Fantasy Simulator

Watched Vinal's extra episode! Please ask Jie Nan to let Chen Heng deceive a few more female leads! Anyway, the old scumbag is very skillful and will be very happy in his life. Vinal's plot makes me think that Jie Nan's love writing techniques are also good. Anyway, there are many dungeon worlds, and a single female protagonist in each world can experience the heroine for many years! Isn't it boring for the protagonist to just focus on leveling up? Let's talk about love to spice things up~

To be honest, I am really short of books. I clicked on this book because I had no other books to read. After reading the introduction, I felt it was average. But when I saw that the author was rated 5, there were more than 1,000 reviews. I had read two of the books written by this author, and then I took a look. Not much, less than 20 chapters. Tell me how you feel. 1 The protagonist feels emotionally cold, and the interactive plot at home does not feel a little bit of family affection. It totally feels like a passerby. 2 Another thing is that the author's writing feels very boring. One thing is repeated in various ways. There are two chapters about killing a monster. Among them, the part related to fighting doesn't feel like it exists. Most of it is the inner drama of the heroine (probably?), All kinds of praise, how talented she is and so on. It may seem that the words are not very repetitive, but it feels like they are repeating and emphasizing one thing. 3 The details of this book are very vague. To put it more simply and clearly, it has not been dealt with. The two most obvious points are that when I came back from the first world, I stayed in that world for about 10 years, and then I didn't feel anything at all when I came back, and I directly integrated into the identity of a student. Even if the author only needs to add one more sentence, well, the system blurred and blocked his memories or something? That's fine, at least there's a reason. Then the author didn't explain it at all and incorporated it directly. The second one, the protagonist came back with only two things, one is the bow and arrow skills, the other is the perfect body training. Then when fighting monsters, he took an ordinary wooden sword and directly cut off the arm of a monster. When you look at it, it looks very strong and handsome. In a blink of an eye, the monster was dead and the wooden sword was broken. This made me feel uncomfortable and depressed when I looked at it. At first, I thought that in this world of martial arts, this wooden sword must be unusual, so it would be fine to cut off the monster's arm, and most of the fights would involve stabbing it directly. But if you smash it immediately after beating it, that would be too much. You can say that there were various supernatural powers blessing it at that time, but there was no such thing. It was just a pure body. The above two points are very uncomfortable for readers like me who like to substitute. I originally saw that part where he was acting cool and pretending to be a domineering president, right? I was already feeling uncomfortable, and this happened again. 4 How to answer the above questions? Because there was a shortage of books, and I felt that the first world was okay and there was nothing wrong with it, I continued reading. However, I didn't really want to read the actual plot, so I skipped to the second world chapter, and ended up getting stuck on the setting. I stopped reading it after setting it up. To be honest, I was still very disappointed. I have read both the author's The Witcher and The Great Thousand. When I first saw that it was written by the same author, I was quite looking forward to it, but I was still quite disappointed. 😭😭😭

You can still watch it without leaving the original world, but the cultivation base of the True Lord will be gone as soon as you draw it later. Is it really a matter of overpowering your strength? ? Can't write without pressure? There are also a lot of words like shaking one's head, secretly shaking one's head, whispering, and so on. Reading too many of them is more disgusting than a forced smile. The plot is also the same. The protagonist can't make a fool of himself in Chapter 3. It's all about the guesses, suspicions, and exclamations of the people around him. Chapter 2 can explain it. It's finished, and it's still in progress after 5 chapters. The research on the protagonist's power is even more rubbish. It's true that every world has its own power system, but the author's description method is not good. As a result, the rest of the story is rubbish, but it's also too much to watch and not very attractive. Force Essentially, if you can't hold down this world, go to another map. Repeat it again and again. More than 3 million can be cut off more than 1 million. If you streamline and simplify, 1.8 Million will be much better There is another question. The title of the book is called Fantasy Simulator. After the original world was released, Western fantasy accounted for the majority. Fantasy Your Mother is about the same size. Look at the label. There is also a martial arts in it. It should be this world. I have used this label.

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The gender ratio is already out of balance. Can the author stop surrounding the protagonist with women? What is the difference between that and a harem novel?

I survived the intensive poisonous points in the first 15 chapters, but failed after the protagonist sighed for breath in two chapters. It suddenly occurred to me that there are "readers" who feel that the first 15 chapters are not poisonous at all? It would be awesome if there were

Still can't escape that kind of setting... The sister who is not related by blood, the female classmate who transferred to another school...

The real world is embarrassing. The first simulated world was okay, a bit like urban sims, but the pretense in the real world is really too routine. Otherwise, just downplay the real world, or don't engage in pretentious plots. If you don't do it well, it will be embarrassing, and if you don't do it well, If you are not very good at emotional drama, just set it as an orphan. I think Qidian Orphanage is not toxic. It is understandable that the writing is not good in this aspect. Many great masters do not know how to write emotional drama. However, after you set up a complex family relationship, if it is not handled well, it will be a lot more toxic.

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