The Immortal in the Mist

The idea is very good. To be honest, it feels baffling. After all, Wen Xi has helped the protagonist, and the protagonist can be kind to her. What the hell is that Zhu Xuanxuan? The first time we met and went shopping, I gave him an orchid worth 10,000 yuan. Haha, the second time I went directly to the protagonist. The protagonist went directly to his father's student and took the valuable jade, and made something worthless in this world to give to the woman. I feel like shit, you can still see this kind of plot of dog licking. In the past, novels often described Long Aotian's palace stories about dog licking, etc., But now there is still this kind of thing.

I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading Chapter 51, I just made the protagonist look like a mentally retarded person. Is a famous college student really not able to understand any classical Chinese? And that girl gave her two pieces of magic-sealed jade as a gift when we met for the second time. Neither the protagonist's parents treated her like this!

Wait for others to use your creativity and write better than you

I just read the introduction and knew it was nonsense. It's as special as a modern person who travels back in time to ancient times and can control the wind and rain. How can you interpret the world of real science and technology and cultivate immortality? One plus one equals two because the person who invented it said he was two. The person who invented it said he was three. Now one plus one equals three. Do you understand? You can interpret and cultivate immortality, why can't you cultivate in the real world? They are not on the same level.

The creativity of this book is good, but the writing style is still a bit poor. First of all, the biggest creative point of this article is that everyone can awaken to different scriptures or practice other people's scriptures. In the early stage, when there were three people, the writing was quite attractive. There are demons and ghosts in the fog, and the living areas are not large. It is not easy to travel, and the population The setting is a bit loose and too much. Starting from that sword sect, the author's writing is a bit casual. The outline and main story line as well as the battle realm are very vague. The protagonist changes the map and is led by others. It's just a formality. The emergence of the sect is a failure. The biggest attraction of this book is the diversity of scriptures and They misunderstood that this was the most fundamental and attractive essence of the book. Unfortunately, the best and biggest creativity was cut off by the author himself. According to the early setting of the book, the world should be like this. Fog spreads all over the world, there are many monsters and ghosts, communication is inconvenient, and each living area is large or small, but the population will not be large. This results in a person who can only guess at the scriptures. The practitioners are severely alienated and have weird personalities. Their habits are different from ordinary people or they are not human. Their strength is even different. There are sects, but they are definitely small ones. They will not be the mainstream of the world. They are more cultural or military exchange organizations such as loose alliances.

Both worlds are mysterious worlds, and they feel broken.

The author simply relied on his strength to write a platinum-intentioned book and turned it into a defense

Excuse me, if anyone writes a book using the author's creativity, please @ me

Maybe the author wanted to write about an ordinary person cultivating immortality to show how difficult it is to become an immortal. But in a prestigious university, to put it bluntly, if your score is not above the top level, you are not even qualified to register as a sports student. What's more, the children of university professors will not be able to teach such a mentally retarded protagonist regardless of genetic inheritance or education. Nowadays, when primary school students face the protagonist's experience, they will also question, fear, and avoid it. But he will definitely not do all kinds of tricks like a retarded person.

Suddenly I felt that giving Ruyi to two women I didn't know very well was a big mistake. You didn't even give it to your parents, so you gave it to two women you didn't know very well. You also exposed your abilities. Pigs are smarter than you!