A Martial World Beginning with a Bandit Stronghold

After reading the latest chapter, I can't help but share my personal opinions. To be honest, this book is far from a good book in my mind, but I still ordered it all. How should I put it, the author already has a foundation for good books. (The following is purely a personal evaluation, please do not make any comments.) Back to this book, my personal opinion. 1. The early characters are too stereotyped, and the later characters are insufficiently described. There are too many unnecessary descriptions. For example, in the early stage, there are too many third-rate and second-rate characters. They are so formal, arrange the background, arrange the inner activities, and die immediately. (Ishimura, Xie Qing and others) Some miscellaneous soldiers who are not even supporting roles are completely unnecessary. With such a formal introduction, there is no problem for the turning point of the protagonist like the Lord of Blackwater City. However, some important characters later do not receive this kind of treatment, such as the Governor Xiao Jing and the Commander Han Qianshu. These people who can be described in detail are not described, which leads me to these two characters. The image is empty. I just finished reading the latest chapter and I can't even remember their names. I still went back to look for them. For me, these two characters were failures and did not stand up. This is because the supporting characters have no connotation. The description of the background and the inner description of the characters can make readers Clearly understand the connotation of a character. Only when every character is online can we better depict the splendor of a world. This is the importance of supporting characters. A good book can make every outstanding supporting character remembered by readers. Otherwise, it means that there is no good book yet, a flowing novel. 2. It's the details. Many details are not described. For example, the world is not well-shaped. To put it bluntly, there is no "map". If you cannot enter the world where the protagonist is, it feels like it is pieced together in bits and pieces. It is all about big things, without any details. When it comes to details, you can only follow the perspective of the protagonist. It is very fragmented. It is like putting an elephant into the refrigerator. This feels very fake, very unreal, and has no sense of reality. Even the Qi country where the protagonist is currently has no content and is very empty. Now I ask, what does Qi country want? Tell me, what delicious food is there, where the scenery is good, where there are many women, where you can play, where you can rest, what the people of Qi do in a day, how to get to Heishui City, how to go to other countries. In my opinion, there is only the framework of "Qi", and everything in the framework is empty. This is what I mean when I say there is no "map". The author only wrote a frame, but there is nothing in the frame. It is not even as good as the beginning. The period when he was a bandit was well described, and other fightings and other fights are not mentioned too much. The lack of writing does not allow the author to write more exciting content. 3. It's the world view. When I saw in the last few chapters, the protagonist wants to unify this world and has to conquer other worlds, I was very panicked. To be honest, I personally don't think the author can control it well. In my opinion, this is the beginning of the collapse. When the content of a world is not "full", opening a new world is empty, itself. The description of the world where the protagonist lives is not rich enough and exciting enough. We still need to open a world. What we can write is just starting to start nesting dolls. The description of this world has not yet explored enough depth and connotation. Let's start another world. It is better to finish it and start a new book. Use this book as a draft and further fill in the content and details on the outline of this book. It is definitely better than writing about conquering other worlds. In one, I watch martial arts. I want to see the rivers and lakes, not the battles. I want to see the various factions in the rivers and lakes fighting, the loyalty of heroes, the tricks of conspirators, the domineering emperors, and the insidiousness of villains. I want to see domineering knives, sharp swords, and unparalleled guns. I want to see a pair of I want to see the invincible fists in the world, I want to see the devil who kills without any calculation, I want to see the heroes who challenge the world, I want to see the stunning beauty in the world, I want to see the world-beating, I want to see the souls devastated, many, many, everywhere is not a river and lake, everywhere is a river and lake, battles, martial arts, magic weapons, money, power, conspiracy, tricks, all are rivers and lakes. A full world is a real world. It is enough to be able to write a real world.

