A Journey Across the Heavens, Beginning with The Return of the Condor Heroes
从神雕开始的诸天之旅
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Why is Yuan Ba's power so weak here in the Sui and Tang Dynasties? He has the power of the Four Symbols and the stamina of a perpetual motion machine. Why can't he defeat Li Mochou? If you don't want him to be too strong, don't write him; weakening him is painful.
Regarding Xiao Xun'er, this is just my personal opinion. She's actually the female protagonist in Battle Through the Heavens who I feel nothing for. Medusa, Yunyun, and Xiao Yixian—aren't they all more distinctive than Xiao Xun'er? When I was reading the novel, I felt that Xiao Xun'er was a fake female protagonist, just a tool.
Stories don't have to be old, it's all about whether you can write them well. I remember reading one that really stuck with me: someone transmigrated into Huang Rong's belly, but grew up and ended up marrying her. Goodness, it made me need to pee so much! So many fanfics just follow the plot and go through the motions, a bunch of slackers.
Let me point out that the Nine Yin Manual is not a soft martial art. Techniques like the Great Subduing Demon Fist and the Nine Yin Divine Claw are incredibly powerful. As for internal energy, I remember when Yang Guo was saving Guo Xiang, he deflected a hidden weapon, and his internal energy was also extremely powerful. Yin is the concept of softness, but I think that's not quite right.
I didn't finish reading Immortality. I remember stopping because my values didn't align with the story. By the way, is Fang Han really that disgusting? But back then, it seemed like the protagonists in novels were all villains who would wipe out an entire family at the drop of a hat.
To be honest, given Li Yuanba's fighting prowess, even if the Golden Wheel Monk had mastered the Dragon Elephant Prajna Skill to its fullest extent, possessing the power of thirteen dragons and thirteen elephants, he would still be easily defeated by Li Yuanba in one move. Yet in your book, he can't even beat Li Mochou. Dude, The Return of the Condor Heroes is a low-level martial arts world; the ceiling there can't possibly be higher than Li Yuanba's.
This is off-putting! The story of Xiaolongnu being given away is truly off-putting. The author's logic is completely illogical (see the Condor Heroes volume for details). Saying he wants to be a playboy while simultaneously giving away a girl is just toxic. Either just be a playboy honestly, or focus on achieving enlightenment and breaking through the heavens with martial arts.
Look at what the protagonist left behind after becoming the King of the Ocean in the first chapter... Although he's not obsessed with a harem, there are just too many unfinished stories on Qidian these days... Can you believe he transmigrated into an emperor and is still constantly dating???
What if the protagonist won Li Yuanba's intelligence instead of Li Yuanba's strength in his first lottery draw...?
Among all the time-travel stories, The Return of the Condor Heroes is quite original. Knowing that it was almost overwritten, the author still managed to deliver the golden three chapters – fantastic! Keep it up, author!