A Great Adventure in the Wuxia World

Finally, I saw a real martial arts novel. In recent years, the martial arts from Qidian have all been written as game novels, with levels marked on each head... I personally think that the most exciting thing about martial arts is that no one knows the strength of the other before fighting, and can only judge through their own eyesight, the other's reputation, and experience in the world. It's useless to tell you how high your realm is and how deep your skills are... Kung Fu, two words, one horizontal and one vertical. Those who lose, lie down. Only those who win are qualified to talk about realm. For martial arts such as the traditional Jin Gu Huang Liang Wen, let alone the difference in martial arts between the Middle Earth and the Western Regions - the Middle Earth practices the eight meridians of the Qijing, while the Western Region monks practice the three meridians and seven chakras. Let's just say that they are all from the Central Plains martial arts: some people take it step by step and accumulate experience; Some practice the Yang meridians among the eight meridians, and some practice the Yin meridians. For example, Xuan Ming Shen first practices the heart acupoints when he comes up with his palm, and like the Immortality Secret, he opens up the Rendu and Du meridians from the beginning... Without help, who dares to say which one is stronger and which one is weaker? The realm of each family is different. Can you say which realm is considered first-rate and which realm is second-rate? At what level can one be considered a master? Third rate, but still a master... Not to mention that the title itself is ridiculous. . Just saying "first-class master" can only be regarded as an adjective. Only in the same world and in the same arena can there be recognized first-class masters. Like the Eight Tribes of the Dragon, it is recognized by the world that "Beiqiao Fengnan Murong" is a first-rate master. In The Deer and the Cauldron, the world recognized Chen Jinnan as a first-rate master. Besides, Grandmaster and Grandmaster are just honorific titles. Grandmaster is a state, but it refers more to the state of martial arts thought rather than martial arts cultivation. Ning Daoqi in "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" or Zhang Sanfeng in "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword", who has better martial arts? But can you say that Zhang Sanfeng is not a master? Besides, there is a saying that is often said in martial arts, [You should not underestimate three kinds of people when traveling in the world: women, children, and monks]. Everyone knows the reason for this, so I won't repeat it. But why do you have this kind of Jianghu experience? Isn't it because it's not easy to see through a person? So everyone can only guess logically which identity is generally not easy to mess with. If a random person can immediately and accurately judge that he is a "second-rate master" by watching others play against each other, then why does he need this kind of experience? What is the use of those old martial artists and their half-life accumulated martial arts experience? Not to mention, the level of some novels can be seen at a glance...

Thoughts on watching Farewell My Concubine As the saying goes, most people who are righteous are butchers of dogs, and those who are unfaithful are all scholars. This opera by the author has sung all kinds of emotions in the world, including the unpredictability of people's hearts. I originally thought that Master Ma, as the imperial eagle dog, was a ruthless and merciless character. But here it is written that eagles and dogs are also chivalrous, tender, and loyal. I originally thought that the little leper would be different from the original drama. Although he could not become a famous actor, he could still make ends meet and not worry about food and drink as long as he practiced hard. However, the author's reasonable modification makes us understand that people's hearts are unpredictable and their desires are endless. The protagonist's temporary kindness and soft-heartedness not only harmed him, but also harmed himself. It is precisely because of this little leprosy incident that the protagonist understands: When people live in this world, they must have their own reasons for doing things. This is probably the reason why the protagonist was able to bear the heart to kill people and finally merged into ancient times as a modern person. When I felt something, I didn't know what to say, so I just made a few random sentences, hoping that the author wouldn't make a joke.