After reading 7 chapters, let me talk about my feelings. The story is too old-fashioned. It goes back to the time when I read Jiudingji. I dreamed back to ten years ago, when I killed someone as decisively as boiled water. I think dark flow can be considered dark if it does not involve killing people. Only when it writes about the darkness of human nature, despair, madness, pain, hysteria and a series of other emotions can it be called dark flow. Decisive killing and selfishness can also be called the dark flow. This is the sadness of the dark flow. The characters don't have any characteristics, and the writing is too rough and white. It has passed the era of reading short stories all night long. For old bookworms like us, it is like eating dumplings with exposed fillings, which are tangible but not real. The best Mortal stream I have ever seen is Wang Yu's Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. You can check it out. The core is to upgrade and change the map. Although this book is not poisonous, it is not good to read either. I'll speak more bluntly, please forgive me.

Zijie

This type of novel is good, please write more

No, it's getting worse and worse. One chapter is just like a few words. I'm still spending money to pursue it.

Now that I have seen it, let's talk about my humble opinion: The protagonist is set up to be ruthless and ruthless, and his flaws must be repaid. He is a son and daughter of the rivers and lakes, and there is a happy grudge. However, the type of protagonist is really not on the stage. He thinks about confiscating the family and killing the family, killing women and children all day long, and then gets more resources to practice, and then kills again after using up. This plot is simply fucked

I'm a little bit upset, and I always kill people and wipe out families, and then I say you are a good person. Well, I tolerated it when my strength was low. Even though I am innate, I still kill people and wipe out families. Is there any difference between it and the devil? And you said you just like this, so comfortable? What do you guys know? It's normal for you to run away early, right? Which of the normal ones doesn't capture the king first before catching the thief? I have to kill more minions to feel comfortable! Also, when handling a case, he never leaves anyone alive unless he has to. That makes me laugh. Then why do you let him enter the court? Wouldn't it be better to just be a ranger?

😅 Subscribe to Chapter 109. I don't know what to say. It's dark. The protagonist doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately. He only kills when he is against the protagonist. However, the protagonist kills wherever he goes and leaves no one alive. No matter where he goes, he is always against the protagonist. Just started reading. It's decisive and exciting. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel very tired. There is no new idea in the endless matryoshka! There's no story to it, it's just killing, killing, grabbing, grabbing, grabbing

The author is a bit smart, and occasionally comes up with a few nice little details. But you really have to play jokes in moderation, what a drama! When I saw the golden elixir in this book, my heart skipped a beat. No way, it's a bit stiff. You either do mixed martial arts or original fantasy. I really wanted to write something, but in the end it felt like a weird thing with stitches and big scars. When I saw Yang Xiao, I couldn't stand it anymore. I went to the ghost village and slipped away.

The writing is okay, but I personally hate the character of the protagonist in this article. This book is not suitable for me.

The writing is dry and dry, with a chuckle, a chuckle, a chuckle... Every time I see these sideways descriptions of the characters' conversations. I was so embarrassed. But the description of the battle is clean and neat, with punches to the heart. Martial arts opera is much better than literary opera

It's a pity that there is a female protagonist in the later period, who gives people the blood of unicorn and helps them break through to great realms. The author often says that the protagonist's egoism and grievances are clear, and these two are in conflict. There is a chapter called Thousand Miles to Southern Xinjiang. Self-interest will not go there. The protagonist is strong enough to challenge three of his friends. His friends are of little help to him. Where is self-interest reflected? This meeting clearly shows the grievances and grievances, so where does the self-interest go?

Change your profile, man. I've been dismissed three times by this profile.

Ten years ago, the protagonists of novels and TV series were mostly Madonnas. Just like the endings of stories, most of them had perfect and happy endings. Later, people may have gotten tired of it, so stories with less-than-perfect endings became popular. The same is true for today's online articles. You can see from the various lists on Qidian. Com that there are temporary trends. It is true that today's readers have no interest in the Madonna, but most readers may also be disgusted with the dark side. In my opinion, the character of the protagonist in this book is destined to be unique and will attract readers with dark tendencies, but at the same time, it will also abandon the majority of readers I think that most readers, like me, do not love darkness or the Virgin. I will not offend others unless they offend me. If you hinder my interests If it is beneficial or a threat to me, then I will kill your entire clan. Even if you show any hostility to me, it will be a reason for me to kill you. At least these are the reasons that can be explained to the readers. In a word, you are right to be ruthless, but you must have a reason, not the character of killing innocent people indiscriminately. After all, today's readers have grown up in modern society. If you kill innocent people who can obviously be spared and will not pose a threat or conflict to you, you are giving up on the majority of readers and catering to the tastes of a minority of readers. The above personal opinions, there must be different opinions. I have nothing to say about people who think this kind of personality can be popular. At least, I have never seen the starting point

The routine of this book is: practice martial arts → grab medicine → practice martial arts →…! The writing is as cold as an inflatable doll!

