Cultivating the Skyward Bamboo

The very first chapter is enough to make you want to quit. A three-year-old doing laundry and cooking, and cooking incredibly delicious food at that! It's hilarious! Stop writing about the human world, write about hell instead! Stop being human!

The poison is taking effect. Everyone, retreat immediately. Shennong is dead. If you need anything, burn paper money for him. Everything was fine until I saw that, in order to ambush the tomb raider, he collaborated with a rogue cultivator he barely knew to kill him. To gain the tomb raider's trust and get him to take him along, he even went to a casino and lost thousands of spirit stones.

Damn, it's another story of a useless protagonist. The synopsis said he had a superior wood elemental root, but it turns out I need five elemental roots to reach the Golden Core stage. So the protagonist is always the most useless, right?

The Qingzhu Sect eating pandas? That disgusts me! I'm leaving now.

What's the protagonist's personality like? Is he cold and aloof? Will he be a busybody? Is he a lone wolf? Does he dislike too many women? Women are best left unmentioned.

I hope you'll be more ruthless and not like Tiger Taoist, always meddling in other people's business.

The male lead is a kept man, and he even forces himself to live off her. A woman pressured him to be a kept man, but he said he had to have backbone and a clear mind. Another woman begged him to be her gigolo, and he accepted without a second thought. It disgusted me. If you don't like stories about men living off women, avoid this genre.

To be honest, according to your worldview, there shouldn't even be such a thing as a rogue cultivator in your novel. Rogue cultivators don't even have a place to exist in your story. You stated at the beginning that one cannot cultivate without being literate; cultivation requires systematic learning first. This step eliminates those who find martial arts manuals and become rogue cultivators.

A Golden Core sect without a protective formation? A bunch of rogue cultivators stormed their sect? Hilarious!

Shennong died from poisoning. The protagonist is truly naive. What's wrong with taking advantage of the situation? You entered a Golden Core family, not to stay there forever. You married Ge Rong and Ge Fu; once you reach the Golden Core stage, who would dare stop you from marrying more women? Changing one's fate through marriage is a natural process; it's truly baffling that he's making enemies for no reason.