Rebirth of the Smiling, Proud Wanderer: I Want to Be the Cult Master

When I watch it, it's all about driving around various girls. As a girl, I really hate watching these. Isn't it good to write a good plot? From the initial shock to the gaudiness at the end, it's a pity the writing style. I feel like I'm putting the cart before the horse.

I don't know which god's vest it is. The level is in the top three at the starting point. It is really not easy to write a book that I already know about Xiaoao in such a colorful and fascinating way. Both the imagination and writing style are just right. The characters basically have their own characteristics. There are very few fools. The upgrade process of pig's feet is good. There is no one step to reach the sky. The same is true for martial arts. It is well-reasoned and well-founded. It rarely fluctuates. The writing is basically consistent with what I read. Like it.

Unexpectedly, after nearly a hundred chapters, it turned out to be surprisingly good. Although it is written about the background of Xiao Ao, the original male and female protagonists Linghu Chong and Ren Yingying of Xiao Ao do not have many roles. This is very good. There are many fan books about traveling through Linghu Chong and so on, which are particularly boring. Can you write the same protagonist better than Jin Yong again? On the contrary, the book describes a middle-level demon sect who is constantly promoted, coupled with his love-hate relationship with the eldest lady of Huashan, which is very attractive. In particular, the supporting characters of the Divine Cult that are not described in Swordsman are all flesh and blood. This book can be said to be the costume version of Du Lala's promotion, or the martial arts version of Romeo and Juliet. Even if you have not read Xiaoao, it will not affect your reading experience. I hope to maintain the style, and never let the protagonist easily obtain the Sunflower Secret Book, the Nine Swords of Loneliness, etc., Become invincible in an instant, and then become an ordinary and cool story, that would be boring.

The writing is surprisingly good and has a strong sense of immersion. If the next 400 chapters are also at this level. Then the next book can not be written about fan fiction, but directly open a book similar to "Swordsman in the Snow"

I have watched a lot, and I feel that the highlight is the meeting and separation with Yue Lingshan. The rest are a bit ordinary, with ordinary plot development, cliché adventure and loss of virginity, the protagonist's personality is not distinctive enough and is a bit popular, and several female characters appear too quickly and are not impressive. They are too like supporting characters and are dispensable, and other supporting characters are not good either. Overall, the writing is good, and the plot is ordinary and featureless. You can watch it or not. It feels like a martial arts test, with a lot of room for improvement. Make hay.

The front part is very good, but I saw several pictures of Lin Pingzhi's mother, a forty-year-old woman. Do you have any quirks as the author? You can't write enough. I was really disgusted by it. . .

You are so fucking drunk, why don't you write Tong San to death and keep being a disgusting person again and again? How about playing the novel routine from twenty years ago? It's really not refreshing enough.

Yesterday, January 16, this chapter of the Eastern Invincible finally came full circle, and they were very happy. This should be Lu Songxian's version of The Invincible. It is also the Invincible in my mind. It is the best in the world but it is disgusting and creepy. I don't know how you feel. Anyway, I have watched 4 or 5 different versions of The Invincible in the movie + TV series. Lu Songxian's version impressed me deeply. Very good 👍Two monthly passes

The part where the author wrote about the little junior sister was so amazing. I will die if I can't see the little junior sister again 😍

I'm very upset about why people who write about Xiaoao always write Lao Yue as a big Yin Bi, just because he hasn't become bad from the beginning? Sure enough, if you keep doing good things and do bad things, you'll be fine... Just like Zuo Lengchan at the beginning????