Ascension on a Chosen Day

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After a while, I saw the monster with black and white horns on its head, holding a green bamboo umbrella as a sword, and stabbed straight at the snake catcher. Of course, the turbid waves surged into the sky, the distant mountains overturned, and the majestic giant bell was defeated by its sharp edge and went away in embarrassment. If you want to know what happened next, please listen to the breakdown next time! Dividing line The background color was chosen by the lovely Nanchi-chan! The color version is on the first floor. Definitely next time. #Doujin Jianghu Zone#

The lingering sound of the orchid umbrella, green robe and zither, the charming eyes are as fresh as yesterday's begonias, and the faintly reflected reflection of the clear pond. The line drawing is in the comment area.

There are countless small pavilions among the flowers on the other side of the Wangchuan River. There are tables in the pavilions, a few, and idle ghosts. In recent decades, more and more ghosts would rather stay in the dark underworld than reincarnate. As a result, there are more and more idle ghosts in the underworld, doing nothing all day long, wandering around the underworld, inevitably bumping into each other, and quarreling constantly every day. The consequences were not serious at all, but they were noisy and annoying to the Tenth Palace Yama. The King of Hell ordered that if ghosts quarrel again for no reason, they will be sent to reincarnation, and the ghosts will no longer dare to quarrel after hearing this. It's just that life is extremely boring and really uncomfortable. Now that I have given up the thought of reincarnation and want to stay in the underworld for the rest of my life, I can no longer do nothing as before and have to have some fun. After a while of discussion, the ghosts began to build houses and buildings in the underworld and reclaim land... Various industries in the underworld expanded on a large scale. The idle ghosts settled down and established businesses in the underworld according to their own abilities, and many emerging industries even emerged. The originally deserted underworld became lively day by day. The only difference from the human world was that there were no taxes in the underworld. The idle ghosts are no longer idle ghosts. They do things in the morning to earn some ghost coins, and in the afternoon they go to their own squares, teahouses, theaters... To have fun, and their lives are unprecedentedly comfortable. The small pavilion in the flowers on the other side was also built by the idle ghosts themselves. Many ghosts have not received remittances from their relatives for a long time, but they can already rely on themselves and entertain themselves in the underworld. Xu Ying's grandfather and father built a house in the underworld, and Jiang and Xu's family lived a smooth life together. However, they have been worried about the promise of their only relative left in the world. Their neighbors are a group of snakes. When the two families met for the first time, the snake ghost, who had transformed into a human form, was so frightened that he almost lost his mind. The two families sat down and chatted, and then they found out that the She family's grandfather died at the hands of Xu Ying's grandfather, and the She family's parents died at the hands of Xu Ying's father. Fortunately, in the underworld, there are no taxes, people no longer need to catch snakes, and snakes no longer need to hide from people. The Xu Ying family and the She family became neighbors in harmony despite their deaths. Xu Ying's grandfather and father, and the She family's grandfather and father, these four ghosts, go to the small pavilion by the Wangchuan River every afternoon to play mahjong, and sometimes fight landlords and push Pai Gow. Because there is a huge yin-yang mirror under the Naihe Bridge, and you can see all kinds of major events in the world in the small pavilion. Xu Ying appeared several times in the Yin-Yang Mirror. The child grew taller and stronger, but he also embarked on the same old path of catching snakes. The snake family's grandfather and father also saw their only little snake left in the world, Gan Qi. Seeing Xu Ying embarking on the road of catching snakes, the elders of both families were worried, hoping in their hearts that the two children would not encounter him. I was just afraid that something might happen. On this day, four men went to the pavilion to play mahjong again, and suddenly there was a commotion in the Yin Yang Mirror. Gong Qi, who has grown into a big snake, appears in the Yin-Yang Mirror. Then there is Xu Ying. Seeing Xu Ying tearing apart all the joints in Xian Qi's body in just a few breaths, the two elders felt that their world was about to fall, and the two children were following their old path. The four of them were sitting in the pavilion, not playing mahjong, but looking straight at the Yin Yang Mirror. When they saw Xu Ying letting go of Gong Qi, the two elders breathed a sigh of relief. Seeing Xu Ying kill the god, the elders of the two families burst into laughter and cheered. When An Qi and Xu Ying were fighting side by side, the two elders hugged each other and cried with joy. "Do you think these two children can escape our fate?" Xu Ying's father asked. "At least they can live a better life than us." Yes, they have been suffocated by taxes all their lives. Originally, humans and snakes did not interfere with each other, but taxes make it difficult for people to live, so they can only catch snakes to survive. Those snakes who have been cultivating for many years should have been hiding in the deep mountains and forests to practice with concentration, waiting for one day to ascend to immortality. After the ordinary snakes were caught, it was their turn for the snakes in the deep mountains and old forests. "When humans and snakes unite, the real bad guys should be afraid." Xu Ying's grandfather had a hint of expectation in his eyes. "I hope these two children can turn the world upside down and change the world." Jiang Qi's grandfather shook his tail. When that day comes true, the ghosts in this underworld can safely reincarnate.

