A Journey Across the Heavens, Beginning at Wudang

Now that she's joined Wudang, she needs to deal with Ji Xiaofu properly. To be honest, I find her whole family disgusting.

I've added it to my bookshelf. I've loved your writing style ever since that book, Huashan. It's half about the spirit of the martial arts world and half about sound values. But starting with that novel, The Return of the Condor Heroes, I realized you weren't very good at writing romance scenes. Here's a suggestion for you. Romance is a major flaw in multiverse-themed novels.

You've written so much in "Snow in the Sky," putting so much effort into it. You're reluctant to end it, but everyone's tired of it. Do you even have the energy for the next chapter? If it's poorly written, the book is practically ruined. So many people have told you to end "Snow in the Sky," but you're being stubborn and insisting on continuing. Then you'll be met with a barrage of criticism. You'll see for yourself.

I jumped straight into the snow; I had no interest in the fifth classic.

This allows Zhang Sanfeng to break through the void and fly to the next map to establish the Wudang Sect. Then, after the Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber is finished, the protagonist also ascends to the next map to find Zhang Sanfeng, and gradually, those in the Wudang Sect who have the strength to break through will also ascend. Or perhaps when one person attains enlightenment, all their relatives and friends benefit.

I admired the killing of Zhao Min, but then the next chapter doesn't kill Xie Xun? That's just utterly awful. Even though he died in the end, he was forced to kill Xie Xun because Xie Xun was causing trouble; your logic is ridiculous. Positive energy is good, but this is just twisted hypocrisy. You can secretly kill Yang Xiao, but you can't secretly kill Xie Xun, right?

Looking at the scene in the snow, I felt that the people inside were being pretentious.

Should we kill Yang Xiao? If not, I won't watch.

The Snowy Mountain dungeon is almost done, and I'm still writing a lot. I could see some chivalry in the beginning, but in the later parts, the Wind and Cloud and Snowy Mountain, it almost completely ruined that chivalry. I should just switch to another world!

When Zhao Min was killed in the first world, I knew the book was starting to falter.