Extraordinary Mechanical City

Book review: 3 points 1. The setting of the story background is probably not the point because I forgot the name of the movie. 2. The whole book is not exciting at all, it is too mediocre. 3. The golden finger of the pig's trotter is useless on the pig's trotter 4. I originally saw the steel city setting and thought that there would be my own steel city, but after looking at it for a long time, I didn't find this direction. 5. The plot of the story has been led by the nose, which is disgusting to watch. Moreover, the golden fingers and professions of pig's feet are more logistical and must be made of hard steel. 6. The mind is relatively empty. The author wrote that human beings need to rely on giant cities to compete with wild beasts, which means that individual human beings are not strong enough. Need to borrow tools to fight. But for example, pig's feet are needed to go to Holy Light City to fight. Doesn't such a big train have no defensive weapons? If you put a continuous-shooting giant in a car, do you still need people to fight hand-to-hand? 7. Shouldn't the author focus on developing technology? Otherwise, wouldn't the golden finger be wasted? After the physical restrictions are lifted, several technological products are developed, and bodyguards of any level with more money do not have to fight on their own. Using artificial intelligence to do manual work is awesome.

[Overall score] Subjective score: 4.2 Points [five-point scale] Objective score: 3.6 Points [five-point scale] [Structure score] Plot score: 7 .4~8.5 [10 Points] Character rating: 8.1~8.9 [10 Points] Setting rating: 7.7~8.3 [10 Points] Expected value: 79 [100 points] Production [Introduction] World view: Steampunk - Medieval fantasy {Gods and demons coexist, empires and churches are ever prosperous, knights and magic are inherited, extraordinary immortality, machinery is indestructible} Power system: Mystery - {Potion Sequence}, Machinery - {Steam Science} Protagonist personality: cautious [mild], cheerful [moderate], delicate [mild]. Protagonist plug-in: "Intelligence Brain" - a multi-functional system for assistance. [Suggestions] Improve the setting of the game's other world, strengthen the shaping of the protagonist, pay attention to details, try to make the story description richer and more coherent, add secondary characters so that they can leave color throughout the text, focus on the charming performance of each character and leave a deep impression on the readers, make the characters freer and free from "deliberate arrangements" as much as possible, and keep secondary descriptions such as environments and objects as concise and delicate as possible. [Evaluation] As a game novel, I think it is a bit inappropriate not to have a mission system, but it does not prevent it from having excellent essence and characteristics. The protagonist's golden finger "Wisdom Brain" is not a powerful plug-in, because the auxiliary system indirectly makes the protagonist stronger. Failure to directly make the protagonist stronger will obviously reduce the enjoyment. Will there be "players"? After all, it is also a major feature of the game's alien world. Overall, it's pretty good. I recommend you give it a try. The current overall development is relatively stable, but it still depends on whether the development in the future can break through the limits.

I am an old bookworm who has been reading online novels since Long Kong. In the past few years, there are basically no similar works that can keep me reading nearly 200,000 words. I actually read this one. The plot design has no flaws and is very attractive. Good luck, author 👍

Tomorrow will be 2021, the author should work hard to update 😡

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What about the territory? If the princess becomes the lord of the city, her interests will diverge from the protagonist's, and people on both sides are not convinced. I think it is better for both sides to be independent, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch, (just a suggestion)

First of all, let me write down my attitude. I just finished reading it for free. At least for me, I like this subject very much. I plan to keep it for now. Whether it can be taken out again in the future depends on fate. Then let's talk about the advantages. The world view is very clear. The main line is relatively clear: at least we know the existence of the next big stage. The foreshadowing is pretty good. The professional advancement system is clear As for the shortcomings, I feel that the golden finger is a bit buggy, but everything else is acceptable. The dream multiplier is so high. The protagonist advances so quickly, I'm afraid it will affect the whole game. The above only represents my personal views. If you don't like it, don't spray it. I also wish this book will get better and better results

I followed the book from the last book. One thing I have to say is that I really like the world conceived by the author. Whether it is steampunk or the word "mystery", I find it extremely interesting. The grand conception of the world view and the collision of different levels of the era make me extremely excited and excited. I love this book, I love this story, I love this interesting world. I also hope that the author can continue to write, maintain quality and quantity, don't care about the rumors, and vent the world and thoughts in your heart. Come on, author! I wish you good health, and I wish this book can become a legend! ! ! If I have money, I really want to animate this book like Douluo Dalu, and I really want to see that fantasy and beautiful world with my own eyes.

When I first started reading it, until I saw the wilderness and met the princess, I thought I had finally found a book of fairy herbs. I thought it would be rated 90 or above out of 100. Unexpectedly, after meeting the princess and the vice-president of the chamber of commerce, it became very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist seemed to be a fool who became mentally ill when he saw a woman. What a pity.

I feel that the author is not suitable for writing about power. Politics is a bit dull and childish. I have laid the groundwork for six to seven hundred thousand words and started writing about building a city, but it is boring. The same is true for the last book. Isn't it good to just write an adventure story honestly? Farming has been laid out for too long, but it's still a perfect start. Without the fun of farming from scratch, from small to big, it seems nondescript. It's not as good as the traditional cool writing routine, at least it's straightforward.