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Chori Risheng has reached a very dangerous juncture. In the past two days, I have re-watched The Supreme Being of Humanity and The Legend of the Shepherd, and compared it with Ascension on Another Day, and I felt a lot of emotion in my heart. The exquisite structure, gorgeous imagination, and twists and turns of the plot of Ascension on Another Day are no less than those of several books including Lin Yuan Xing. But it is obvious that Zhai Zhu is out of energy. It is precisely because of the lack of energy that the appeal of many places has dropped a lot. Although the entire novel is still very exciting, it is a bit boring compared to the previous work. This problem didn't exist in the early stage. When Zhou Qiyun crossed the tribulation, it was majestic, and he really wrote the spirit, grandeur and soul-stirring. But then the crotch began to stretch, and I didn't really pull it up after several orgasms. For example, Xu Fu overcame the tribulation, Emperor Zhou overcame the tribulation, etc. It's really exciting, but that's compared to other people. Compared with Zizhu Qianzhu, compared with the opening chapter Zhou Qiyun crossing the tribulation, it seems a little discouraged. Looking at the whole plot, I felt that it was too fast, too hasty, lacked details, and lacked foreshadowing. It seemed to be advancing rapidly according to an outline. It had a tall skeleton, but the flesh and blood was a little shriveled. A lot of content that could have been particularly brilliant failed to produce the desired effect. Leek Man and Angler are both particularly stunning settings, but their mystery, weirdness, and horror are not enough. The world is changing, ancient sects are born one after another, and the dispute between Nuo method and Qi training can be felt by just thinking about it. But these contents give people a sloppy feeling. All kinds of jokes are added to this process, which even makes it feel like child's play. Of course, these contents are definitely still above the level. The reason why I say this is because of comparison with the previous work. There are still bright spots like Jin Buyi in the middle, but overall it is boring. Especially entering a new map now, it can be compared to Qin Mu entering the battlefield between the remaining tribes of the founding emperor and the demons in The God of Shepherd. Penglai Immortal Lord and Little Heavenly Lord, who are also the top experts on the current map, are really not inferior to the Woodcutter of Furila and others. If it were other authors, this might happen, and it really means that their abilities have declined. But I don't think Zhai Zhu is like that, because the structure, plot, setting, etc. Of this book are still excellent. And in the early stage, it was really possible to write that kind of majestic momentum. This shows that this is not due to ability, but to energy. It can be felt that Zhaizhu wants to maintain high-speed updates, but does not want to be fluent, so he writes with high intensity every day. But in this way, the quality of Chori Ascension is really greatly affected. I sincerely hope that Zhaizhu will stop working so hard, stop being too dedicated, and update less every day. Four to five thousand words is the most appropriate. Too many words will have a great impact on the quality of the novel. I am a reader and of course I want to see many updates every day. But when I see a novel that could have been more exciting, but its quality has deteriorated due to updating issues, I also feel uncomfortable in my heart.

