomited. If I can still hold on to my three views, in the end, even if I change the map, can you finish the thing? Even if the side mission is opened, can you finish it? Are you the author? You are just a little brat who ran to watch TV while eating, and ran to the toilet while washing your hands! Do you know how uncomfortable this feeling of half and half of this and that hole not being filled and that half of it being left unfinished makes readers uncomfortable? Why do you have to ask for money and a monthly pass every few chapters? I just read this and it was interesting, oh, I changed the map and started again. What does the previous chapter have to do with my next chapter? What a trap? What kind of character story is complete? What foreshadowing? What is this? I don't remember? Oh, please support Lao Wu and vote more. What the hell, books written by newcomers dare not be so bad, OK? This is written by the same author, who dares to believe it?

As a master, the first few chapters are very poisonous. Pig's feet are self-righteous. If you are crazy, others must not alienate Pig's feet. Otherwise, they will all be forgetful and heartless people.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. As a bookworm of more than ten years, the biggest problem with this book is not the protagonist's failure or the supporting characters' intelligence. The main problem is that the world view is a mess. Every society has its own worldview and its own way of survival, but in this world, it is important to have both face and dignity. There is no order at all, even a chaotic place has its own rules, and the strongest will make the rules. For example, in the early days of Wentian Academy, despite its name, it was still the strongest sect. As a result, the sect had no rules and killed people at will without indicating where it was strong. Other sects rushed to send him geniuses. Why? Where do the resources come from? Where does credibility come from? Even the mortal kingdom is just the willfulness of power. The sect just writes whatever comes to mind. There is no cohesion, no credibility, and no order. The following ones are pretty much the same, as is the New World, the Starry Sky Palace, etc. The person who makes the rules puts his face on the ground and tramples on it, while others work hard and are used as gunslingers. Individuals can break the rules and forcibly create conflicts in order to create conflicts. All the unreasonable things are written as a matter of course, and the protagonist is mindlessly cheating and overstepping his limits. I can understand this. But I really didn't expect that the thunder-type skills could be reversed and turned into ice-type skills. If it's so simple, why do you still need to cultivate immortality?🤔

To be fair, this is just a personal favorite. I found this book on the ranking list. This book is recommended for people who like mindless and cool novels. The protagonist is incompetent and likes to show off. The fighting power in the article is also very strange. The protagonist can kill people in three or four realms at every turn, and the supporting characters are basically brainless. Looking for trouble, for example, a family kills people all over the continent. Only the protagonist exposes it, and the others cannot see it. The most important thing is that others come in casually without covering up. There are more than one main insiders. Just to give you an example, those who like mindless and cool articles can read it. The protagonist likes to make pretentious speeches.

A characteristic of Goose is Lao Wu's novel is that the growth of the protagonist's wife, son, girlfriend, relatives, etc. All depend on luck. The protagonist is a bereaved dog who is often beaten and hides in unknown corners. He is trapped for hundreds of thousands of years. It is so unreasonable.

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The Mortal Way in the book is indeed Wuji's first creation. The "Immortal Man Art" on the bad street also requires spiritual connections and spiritual roots to be practiced. The person who created the "Immortal Mortal Art" method just wants more people with poor qualifications to practice it, but it does not include real mortals. Mortals are just names. The other people without spiritual connections mentioned in the article are not cultivating or cultivating immortals. It is martial arts, and practicing martial arts to the extreme will also increase your lifespan. Why does the male protagonist have 108 veins, while others only have 102, 101, etc.? It is because the male protagonist has the deepest understanding of mortals, and the most important thing in the pulse-opening medicine is lotus root. The lotus root used later is no longer an ordinary plant, and the male protagonist cannot produce resources such as heaven, materials, and earthly treasures out of thin air. Cultivation does not necessarily mean using the most powerful techniques, the most powerful spiritual veins, and spiritual roots to reach the top. Just like in "The Strongest Abandoned Young Master", Ye Mo uses the worst spiritual roots to practice the "Three Life Art" that suits him best. Mo Wu in the book Ji is the person who is most suitable for "Immortal Mortal Jue" and "Reverse Immortal Mortal Jue". The more connections he develops later on, the better Mo Wuji's understanding has become. The later exercises are completely different from the original ones, becoming the most suitable way of cultivation for him.