The fairy begins, and the more he writes, the more he boasts. The opening is simply a masterpiece. I think this opening can be compared with Cuckoo Bird. From acting to martial arts, the warmth and warmth of human relationships, and the changing situation. Although the plot develops with the rhythm of the movie, the characters are very full. Later, he avenged his master and fought against Jin Lou alone, which truly expressed the world in his heart. Even though there is a lot of blank space, the flaws are still intact. Later, the writing was too complicated, and the protagonist completely became a symbol, a person who pursues becoming stronger and loses himself, a person who cannot empathize, and a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goal. What is Jianghu? Jianghu is a story, Jianghu is wine. Jianghu is not just the best in the world. There are two reasons for this. First, the protagonist's force expands too fast. After experiencing several worlds, there is no limit to the force. As a result, the plot cannot be developed well, and the goal is achieved by pushing sideways. In the following world, the protagonists are either the best in the world, or they are pursuing the best in the world. They have completely lost the fun of traveling around the world, and they no longer make new friends. The story and wine end here, and the struggle for hegemony begins. But it's always cold at high places, so Jianghu has really become the backdrop for completing the mission. The martial arts adventure has become the martial arts upgrade. Second, the author follows the same pace when writing books and writes too little about the parts not covered in the original work. Take New Dragon Gate Inn for example. The author boldly changed the world line and changed the fate of many people. The writing is actually very good, and it is also very close to the character's personality and very real. But I only wrote about a few scenes that happened in the movie, so the article will be very short. If you write a story that takes 10 years, you can write 50 chapters, and if you write a story of one day, you can write 50 chapters. Personally, the author still cannot escape from the original work. I read this book over the past few days and felt it was such a pity.

After reading this volume, I felt a touch of sadness. Cheng Dieyi and the others were struggling to survive in troubled times, and Su Qing was also struggling in reincarnation, all seeking a living. The past experiences will eventually be lost in the long river of time. No one will remember it. Only Su Qing will remember it all.                                             I hope the author will give more words to the supporting characters to make the characters more outstanding. The one who left the deepest impression on me in "Farewell My Concubine" was Xiao Lezi, and so did this one, but they are different after all. In the original work, an optimistic and tough-tongued child ultimately chose to commit suicide. The sentence "How did they get into trouble? How many beatings did they have to take?" I still remember it fresh. The little leper in this article reminds people of madness and madness, but it does not break away from the color of the character itself. I hope the author can give them more spirituality, rather than a movie symbol, which originates from movies but is different from movies.         ，，，，， If you ask me what I'm missing, I don't know either🤔

To be honest, the author of this book is simply not suitable to write such an ordinary book about changing the world. The first dungeon is really well written. Except for the first chapter, there is no clue that the protagonist is a time traveler. Even so, the story is interesting and adequate. I won't talk about the author's writing style, I can't fault it. If the author has another book to talk about, I suggest the author write a single world novel. I feel that the author's writing is more than steady, but not flexible enough. What I mean by agility is that in different worlds, different backgrounds, and different social environments, the protagonist is a bit static and lacks agility.

The actor has many years of life, but the love is deep in the place, and there is only one old man left in the house. The story of hell is endless, and the play is hard to control. After a change, it starts again, and the only thing is that the most important thing cannot be left in this world.

I have almost finished watching two plots, and the writing is really good, but it is limited to narrative and environmental description The core of the character is empty. A person is shaped by his experience. Different people have different emotions, different principles of doing things, and eat different tastes of tea, rice, oil and salt, even in the same environment and the same goal. Different behaviors and mental activities, but the protagonist of this article does not seem to have flesh and blood, and has no bones. The author feels that the protagonist gets angry when he should be angry, kills people when he should kill, and acts like a knight when he should be a hero. It seems that he has everything, but everything ends in a superficial way. No matter how good or bad a novel is, it is like a movie, but even in the same plot world, I feel like I am watching an actor's personal editing to the film and television camera... In fact, the first world has this problem, but it is overshadowed by the continuous fast-paced events. Maybe you want to express the character through dialogue actions, but you really didn't write it out, at least not the protagonist. The same is true for the plot. The protagonist has obviously gone through the main plot again, and the camera has always been on him. I don't know why it feels like a bit of a trap. You can say that the thin plot is limited by the subject matter of the movie, but I don't think it is always the case. First, the time jump causes The second is that this book actually directly strangles all the lines that can develop the plot. When Ma San appears, fight and kill; when Fourth Master appears, fight and kill; when the bandits appear, fight and kill; when officers and soldiers appear, fight and kill; the same goes for Dongchang. All possibilities that could enrich the plot are all ended in one kill. Regardless of the master-disciple love, brotherhood, and love, the few strokes of love are not enough, and coupled with the fast-forwarding of the main plot, it is naturally tasteless. Limited by personal level, the writing style of opinions is inevitably messy and concise.