In the vast void, there is a young man in blue. He is the Jade Xu Tianzun from the witch universe. He has traveled in this void for millions of years, seen many strange things, and visited countless powerful beings. However, on this day, he came to a strange place he had never seen before. What is shown in front of you is a boundless sea of ​​chaos. Even the well-informed Yuxu Tianzun can't help but be amazed by it. He stepped into the Chaos Sea and looked into the depths of the Chaos Sea with a solemn expression. There was so much misfortune and no vitality left, which made him feel palpitated. "Outside the Chaos, fellow Taoists from the Great Void, please come here to meet me." A voice came. Yuxu Tianzun immediately looked over, and the next moment, he appeared in front of that person. Yuxu Tianzun saluted him, the man returned the salute, and then the two of them sat down. "I am the Chaos Lord of this generation, Tai Huang. I noticed an unusually powerful aura in the Sea of ​​Chaos, but it did not come from the Sea of ​​Chaos, so I specially invited fellow Taoists to come." Tai Huang explained. "I have been traveling in the void for millions of years and have seen many powerful beings, but there is no one who can reach the realm of fellow Taoist." Yuxu Tianzun praised. After some exchanges between the two, Yuxu Tianzun introduced his experiences of traveling in the Great Void to the Emperor of Tai, which made the Emperor of Tai unable to help but marvel and yearn for it. During the conversation, Yuxu Tianzun asked Emperor Tai about the place where misfortune permeated the air. Emperor Tai then explained: "It was once a cosmic cemetery that some powerful beings in the sea of chaos jointly built to avoid being overtaken by fate. They worked together to resist the invasion of fate. However, even if the pace of disaster was slowed down, there were still people who were overtaken by fate and died. Their strongest leader, Dao Huang, told everyone that to completely eliminate the misfortune, they must open up the Sea of Chaos. But if the Sea of Chaos is opened, the creatures in the Sea of Chaos are destined to die. Therefore, under the leadership of generations of Chaos Lords, the creatures in the Sea of Chaos fight against the safety of the Sea of Chaos. " Until the birth of Emperor Tai, the Lord of Chaos, his cultivation surpassed that of his predecessors, and he was extremely domineering, forcing the cosmic cemetery to shrink into a corner, not daring to show his face easily.                                                                                      . At the kind invitation of Emperor Tai, Yuxu Tianzun stayed in the Sea of ​​Chaos temporarily. They often discussed Tao and communicated together, but their understanding of Tao was different. At the beginning, they tried to persuade the other party to accept their views, but both parties are people with firm hearts. How could they be easily swayed? So inevitably he started to take action, trying to conquer the other party. After several discussions, the noise of the two fighting became more and more loud, until this day... In the boundless sea of ​​chaos, a towering World Tree stood majestically, exuding a vast and wild atmosphere. Its roots penetrated deeply into the Sea of ​​Chaos, causing the originally turbulent Sea of ​​Chaos to calm down. Looking from a distance, it seems that there are thousands of rays of light blooming, which are impressively condensed from the innate immortal spiritual light. As the spiritual light circulates, it demonstrates its unimaginable power. Under the World Tree, two beings sat opposite each other. The figure on the left is dressed in blue and has a friendly smile. He looks like a big brother next door, but his aura is extremely wild and unrestrained. Behind him, a looming portal opened. Within the portal was a complete universe, which was none other than the Jade Void Heavenly Lord from the Witch Universe in the Great Void. The figure on the right looks resolute and resolute, exuding an aura of calmness and authority. There was a strange knife stuck beside him. The blade was composed of a handle and a handle. It was powerful and seemed to cut through all obstacles. The reincarnation ring behind his head rotates slowly, exuding a charming halo. He is the current Chaos Lord of the Chaos Sea. "The Tao is the same, all roads lead to the same destination. I only need to find what all the roads have in common, and that is the real Tao." The voice of Yuxu Tianzun sounded leisurely, full of persistent pursuit of the Tao. Unknowingly, Yuxu Tianzun has been in this sea of ​​chaos for thousands of years. The two have discussed the Tao many times, but they have never been able to convince each other. "I have discussed the truth with my