A Wuxia Journey Beginning at Mount Hua

This book is quite good, and I can see that the author still has ideas and enthusiasm. Unfortunately, the writing is not very good, and the fighting scenes are too bland. In addition, the emotional creation is a bit abrupt. There is no emotional foreshadowing at all when the Yu family is wiped out. The reader has no emotions at all, and it will only feel a bit like Jianghu. A word of advice ——The key lies in the detailed description, which is seriously lacking now.

The plot is good and the characters are well-drawn. Writing needs practice.

Can the author please change the introduction? The second sentence has a linguistic problem.

The book is very good, and there is actually nothing wrong with it. From the point where the protagonist almost dies, it can be seen that the author has some pursuits.                                  But, the Internet is a carrier, and the vast majority of readers read books to relieve stress. Once they are satisfied, it will definitely become the mainstream.        ，，， I understand and agree with the author's pursuit. If writing a book is just a hobby, there is nothing wrong with the author. If not, if you have an idea about the flow of the book, then the first few books should follow the mainstream and enjoy it to the end. With your writing skills, it will be easy to distinguish it from pure white writing. When the results come out after two or three books, and the fan base has increased, then I can start writing the novels and plots I want to write the most. If the results are not as good as before, I will return to the original style after this book and write the story I want to write in the next book. The old author Ma Jia pretended I didn't say anything. But as a new player, you should first gain status and then realize your ideals. The book is very good, but the subject matter and writing style are destined to have a low grade limit. After finishing the book, the author still chooses a popular category, and the results will be much better no matter what.

It is indeed a good book, and it feels very comfortable to read it directly. I originally thought that the book review section was full of bad people, but after reading it, I found that I had wrongly blamed you. This book is a rare masterpiece. The author has great reviews. Please update it soon. It's hard to find a martial arts novel that I can read, so I must keep it.

For those who praise Yue as inferior and look down on Linghu Chong, Jin Yong's remarks about readers in the postscript are still applicable today: Several literary critics in the mainland commented: Ning Zhongze, Mrs. Yue, learned that her husband was despicable and despicable, and she committed suicide in despair. It was unkind, and she did not need to commit suicide. Some people also think that it is unreasonable for Xiao Feng to commit suicide and that it is unreasonable for him to slap A'Zhu. Of course, Russia's Tolstoy's "Anna Karenina" did not have to commit suicide. Everyone's values ​​in life are different. Some use modern people's utilitarianism to substitute martial arts characters, and some use "Wei Xiaobao's values" to comment on Xiao Feng and Ning Zhongze. This means that some people think that Shi Kefa and Wen Tianxiang are very "stupid" for not surrendering, and Yue Fei for not disobeying orders. Some people in Hong Kong commented that the descendants of the She family in Beijing for more than ten generations guarding Yuan Chonghuan's tomb were "foolishly loyal". Of course, some people also regarded Dong Cunrui and Lei Feng as "unreasonable". It is reasonable to view historical figures based on "philistine motives" and only those who are foolish kings, traitorous ministers, corrupt officials, and despicable people. Some people are obsessed with intrigues and cunning deeds. Naturally, they can't stand people like Linghu Chong and are keen to clear Yue Buqun's name. Jin Yong essentially praises Swordsman and accuses Linghu Chong of not being able to help. Shang Yue Buqun is like a brothel madam who accuses prostitutes of not accepting customers. This is nothing more than applying utilitarian values ​​to romantic martial arts literature. However, reality is not martial arts, and martial arts is not reality. Many people are really misinterpreting the values ​​conveyed in the original work.

The first part was really good and chivalrous, so I braved it and read 100 chapters. But I couldn't stand it anymore, it was too poisonous. If you want to have no heroine, you don't want to write so much about how beautiful this woman is, how good she is with the protagonist, and then she is raped and killed. I really don't understand the author's psychology.

Why is there no book that seriously pursues the peak of martial arts? If you want to go to Xiaoao together, you can only go to the Huashan sect. For swordsmanship, you can only rely on Dugu Nine Swords? The author has the same qualifications as a plug-in, plus some extra plug-ins like Deep Blue. Even if Taizu Changquan doesn't give you the fist to break the void, it will be sorry for your heaven-defying plug-in. Isn't it a routine operation for the more awesome protagonist to have this plug-in that makes people in the Swordsman world go for a swim in the River of Time and become as sparse and normal as taking a shower every day? If I had this plug-in, I would never think about learning internal skills from Huashan. I would directly study various basic knowledge, and then go to the court to earn points and use the resources of the court to strengthen myself. I first set a small goal, immortality. Then it will take hundreds or thousands of years to increase the dimension of the world. Who is boring and wasting time walking around the world with you? What force can compare with the imperial court? The first step is to use the court to support yourself, the second step is to use the whole world to support yourself, the third step is to build your own world, and upgrade yourself while upgrading your own world. It's really awesome to carry the whole world behind and transcend, and a real person is like a dragon. Since the author has given such a big hook to the protagonist, it would be too far-fetched to only focus on the so-called world. This is just a metaphor. I don't mean that the author should write according to my wishes. I just hope that the author will have a bigger picture and not be too petty. The protagonist has such awesome cheats, coupled with his incredible aptitude, but he only focuses on the so-called Dugu Nine Swords? To be honest, if I were the protagonist, I wouldn't look down on the so-called martial arts at all. Why not study Taoist, Buddhist, and Confucian classics, and by the way, I would have enough time to live forever, so why not? To be honest, if you go to Huashan to become a disciple, you will not have a better future than if you go to become a policeman.