(Continued) When Su Qing was studying opera in the Guan Family Class, her mental age was between 20 and 30 years old, which was the age for hard work and hard work. He could be famous just because of his face, which may not be justified in that era. At least his singing ability must not be low, which also means that he is good at grasping the heartbeat in the play and good at acting. In addition, he was influenced by "Lord Ma" and the older generation of heroes before leaving, and he also had a chivalrous spirit. These things affected his later acting style. But after all, he is still a fledgling and a little immature, but that is why he is kind at first. When he was in Longmen, his mind was between thirty and forty, but his body was in his early twenties. Psychologically, he longed for a partner, and his body also secreted a large amount of hormones. He also had the life-saving grace of gold and jade, so he had emotional entanglements. At the same time, the desert was windy and sandy, and the soil and water supported each person. He was fierce and bandit. It was during this time The product of his sword skills can be seen from the things he did to practice his sword skills. The wonderful thing is that all of this was driven by chance. He didn't know the existence of Diao Buyu, but since he encountered it and couldn't let go of the sword skills, he was somewhat corrupted. Fortunately, he still had the emotional support of gold and jade, so he didn't completely go dark, but added a bit of a temperament like a lone wolf in the desert. At the end of the article, it is mentioned that he bought candied haws and distributed them to his children, which proves the profound impact of his experiences during the Republic of China on him. At the time of Rain of Swords, his mental age was over forty, but due to its special nature (time travel), although he had a lot of abilities, he achieved nothing. It happened that the system allowed him to seize power. With the growth of the first two worlds, he was able to control things like Fat Oil Chen, Lian Sheng, etc. Lei Bin and others are mentally moving to plan a game, but based on the current situation, they still cannot beat the imperial court. It is relatively dark. Therefore, I boldly speculate that the next world may allow the protagonist to see some bright people and things. Considering that the body in his thirties has not yet practiced internal skills, maybe it will be the "Condor Shooting Trilogy"? Moreover, the girl's beading in the Republic of China world was mentioned again, and there was also the matter of gold and jade, so his training of the little girl was not out of the ordinary. It made up for the shortcomings of the first world and proved the deep influence of the first world on him. Above.

You guys, please stop being so arrogant. As a posture bookworm, I understand better than anyone else what is literary youth disease and true talent. I also understand those who say that the author is young and recommend Xiaobai's novels. There are many details in the book that some people cannot understand. But again, this book is very good, very good, very good. It's so good that I bought a foreshadowing for more than a hundred chapters, and it was revealed after more than a hundred chapters (defeating Shangguan Jinhong's blood drop trick). The world in the book is about human relationships, grudges, and no one can tell the right and wrong. Definitely more than twice as good as Wen Chao Gong and "Martial Arts World Adventure". The fact that the protagonist is still a human being is the best proof! ! ! ! ! What is martial arts? ? ? ? It's Jianghu! ! ! ! ! What we see is a world of flesh and blood! ! ! Men love beauties, and heroes cherish heroes. Some compete for fame, some for profit, some for love, and some for insincerity. But no matter when, the young master's sleeves are always attached to beauty! ! ! ! "There are no flowers that the eyes don't want to bloom, and there are no bright moons that the heart doesn't want to yearn for." It's still the same sentence. I support this book and this world that the "great gods" have never written about! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Some suggestions. The author's writing skills are definitely at the top of the current Internet literature. I haven't seen an Internet author with such skills in a long time, and it is probably rare even in traditional literary circles. But after reading more than 100 chapters, I felt that there were some flaws and the plot advanced too fast. I think that for a martial arts novel to be called a masterpiece, it must not only rely on martial arts to dominate the world. The relationship between people, the portrayal of characters, and even the spirit of the martial arts world revealed are the core of a novel. Otherwise, it will eventually fall into the kimchi literary routine of fighting monsters and upgrading. For example, Mr. Jin Yong's novels, if Guo Jing, Linghu Chong, and Zhang Wuji had learned peerless martial arts all the way, and then defeated so and so, and finally became invincible, I think these works would not be able to become masterpieces handed down from generation to generation. The real core is the first layer of the novel, the portrayal of various characters, the second layer is the embodiment of the emotional interaction between people, and the third layer is the display of world view and values ​​​​in the world of martial arts, what is martial arts and what is a knight. The author's first plot, Farewell My Concubine, can be seen to have put a lot of thought into portraying the characters and emotional exchanges. It can be described as a first-rate novel. However, the subsequent plots have basically become a running story and have basically started to follow the routine of pickle novels. I hope the author can write each plot in more depth. I really don't want to see such a masterpiece end up falling into a cliché.