fellow Taoists countless times, but we still can't convince anyone. Since we can't convince the other party with our words, let's see the truth behind our hands." Yuxu Tianzun said leisurely. "It's exactly what I want. Every time I discuss with fellow Taoists, I benefit a lot, and I get one step closer to the true Tao." Tai Huang said solemnly. As the Taihuang's words fell, the originally huge World Tree shrank rapidly, and finally turned into a ray of light that disappeared into the eyebrows of Yuxu Tianzun. The calm sea of ​​chaos suddenly became turbulent, and the Emperor Tai slashed forward with his sword. With one strike, immeasurable amounts of seawater evaporated into nothingness, forming a bottomless abyss billions of miles deep. Under the raging sword intent, the sea water could not flow back. Seeing this, Yuxu Tianzun chuckled: "Fellow Taoist is really a straight-tempered rough man. He only knows how to wield swords and guns." As soon as he finished speaking, his figure flashed and appeared in front of the Emperor. A crystal-clear jade finger suddenly appeared in front of the Tai Huang's eyebrows. The fingertips were intertwined with the auras of countless avenues, each of which reached its extreme. The reincarnation ring on the back of Tai Huang's head was spinning like flying, and he tried his best to resist the attack of that finger. The fingertips broke through the layers of reincarnation, but they were still unable to break through the reincarnation loop of the Tai Emperor, and finally exhausted their strength in the reincarnation. "It seems that today there will be a life-and-death struggle to distinguish between your ideals and mine." The Emperor said in a deep voice. As his words fell, more terrifying aura fluctuations erupted in the sea of ​​chaos.                                                                                                             all all all all all At this time, all his strength exploded, and every move and every move had a violent beauty; and the Taihuang was born from the Fuxi Divine Clan. This race has a natural affinity for the Tao, and the speed of comprehending the Tao is far faster than other races. Every time Taihuang's sword strikes, there are countless ways and sounds, which seem to represent the supreme mystery of Tao. The Yuxu Tianzun from the Great Void and the Chaos Lord Taihuang started a fierce contest. They tried their best to make every move and move without missing a beat, and fought hard to prove each other's ideas. But in the distant cemetery of the universe, misfortune permeates the air and all things are extinct. At this time, several figures were paying attention to the battle between Emperor Tai and Yuxu Tianzun, waiting for the right moment to take action to eliminate these two enemies in one fell swoop. "We have been waiting for hundreds of millions of years, and now we finally have the opportunity." One of the figures said coldly, "When both the Emperor and the visitors from the Great Void are harmed, it will be the best time for us to take action." Another figure chuckled and said: "Several generations of Chaos Lords have died in our hands. Although this generation of Chaos Lords is better than others, he is destined to die in our hands." Another voice came: "Fellow Taoist, go ask the Tao Emperor for instructions and see what he says." "I have reported this matter to Lord Dao Huang." Another figure replied, "Lord Dao Emperor did not wake up from the stone statue. Lord Tai Huang is afraid that he will be overtaken by disaster and has no time to care." "In this case, there is no need to wait for Lord Dao Emperor." As these words fell, the figures fell into silence again. And in the sea of ​​chaos, the battle between Emperor Tai and Yuxu Tianzun became more and more intense. The two tried their best to verify what they had learned throughout their lives, and both fell down in the end. There was a big hole in Yuxu Tianzun's chest, and the knife intent spread across the wound. Even he couldn't recover in a short time. The Taihuang's sword was broken into two pieces, leaving only the handle in his hand. There was also a finger-sized hole between his eyebrows that was slowly dripping with blood. "Chaos Lord, Yuxu Tianzun, I'm waiting to send you on your way today!" At this moment, several figures suddenly emerged from the void, each blooming with extremely terrifying power, and they all attacked the Taihuang. At this time, the Emperor of Thailand has run out of gas. He could only grab the handle of the knife in his hand and pour the remaining strength of his body into it to slash at those figures. One of the figures tried to block the dazzling sword light, but by the time he reacted, it was too late. The power contained in the sharp sword light made him