If I hadn't read Qi Shao at the beginning, I probably wouldn't have picked up this one. Fortunately, I read Qi Shao in the first few novels I randomly found, and then I seemed to continue reading books by two authors, one of which was Silky Chicken... The online novels I read were fate. Although I felt there was a gap between them and other great writers, and they all had imperfections, they all felt classic. The Qi Shao I read at the beginning was better than the other books I randomly found at the beginning (when I could read any book)... At first, I didn't read the famous books of many other great gods that were collected at the same time or not on the list. Although Ning Cheng later started to read and couldn't keep up, he still remembers his bumpy and happy journey, remembers Sanxiu 2705 and Cen Shuyin, and still remembers Dao Where Are You at the End and Traces of the Heart... I have been looking for books recently for a long time. For a long time, most of those who are interested can read dozens or dozens of chapters, or even stop after a few chapters...

It was good at first, but the more I wrote, the more nonsense it became. It was just deceiving people, so senseless.

The owner of the statue in Chapter 1036: Mo Wuji practiced in the Sea of ​​Annihilation for ten thousand years before he reached the early stage of the God King from the fifth level of the God. The Great Wilderness was also in the early stage of the God. Isn't this time span too big? It only took a few hundred years for the pig's feet to travel from the mortal world to the divine world, but it actually took ten thousand years for the gods to reach the divine king 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

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Pretty good! No nonsense! The story is clear! The author's works are extremely readable!

All I can say is that this book is a piece of cake. I can't imagine that the person who wrote this book is a platinum student. Is the threshold for platinum gold so low?

This book has some shortcomings, but they are not as bad as what some people say after reading a few chapters or complaining without reading. Many readers reported that Pig's Knuckle was nosy or not forbearing enough when he was not strong enough. Because this book is positioned as a fairy tale. What does xia mean? If you watch your friends in trouble because you are too weak to save them, and become a Ninja Turtle, then you might as well watch a palace fight drama. Each of them is more scheming and more capable than the other, and they are more capable of being grandchildren. In fact, what we like about Lao Wu is not how good his writing is, but because the pig's feet he creates are bloody and loyal. Dare to fight, dare to fight, and refuse to admit defeat. In reality, due to various reasons, we live a humble and humiliating life. It would be boring if the pig's feet in the book were still scheming and calculating every step of the way. Therefore, the readers of this book are polarized, some do not like it, and many like it. In fact, after carefully reading the finished book, I think it's really good. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. If you don't like it, please stay away and be polite. If you like it, please subscribe and support it.

A reminder to those who don't have female protagonists and those who are germaphobic, don't be deceived by those people. This book has a heroine, and the most beautiful woman Qin Shuyin is the heroine. She is in the list of protagonists. In addition to having an affair with the most beautiful woman in the world, the protagonist also has affairs with several women, and has a relationship with two of them. He even has a granddaughter with one of them. The protagonist lost his virginity half a year before going to college.

