A Journey Across the Heavens, Beginning with The Return of the Condor Heroes

Why is the power of the Yuanba so weak here in Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties? The strength of the Four Symbols is beyond compare, and the physical strength is as strong as a perpetual motion machine. Why can't he beat Li Mochou? If you don't want it to be too strong, don't write it. It will be hard to weaken it.

Regarding Xiao Xun'er, my personal opinion. On the contrary, she is a heroine who has no emotions. Which little medical fairy of Medusa Yun Yun has more characteristics than Xiao Xun'er... When I read the novel, I felt that Xiao Xun'er was a fake heroine, just a tool.

The story is not afraid of old age, it depends on whether you can write it. I remember watching a story that left a deep impression on me. I traveled through time and was in Huang Rong's belly, but when I grew up, I took Huang Rong away. The good guy made me urinate frequently, urgently, and unable to finish urination. There are a lot of fanfics that follow the plot and are just a bunch of bastards.

Let me make one point, that is, the Nine Yin Manual does not say that it is a soft martial arts. Like the Great Demon Subduing Fist and the Nine Yin Divine Claws, they are all very strong and fierce martial arts. As for internal strength, I remember that when Yang Guo was saving Guo Xiang, he knocked away hidden weapons. The internal strength was also extremely strong. Yin is the concept of softness. I think there is something wrong with it. Just like Tai Chi, there is a side of using softness to overcome hardness, and there is also a powerful side. Otherwise, it should not be called Tai Chi. The so-called Tai Chi, the combination of Yin and Yang is Tai Chi.

I haven't finished watching "Eternal Life". I remember that I didn't watch it because I didn't agree with my three views. Is Fang Han really that disgusting? However, in the novels of that period, the protagonists seemed to be the kind of villains who would kill people with just one disagreement. However, one thing to say is that the author handled it quite well. People like Yang Guo who have a righteous heart always get along with each other in a friendly manner. Annoying protagonists like Xu Xian, Xiao Yan and Fang Han are killed or ignored. I still don't understand why Xiao Yan would touch the whole body of the young Xiao Xun'er. You must know that he has the soul of an adult. This kind of behavior will lead to trouble! Moreover, there was always a Dou Huang beside Xiao Xun'er, who actually allowed this kind of behavior to happen. It's really the protagonist's halo!

To be honest, according to Li Yuanba's combat prowess, even if the Golden Wheel Dharma King's Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu is fully practiced, with the power of thirteen dragons and thirteen elephants, Li Yuanba will still be knocked down with one move. As a result, in your book, you can't even beat Li Mochou. Brother, in a world with low martial arts, the ceiling cannot be as high as Li Yuanba's.

I'm trying to persuade him to give up. The author's logic doesn't make sense at all (see the Divine Eagle Volume for details). It's really toxic to give him away while saying he wants to be the King of the Sea. Either he becomes the King of the Sea honestly, or he just pursues the truth wholeheartedly and conquers the sky. The author's writing like this is simply trying to persuade two readers. To be honest, the author's writing is better than the average starting point author. It's much better, but this kind of operation (Aquaman + giving away a girl) really made me depressed. To be honest, the author's writing style reminded me of Jin Yong's Heroes when I was a kid. When I was a kid, I just wanted to be the best in the world in martial arts. When I grew up, I realized that there are all kinds of plots about tauren and giving away a girl. I hope the author can pay attention to the next book. I can't bear this one.

Look at the first chapter where the protagonist Wan Doo is left behind by the King of the Ocean. . Although I have no obsession with the harem, there are too many spiritual eunuchs in Qidian now. . . Can you believe that I traveled through time and became an emperor and still fall in love all day long? ? ?

If the protagonist draws a prize for the first time, what he gets is not Li Yuanba's strength but Li Yuanba's IQ. . . .

In Time Travel, the writing of the divine eagle is quite innovative. If I had known that the divine eagle would almost be written off as bald, I still managed to do it in the golden three chapters. It's great. Come on, author. Come on.