feel the fear of facing death. The battle between Taihuang and Yuxu Tianzun, although the Taihuang was seriously injured, unexpectedly allowed him to gain a deeper understanding on the road of reincarnation. He brought the power from the past years to the present, and his strength skyrocketed instantly. Faced with the sudden power of Emperor Tai, the man didn't even have a chance to react before he turned into ashes and dissipated invisible. Even the mark he left at the end of the road was mercilessly destroyed by the Emperor Tai. At this time, several other people's attacks also hit Tai Huang at the same time, and Tai Huang fell. However, they were still unable to remove the mark left by Tai Huang at the end of the road. At the same time, Yuxu Tianzun also noticed that the situation was not good. Several more figures emerged and attacked Yuxu Tianzun. Faced with this sudden crisis, Yuxu Tianzun had a vague World Tree pattern appearing between his eyebrows. This was a sign of the manifestation of his soul. At this critical moment, Yuxu Tianzun decisively completely integrated the soul with the physical body, so that the strength of his physical body was once again enhanced. He stretched out his fingertips and tapped one of the attackers right between the eyebrows. With a muffled sound, the man's avenue was shattered in an instant, his life was cut off, and the mark he left at the end of the avenue was also erased. Seeing this, several other people all slapped Yuxu Tianzun, and his soul died. At this time, a coffin suddenly appeared out of thin air, and the body of Yuxu Tianzun was quickly put into it, preparing to escape. This coffin was made from a piece of divine material that Yuxu Tianzun accidentally obtained when he was traveling in the void. It is full of spirituality. Taking advantage of a few people's unpreparedness, they directly tore through the void and fled away. After this earth-shattering contest, Emperor Tai and Yuxu Tianzun finally fell into the sea of ​​chaos. However, the mark they left at the end of the road cannot be erased. They are simply too powerful. Chaos Lord Taihuang has inherited the heritage of previous generations of Chaos Lords and has comprehended millions of great ways. His understanding of the ways has reached an incredible level. If one day, someone can learn his million-dollar avenue, he will definitely return to the present world and be resurrected from the mark at the end of the avenue. And Yuxu Tianzun comes from the Great Void. There are all kinds of avenues in the Great Void that the Chaos Sea cannot understand. As long as there is one person in this world who still remembers Yuxu Tianzun and calls his name, he will definitely wake up.        ,, The new Chaos Lord Xu Tianzun is learning the ways of Emperor Tai while looking for the coffin of Yuxu Tianzun. Until one day, the new Chaos Lord finally found the coffin. The new Chaos Lord pushed open the coffin lid, and an unusually wild sound suddenly resounded throughout the world. "Praise my name! I will come back——" "Praise my name! I will return——" "Praise my name! I will return——" The new Chaos Lord then shouted loudly: "Fellow Taoist Yuxu, why don't you wake up?" As these words fell, an inexplicable force began to appear between heaven and earth. Beyond time and beyond space, the figures of Yuxu Tianzun in the past years all looked over. The body lying quietly in the coffin slowly opened its eyes, and a wild and unrestrained aura instantly filled the world. "Jade Xu Tianzun, reborn in the world. Time flies, and after a long period of hard work, the new Chaos Lord finally fully understood the millions of avenues left by the previous Chaos Lord Tai Huang. He held the broken knife tightly in his hand and slowly poured these avenues into it. With the nourishment of the power of the avenue, the original defects on the broken knife were miraculously repaired, glowing with a new light. The new Chaos Lord stared at the end of the avenue, and saw millions of figures looming among the millions of avenues there, as if they had crossed the boundaries of time and space and were walking towards the real world together. When these figures gradually converged into a majestic silhouette, an invincible existence descended on the Sea of ​​Chaos again. The King of Thailand, he is back again. After several thrilling battles, the three most powerful men, Yuxu Tianzun, Taihuang and Xu Tianzun, finally eradicated the cosmic cemetery that was causing chaos in the Chaos Sea. After the war, Emperor Tai, together with Yuxu Tianzun and Xu Tianzun, left the Sea of ​​Chaos and went to explore the vast void to pursue the true way. And the creatures of the Chaos Sea will continue to move forward and write their own legendary chapters in this vast universe.