What are you fighting for? Most of the people who support Linghu Chong are refined egoists who have no bottom line in life. Modern people, especially those who are most poisoned by public knowledge, can just be happy. It is best for such a person to be a fair-weather friend. Any extra effort will be a loss. Those who stand out from the crowd can be divided into two categories, one is those who focus on sect, and the other are those who focus on upbringing. The modern meaning of the sect's replay is the national idea and the family idea that values ​​​​nurturing. Lao Yue's disadvantage was due to his lack of ability. He was dismissed too quickly. As a leader of a big sect, without a master who teaches by words and deeds for three to five years, you can know a lot of martial arts, but his methods are still poor. Huashan didn't know how to find people from the Sword Sect in these years, and couldn't teach apprentices. Look at how many apprentices are like. He, Yue Buqun, had died in a sword-qi battle, and he had no means to defeat him. The fact that the Huashan Sect was not destroyed by his hands was due to the blessing of the Patriarch. As for Linghu Chong saying that he was unfaithful, unfilial and benevolent, many people must have refuted it and asked who of you would be willing to give birth to a son to be Linghu in reality. However, it cannot be said that all Linghu's problems were caused by him. Yue Buqun was responsible for half of it. Failure to raise him was the fault of the father, lax teaching, and the laziness of the teacher. Obviously Lao Yue is a scumbag. Finally, there is Boss Jin who has a very crooked butt. Looking at his position, he is kneeling and licking him in all kinds of ways. All kinds of shady cousins ​​rob my cousin's sister. This is something that cannot be imagined in a novel. He wants to write an autobiography that will be more popular than the novel. They all want to see how his cousin tortures his boss Jin.

The novel is really good, the character creation is above the standard, the plot is not cliche, and it is clean and well worth looking forward to.

The first volume of Swordsman is pretty good. The only drawback is that he doesn't like women. You say you want to see the peak of martial arts, but women are a stumbling block on your path to martial arts. But you're not practicing boy's skills, and you've also portrayed those women with such individual personalities. But none of them are heroines. I vomited

Feng Qingyang really didn't care about the Huashan Sect and the Sword Sect. If Feng Qingyang cared about the Huashan Sect and knew that the Huashan Sect had very few people, he would not have cultivated a single disciple within more than ten years. Yue Buqun also knew how to recruit a few more disciples and refused to reveal that he was still alive after meeting Linghu Chong. No one in the world knew that Feng Qingyang was still alive. The Huashan Sect relied on Yue Buqun and his wife. To say that Feng Qingyang cares about Jian Zong, even if he had never found any disciples of Jian Zong before, he never found any disciples of Jian Zong after such a big event as Jian Zong paid homage to the mountain. There was no news in the world, and after the failure of Jian Zong, he did not cultivate a few disciples to pass on Jian Zong. There are only rumors that Feng Qingyang may have committed suicide after being deceived and the Jian sect was destroyed. It has no contribution to the Huashan sect or the Jian sect. Writing about Feng Qingyang living and teaching Ling Hu Chong is a failure. Feng Qingyang was either a white-eyed wolf who ignored the Huashan Sect and the Sword Sect, or he was a loser who didn't know how to teach his disciples and only took advantage of Linghu Chong to become famous.

The writing is very good, unlike the pig's feet in the fan fiction I have seen before, which do things for a purpose. The pig's feet in this book are simply chivalrous in their hearts, but there are too few. Looking forward to it. As a lover of time travel literature, I believe that, like most readers, I hate Zuo Lengchan's hypocrisy and domineeringness. But I have never seen anyone take the initiative to resist. Most of them are dealt with passively according to the development of the storyline. Even if the strength far exceeds Songshan. This has to be said to be a pity.

Firstly, he is a majestic gentleman swordsman who sells face in the world. Yu Canghai, who has lived in Sichuan for a long time, also knows his name; Secondly, he is the leader of the dilapidated Huashan. Although he is one of the Five Mountains Sword Sect, he is incomparable with other sects. The Six Immortals and Six Immortals of Peach Valley Personally, he forced them to go down the mountain to avoid; Thirdly, his martial arts was mediocre, he couldn't beat Zuo Lengchan, and he couldn't catch Tian Boguang. He might be better than the Thirteen Taibao and Yu Canghai, but he was only limited to one fight Fourthly, he was jealous of talents, this is true. In the ruined temple, Linghu Chong blinded the eyes of eight masters with a sword. He ridiculed the other masters for being in the limelight and had a strange attitude For the past five years, he has had a very bad sense of security and was very suspicious. Linghu Chong was his disciple who was raised by him, but he could not be trusted. He forced Linghu Chong to kneel down and swear to show his loyalty many times Of course, this was before he cut him off, but after he cut him off, he was a complete pervert, so there is no need to analyze it.

