The Sword Emerges in the Smiling, Proud Wanderer

I told everyone openly that I had traveled through time, and didn't care at all🙂

I didn't seem to mention what he did when he traveled through time. Why is he so good at learning kung fu? It's not just about hard work.

The story of Swordsman itself is not very long. It can be seen that the author has stuffed a lot of branch plots into it in order to extend the story. But to be honest, the difference between the excitement of these branch plots and the main plot of the original work is too big, causing the content of the book to fluctuate. The adapted part is not bad with the original work, but the original part is very boring. Basically, the common people are bullied → the protagonist seeks justice → the villain looks down on the protagonist → is crushed by the protagonist → the light of the right path, a cycle of changing the soup without changing the medicine.

I've always wanted to complain about Jian Chu's name.

It ends at 117. The protagonist's internal strength is no longer usable, and his combat power has declined. His life will be shortened during fighting, which obviously suppresses his combat power. If you don't know how to write it, you can write a novel for several years. The protagonist later suffers from amnesia, is picked up, and becomes a husband. Then bandits entered the village and sacrificed his beloved wife. The protagonist began to recover his memory, and then he watched his beloved wife self-immolate and passed away with a ferocious face. I strongly requested that the follow-up be written like this, because I don't plan to read it, and I don't mind.

I wonder how the author plans the future of the protagonist? Why is the protagonist's revenge killing so widely publicized? What is the purpose of fame or vanity? Shouldn't it be to kill people in a dark and windy night and leave the night? When you are weak, shouldn't you just keep quiet? Jianghu has a sharp weapon in mind to kill people. Do you think you are very smart?

Why is the protagonist so special? Ren and Du's second line is different from others

I feel very good after reading the introduction and the first volume of "Song of Youth". When I was a child, I read Jin Yong's novels and imagined what it would be like if I went to the world of martial arts. It felt like changing the fate of the original characters. The ending at the end of the volume was also a good feeling. But the second volume of Sword Like Light is really a bit weird. It's like eating mooncakes filled with spaghetti bolognese 🥮. I can understand the upgrade of the skin of classical martial arts to Xianxia. After all, the only way to improve combat power these days is from martial arts to Xianxia, ​​but this full of Western fantasy style is really a bit uncomfortable. To tell the truth, if readers come in based on the categories of "Swordsman" and "Martial Arts", they will see that half of it has turned into Western fantasy. Fantasy is really weird Σ(°ロ°) It's not that I can't watch it, it's the kind of feeling that I ordered beef noodles and you gave me a plate of macaroni. The only bright spot I found was the causal explanation of why the protagonist traveled through time. I hope the next volume can be written well,

Why did you suddenly become obsessed? There was no foreshadowing before? Did I miss it?

In fact, if the wind is clear, Yue Buqun will not be able to commit suicide in the palace with a sword. So desperate, half of it is a scumbag, and half of it is forced