Evaluation of the current plot The pace is too fast. Zhou Qiyun, then to Shendu, Xu Fu, and the resurrected Zulong Emperor. Then transition to the next big chapter through [Two Years Later], so that the protagonist's strength will be greatly improved. It can be seen that Zhu has thought about this in the outline. However, the pace of writing was too fast and too urgent, and many contents and settings did not have time to be developed, and the chapter ended. Zhou Qiyun's chapter rhythm is the best, but after Zhou Qiyun everything went into chaos. For example, take the Shendu chapter. The demon king is invited to enter the capital ahead. The pace of the preparation is so great that there are so many aristocratic families. The result? As soon as we entered the city, we were ready to go out. Comes and goes in a hurry. If the guess is correct, Zhu's own idea should be to reveal all the functions of the six secrets through the Shendu chapter, so that readers can know how powerful they can be by simply practicing Nuo - don't forget, each secret has a nine-layer cave. But the plot was written too quickly and there was no time. Most of the results only have names, and even the functions are not complete. The Xu Fu chapter is also very obvious. Elaborate on the realm and strength of Qi refining. Then through the Tomb of the Ancestral Dragon, Qi Refining VS Nuo Master, VS Nuo Qi fellow practitioners, we can see the intensity comparison of these types of cultivation. As a result... All these chapters passed by in a hurry. The description is only a grand narrative from beginning to end, lacking details. Even in the Xu Fu chapter, the foreshadowing of the Qi Masters was not enough, causing the subsequent emotions, although tragic, to always lack a sense of reality. These are all a pity. But there is no remedy. Remedy 1: Expenditure line. Example ①: Narration, Zhou Qiyun's memories. After successfully overcoming the tribulation, fight with the owner of Niwan Palace. The ultimate cultivation in Niwan Palace + the power of Qi refining and ascension period are reflected. At the same time, he can make up for the regret of not seeing the ascension of Patriarch Zhou, and he can also bring out the dead to earn feelings. Example 2: Group portrait, Yuan Weiyang Yuan Weiyang's cultivation progress is interspersed here and there. In addition to Huang Ting, other secret realms can be opened to explore the role of Qi training methods. Function: Control the rhythm and increase the diversity of the plot. Remedial Plan 2: On the main line, add descriptions of the functions of secret realms and realms. Fantasy text, upgrade flow. In addition to giving readers a sense of refreshment, the role of realm is to anchor the author's outline. Control your priorities. It's not like some people say now that emphasizing realm is just plain writing, and it must be divided into high and low elegance. Humanity is "inside it, but outside it". Isn't it precisely because each realm is written clearly that it brings out the talents of Da Zhongniu and Feng Xiaozhong who transcend realms? For example, in the last chapter, Xiao Zheng was hit by Xu Ying's magical power and went back to bring in reinforcements. Can you introduce the realm or ability of Jindan? Or guess, Xu Ying's Nuo technique requires at least as many layers of Niwan to perform. Clarify the intensity of each level? The most regrettable plot at present is that Zhou Qiyun ignored the cup of tea. The early stage is completed too early. If there is a successful ascension, the battle inside the divine light and the description of Zhou Qiyun's state of mind at that time. It would be nice if I could write about it later.