Doing Good Makes Me Stronger

Damn it, I was reading a novel and got on the wrong subway!

I think writing the Area 51 chapter was top-notch. As for the ordinary urban novel set on the surface world, don't call me a jerk, this is just my honest opinion...

The creativity is very good, the world view is great, and the setting was quite interesting at first. The protagonist's personality was quite distinct in the early stage, but it was not until he established the organization that he couldn't stand it anymore. He was an egoist who insisted on talking about righteousness, and was inconsistent and had a split personality.

The beginning was excellent; the vast world, the depiction of society, and the characters' actions were all traceable, making it a comfortable read. The "good things" resonated with the reader. However, it gradually fell apart later on, especially with the map changes. Each new map felt like starting from scratch, and the well-established character relationships and social changes were abandoned.

The protagonist's character development is also a bit... It would have been better to portray him as an ordinary person rather than an idealist. There's too much of a superhero feel to it these days. The protagonist isn't fighting evil for the people; it's more like he's fighting evil to complete a mission and get a reward.

I've finished reading it, but unfortunately the later parts weren't as well-written as the earlier ones.

The beginning was really good, like a fairy tale, but the later parts were too messy and I couldn't continue reading; it didn't have the same feel as the beginning.

This is excellent! Great job! With hard work and quality, it'll definitely become popular sooner or later. 👍

I've read up to chapter 400, and I'm losing interest in continuing. They've changed the map, but the author hasn't shown any significant improvement. 😐 My first feeling is that I wanted to write about various social problems, but my writing skills were insufficient, and I didn't delve into them deeply. The character portrayals of the second pair also showed no improvement. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. 😊

The chapters I subscribed to in this book are all so weak; they took six or seven chapters just to talk about refining a weapon...