I've read more than a dozen chapters, it's a good dark text. The author applies the currently common "additional point upgrade flow fantasy martial arts" template to the main line framework. But from the details of the branch plot, it can be seen that the author tried his best not to follow the routine, and wanted to write a bit of anti-routine feeling to retain old readers who are tired of the routine plot. For example, changing the system to the digestion ability of the protagonist. You thought the protagonist wanted to train his subordinates, but in the end, all his subordinates died. You thought the protagonist was going to change the map, but it turned out that the protagonist took over the mountain and became the king halfway. Even deliberately driving a wave of cars in some plots to relieve the plot fatigue of the dark novel itself.

This book was originally well written, but I don't know why the protagonist and supporting characters like to squint their eyes. When something happens, they squint and become speechless. They squint in every chapter. I wonder if the author also likes to squint his eyes when looking at people in real life and talking.

The trumpet post talks about the protagonist. In fact, I am not opposed to decisive killing, on the contrary, I like it very much. But the protagonist of this book actually went too far. I didn't catch up on the update. I probably only caught up with the overthrow of Dong Qi and stopped reading. The most intolerable part of this book for me is that the protagonist really wanted to rebel when he was still a first-rate (or just innate). At that time, I endured the discomfort and continued to subscribe. To be honest, I don't object to books about rebellion. I just feel that they are not sorry for you, and they are not harmful to nature (the darkness of the Holy Ancestor was still a secret at that time). The three emperors were pretty good at that time, and the four families encouraged and rewarded you. You actually want to kill others and rebel with your whole family? You said that's all you need when your strength is up. You're still at the minions level, and others are treating you fairly well, so you're going to rebel? When others rebelled, either the court was too bad, or they had a grudge against the royal family themselves, or they had no idea at first but then they went along with the flow as they gained strength. Compared with others, you are called a white-eyed wolf instead of decisive in killing.

Damn it, it's been a long time since I finished this book, and it's still on the daily recommendation list

Qidian once had a book called "The World Begins with Iron Shirt". It was also a fictional martial arts fantasy, and the protagonist joined the imperial court and went to Sanjiang and got good grades. But he made a fatal mistake, which led to the loss of subscriptions in the later period, the popularity plummeted, readers scolded him, and ultimately it was unfinished. That is, the element of demons and monsters was easily added without careful consideration. . I failed to write a fictional fantasy martial arts novel. It was like a college entrance examination essay that went off topic. The outline of the entire novel was off track, the theme was confusing, the plot was like a wild horse running wild, and the entire style of calligraphy and painting completely changed. I hope this book learns its lesson and doesn't end up like that book.

Very good, decisive in killing, it is actually food and grass. There's no poisonous plot, it's just a little lacking.

There is a reason for poor grades! We have seen many selfish protagonists, but the protagonist of this book is not selfish, but a scumbag!

Is the author Feng Qiyue's trumpet? , The villain system, the leader of the Demon Cult, and the Great Sage Tongyou. Many things that appear in the article are from these three books.

Created a book club group 680610894. Welcome everyone to come and chat if you are bored.

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It's good to watch. The protagonist is decisive in killing and killing people is commonplace. It's so good to watch. . . Add finesse. .

Those who like dark literature should like this book very much. It kills decisively and kills female supporting characters crazily. It is a masterpiece of martial arts literature popular in the underworld.

There are many books that I lose interest in halfway through. Yours is the only one I'm still reading. More to come.

There are good links to the plot routines in these chapters. I enjoyed reading them. If I post another one, I won't believe that this comment will disappear 😡😡😡

I have been watching pirated versions. I heard the author said that my grades were bad, so I watched the original version. I was afraid that I would lose it, so I kept chasing it. It's so good 👍