In fact, everyone who has worked hard in society can see how difficult it is for Yue Buqun. Lao Yue did everything he could for the sake of the sect. Now he regards the Huashan Sect as a company, with Lao Yue as the chairman and Linghu Chong as the future successor whom Lao Yue has cultivated little by little. Anyone who has started his own business can understand Lao Yue's hardship. When he can only rely on himself, he has no choice but to put down his family and do everything possible to keep the company alive.

It is repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist is handsome. According to the principle of the less handsome, the more emphasis is placed on how ugly the author looks.

Chapter 19: You are both holy and stupid, casually throwing a thousand taels of silver to refugees? Don't you know that one thousand taels of silver weighs one hundred catties? At that time, the imperial court's annual tax revenue was only 10 million taels of silver! Are you a disciple of a down-and-out force in Huashan who runs a gold mine? You can't watch it without thinking. I quit.

I want to ask why every volume has girls offering sacrifices to heaven? Does the author have special hobbies? Like the person who modified the Baidu entry so that every female military general would not die well?

The protagonist encounters a member of the Demon Cult. This person (temporarily referred to as A)'s father died when he was young in a fight with Old Man Yu from the Divine Fist Sect (the upright one) (by mistake). This A promised to kill old man Yu's whole family, rape his granddaughter in front of old man Yu (this is something A is capable of doing), and also kill the passing protagonist. The demon sect was cowed by the protagonist after killing several people. Then old man Yu said that he wanted to stop the continuation of hatred, so he let A cut off two swords and let him go. The protagonist also noticed that there was still hatred in A's eyes. The next chapter is about the protagonist traveling with Old Man Yu and his family, and also about the granddaughter's secret affection for the protagonist. Then, not long after, Old Man Yu's whole family was killed, his daughter-in-law was raped and killed, and his granddaughter committed suicide by biting her tongue. Then at this time, the protagonist went to kill those people from the Demon Cult in order to avenge Old Man Yu and his family. At the same time, many people were dissatisfied when they let A go. The author said that these people had incorrect views and were too violent.

It's really good-looking, refreshing and a little funny. I hope the author will find a female protagonist and a love line or something 😁😁

The author of "The Swordsman" has great ideas. After all, "The Swordsman", such an upright and majestic knight, is very interesting. Especially the old boxer part is very nice. I feel that Liu Zhengfeng deserves to die, and he did a good job in saving his family. The devil's sect is not called a devil's sect for fun. The things that appeared in the original Wu Ba Gang were cannibalism, random killings, rape, and a group of demons dancing wildly. But the appearance of the proud conspirator and the scheming bitch Ren Yingying as the protagonist is a bit intriguing. They hooked up together and flirted with each other, and the handsome pot rescued the shit stirrer Ren Woxing. However, the result was his own fault. In addition, there was no one-click 999 operation at the critical moment of the system, and the weak Lao Yue successfully sacrificed to heaven. (Lao Yue: "Two rebels, it's really hard for me!") The even more poisonous one is Xiao Linzi. Without your "talent", it's understandable that you can't take revenge in a short time and are eager for success. "Zhao Haha" You have already chopped off one of Yu Xiaozi's hands, so you can't chop off both of his hands in one step, break three of his legs, knock out all of his teeth, turn Xiao Linzi from hell difficulty to novice difficulty, and even help practice the "Evil Sword Manual". Do you really need a sister Lin? Dragon Scroll (Chapter 8) I don't know if the author of Xiaoao Scroll is too good at achieving good results. So far, all I have watched is following the plot, and the protagonist has completely let himself go. Just like the villain, he pretends to show off. The general plot is like this. Zhao Hehe first pretended to be awkward, then pretended to be LOW, and then pretended to be LOW... (This is how the author wrote it, first... Then... Then... And then). Save the righteous people and gain fans: "I saved you, and if you want to repay me, I will bring my family martial arts for reference...", And then there may be some cannon fodder A, B, C and D who will jump out and take the sword with a 100% face. When you meet a bad person, beat him to death first, "Send me your martial arts skills and I'll give you a good reward." "Don't hand it over?" Torture again, "Fake?" Torture again. "Hired", I'll send you a new life...

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I don't understand that the writing is like a female channel. Every time it is written about the protagonist, she has a peerless appearance. (Yue Lingshan looked at her junior brother. He had a slender figure and was about the same height as senior brother Ju Ran. With that handsome face, this junior brother must be good.)

This was my first book at Qidian. I had no experience at that time and it was indeed very toxic. I am planning to write another fanfic of Xiaoaoao, which has been internally submitted. You can check it out when the time comes. It should be an improvement over this one. Finally, thank you for your criticism. Only with criticism can we make progress!

The previous scenes were full of little poisonous points and subversive plots, but when it came to Ren Yingying, she collapsed. . .

Evaluation, living eunuch.

Is this a martial arts novel? I've read more than ten chapters and I'm still talking about it.

It's not a high-level martial arts, and adding a system doesn't bring it in at all! There is no level in martial arts and you can become invincible every minute! It would be better without a system!

There are more poison spots in the back, it's an old problem

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