After reading Immortal Mortal (I don't want to complain) As we get to the next hundred or so chapters, we get crazier and crazier about adding new characters without filling in the pits. It only takes a few chapters to fill in the holes for completion. What the hell, come on! Zhenxing Lost Continent Pit The First Pit: Where did Linglong go? The explanation was endless. The second pit: Another plane attacks the pit of the Lost Continent. Just fly over and kill them all and that's it? The third pit: Why did Qi Laoshi and the mysterious woman escape to the Lost Continent? Died without explaining anything? There is obviously a big pit here Pit 4: Zhenxing lost the continent and rebuilt the Tianji Sect, but just a few hanging people were left there? Does the leader of Tianji Sect deserve to die? And he predicted that he would lead Tianji Sect to its peak? The fifth pit: The old fisherman has not seen the protagonist since he explained it. It was not until the protagonist was in the immortal world that he was not afraid of the Great Immortal Emperor that he confessed that he was a weapon spirit. Is this how to fill in the pit? The sixth pit: How is the country of the protagonist? He also emphasized the importance of researching technology, poaching people like crazy, and then disappeared? Not to mention, there are too many pitfalls, countless pitfalls have not been filled, or have been paid for in one go! Just remember, follow the protagonist and accept him as your eldest brother and master. Will the ending be really good? Except for those in the God Realm, everyone else is dead or has disappeared. The revenge was not even finished, so it was finished at a fast pace. The couple who took care of Yan'er and the people from that sect disappeared into Tianhai His first servant, from another plane, had been waiting for his master in Zhenxing all his life. After the protagonist left, the people from another dimension who fought with Zhenxing attacked Zhenxing, enslaved Zhenxing, and killed all the women. The protagonist would rather appear on other cultivation planets than on the True Star. Everyone who came out of the Half-Immortal Prison and knew the protagonist has disappeared. All the descendants of Wusheng Tao disappeared into the fairy world. The person who plotted against him, the master of the shop, was very successful in cultivation. He arrested his friends and took them out to train their souls every day. The protagonist has tens of millions of black stones and has gone from being a semi-immortal to being a saint. Hairy. There are hundreds of pitfalls to fill, and even more pitfalls were crazily added to the end. The pitfall of what Tian Nu said before his death was half filled in and solved. The black dragon chased him out and skinned the mortal sect. The protagonist saw it and didn't dare to fart. Haha😄 The mortal universe is finally here? ? ? There is still an important rule missing, and the last few pictures have been brought up, so why not fill it in? After a long time, a real star from the Lost Continent comes out to regret himself and merge with the devil? These people have entered the cosmic world and have not even been reincarnated. How can the universe not be completely corrupted? The Seven Realms Stone has another realm, and the protagonist doesn't even know what realm it is, so it's over? Your mortal world is nothing. Your mortal way is more powerful than the supreme ruthless way. Because you call mortals ruthless and hypocritical. Along the way, how many people have helped the protagonist to identify his eldest brother and his master? How many people have achieved the Tao of chickens and dogs and ascended to heaven by themselves? It is time to disappear, disappear, change disappear, change disappear, change death to death. A mosquito pet has walked all the way, been locked in its own space for tens of thousands of years without doing anything, and then comes out to talk and express its bloodline? I haven't even finished introducing the supernatural powers, so I have to write about Tiangang 36 The crack in the divine world that changes the world has not yet entered. There is a guy named Hongjun, a Hunyuan Saint, waiting for you inside. You, a little mortal, have not cultivated and understood the Tao, but everyone cultivates the Tao. What about collecting luck**? It means nothing. Even the towers of the gods cannot be written clearly. I don't have the ability to write about the pitfalls around me. Just write less people. Add people like crazy. There are dozens of missing supporting characters. Don't tell me anything, just throw it away after using it? The most amusing thing is that the main supporting character Lei Hongji has not yet been fully written, and he follows him from the Lost Continent of Zhenxing to the Saint of the God Realm. He was fucked to death in the final blow. Destined enemy. I haven't even explained the treasures I have on my body. One of the top ten ancient swords comes out. He didn't explain anything about the Tianji Stick, and even in the God Realm, he said it was of great use and was useless. In no life or in the past life, will the Hongmeng breath gourd you get deflate every day to heal your injuries? Why did the Immortal Emperor say he also got a gourd? I won't write about this pit either. A bunch of characters appeared at the end,,, The nun who came out of the Tower of the Gods with you was kidnapped and didn't appear until the final ending. In fact, his body has been taken away by the first woman of the protagonist Wen Xiaoqi, and then he goes to bed with the protagonist's brother Hou Yu every day to get revenge on you, otherwise no one will die in the end and he will die for the protagonist, and the demonic path merges into the mortal realm. Don't look for your friends when they go missing, and don't take revenge on those who promise to avenge you. Establishing a sect can be done for you, Tianji Sect, Tianfanzong, and Mortal Sect. There aren't many birdmen if you add one. I'm really convinced. The author didn't outline it well, so he improvised it. Seriously, everyone who was friends with the protagonist died and disappeared. The ones who killed the protagonist's friends are still there. Stop talking and get angry! There are too many pitfalls, hundreds of pitfalls. No beginning or end. To put it simply, if you don't fill in the hole, how about writing Nima? Why time travel? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? The only one who looks like you is looking for you, where is the awesome meteor? ? I'm so drunk. Let the author be so stubborn! The most obvious hole has not been filled! I killed the author because of one thing, and then the ending. This is the most obvious pitfall. A bad end is a bad end

What a stupid protagonist, why does Qidian always recommend this kind of book?

This is the most rubbish book I have ever read. It was in vain that I followed it until the end and gave it up.

I also knew it was coming to an end, but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Every night when I go home, no matter how tired or miserable I am, I will take out my mobile phone and watch Mortal. Now that the mortal is gone, I feel so lost. I feel like there is no reason for me to look forward to the evening. Because Fighting to Break the Sphere was going to be a TV show, I read it. I felt that it was not as exciting as Fifth Brother's book. I never had the desire to read other people's books. Now that Mortal Endings is over, I don't know when Fifth Brother's new book will be released. It seems I have to uninstall the starting point first.

The most frustrating novel in history, the kind of novel that makes people full of anger and nowhere to vent their anger. No wonder it attracted hundreds of thousands of scoldings.

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After reading nearly two hundred chapters, I felt sick every time the heroine appeared. He is always self-righteous and does not take things for granted. What the hell? If you need it, I have to give it to you. In the end, I was given something and said it was for trade, and this book was said to be collected by the state. After reading the three words "gold content", it should be called water content.