From the beginning, I felt that the subject matter was good, and there were points that attracted me, such as machinery, thread capabilities, doctors, etc. Later, the points that I liked did not develop in the direction I expected. Later, I read this book just out of habit, and then I stopped reading for a while to look for other books, and finally came back to read some. The subsequent plot🍌 was boring before, but your peers are really terrible. Another point is that the relationship between men and women you wrote is too explicit, nakedly sexual, without delicate emotions. The three female supporting characters who appear have ambiguous relationships with the protagonist, and even sexual commitments. It would be inappropriate to blame this on the world's gender concepts. The depiction of the villains in the work is not outstanding. There is a lack of charming villains and more of a bunch of idiots, making the protagonist feel like he has everything in the palm of his hand. For example, the genius fighter could have been written more brilliantly, instead of simply dying. 🐶The following is a nitpick: the protagonist always descends to earth to save people when characters and teams such as 👸, 🐺, 👧, 👴, 💁 are in dire straits. He is worthy of being the protagonist. . . I wish the author will write better and better. 🌹

The character is a little out of touch. He had obviously been training as a killer for a year. Whether it's character dialogue or behavior. I feel like a child

In fact, the protagonist's brain is the biggest bug. To learn mechanical knowledge, you first create a robot, or a mechanical arm, and then let it replicate itself. Then the machine provides you with resources for you to practice, experiment, build cities, etc. With a golden finger that is most suitable for developing science, you go the extraordinary route. It is completely the other way around. In the early stage, you can develop machinery or Biology, isn't it good to make cannon fodder tools to support yourself? Also, since the intelligent brain can quickly record, all knowledge can be stored first, and it is not said whether to learn or not. Once copied, it will be yours, and then create some infrastructure, and everything will be up. By then, whether you dominate the world or achieve extraordinary things, it will not be so difficult.

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Let me talk about my personal views on this novel. I think this book has great potential, but the title of the book will actually dissuade some people. I personally came in after seeing the setting points of "doctor" + "can fight and fight". At first, I felt that the book was lacking, and I didn't even read the title of the book carefully. After reading the chapters before it was put on the shelf, I carefully read the title of the book - "Super Mechanical City". The first is that the previous chapters did not allow me to connect the title of the book with the article. Naturally, the protagonist later joined others to build a mechanical city. But just when I wanted to fully comply with the theme, the protagonist became a hands-off shopkeeper again and ran out to practice and seek breakthroughs. The style changed again and became a novel of adventure + monster fighting + adventure + training. Emmm, now I feel that the plot is a little confusing. Then, I think the author's framework setting is still a little rough. For example, the setting of sequence levels is not rigorous and perfect enough. In terms of promotion, I thought it mainly relied on magic potions at first, but then I found that it started to change a little bit to fantasy routines, meridians and body refining methods. , And invincible at the same level. Of course, these things can be included, but the author may be deeply influenced by fantasy and immortals. When I wrote it, I felt that it was not very well contained in this novel, so it seems to have a strong sense of fantasy and immortality. , In the context of steampunk + the maturity of the scientific system and the promotion sequence of potions, this does not have a sense of substitution, and in a book full of Western names, the name of a skill such as "The Void Poisonous Hand" makes people feel like they are in a drama. I personally think that this kind of name can It's up to the protagonist, that is, Ren to get it, but it's best not to give it out directly. It can be said that he got an unknown secret book or skill. The protagonist made a big hit and named him "So-and-so Boxing Technique". I personally think that the sense of abruptness will be reduced, above.

In order to highlight the character traits of the supporting characters, the author has written out the characteristics of the protagonist. This author likes to slow down the breakthrough of the protagonist's realm in the early stage. He uses a lot of space to write about the supporting characters. After looking at the table of contents, when the supporting characters are finished writing, the protagonist suddenly becomes invincible. In the early stage, it is still steam. It has a bit of punk flavor, but in the middle and later stages it becomes fantasy like gods and goblins. It can be said that the protagonist does not have a big sense of existence in this world. It is all a struggle between the villain and the supporting characters. After watching it, I was moved and amazed by the supporting characters, but in the end I forgot about the protagonist!

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I don't understand why I keep writing about the upper level details, they have nothing to do with the protagonist? Anyway, the protagonist can't do much. Now that Mei's staff is annoying when he comes out. Is he the protagonist? He pretended to do everything, even slept with the queen, and was a winner in life compared to the protagonist.

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After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist just drifts with the crowd, which doesn't make it any better. The protagonist is level one, and the people he interacts with are at least level three. The protagonist is always a rookie. This huge psychological gap is too discouraging. Even if I admire the author's setting, I can't stand it. Some people don't understand that it is not good to put the perspective on the protagonist and write adventures honestly to improve his strength. . .

Too slow, too slow, and I am slowly trying to get out of the trap.

It's just that the update is too slow, the world view is very large, and the plot is very good. Looking forward to updates

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Is the protagonist indigenous? It doesn't feel like a time traveler. The book also talks about the world of technology. Doesn't Pigfoot know how scary the technology system is? I'm afraid he's a native.

I came here after reading Chapter 238 "Mechanical Alchemist". What I don't like the most about this book is it forcibly reduces the protagonist's strength. I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has countless golden fingers (the unrivaled golden fingers) who have surpassed the ranks to kill people but can barely beat him. During the fight, I completely forgot about all the golden fingers. I was really convinced.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 196. Basically, you have several Legends on your side, and there are so many soldiers. The firm is yours too. This machine city was also discovered by you. Then your people are driven away. Without saying any nonsense, if there were no Colemans, your city might be gone. These are two different classes. On the one hand there is the communist class and on the other hand there is the aristocratic class. Do you think it's possible to fuse it together? I also can't figure out what that princess can provide? Even if they are married, so what? Can you make other nobles no longer nobles? This is why the main character is the city owner and the trading company is an ally, because outsiders are competing with the princess. Who will the princess help? No need to think about it. Either you level up to Legend as soon as possible, then there won't be any problems. But you happen to be invincible at the same level. You are invincible during the Qi training period, and I will kill you with a slap from my golden elixir. Forcefully suppress the realm.

Look at these monthly tickets, there are more than ten of them, smashed to pieces 😡 and you will break the chapter! !

Writers are humans, not gods, especially online writers, who need plot, quality, and high-yield updates. If you encounter a bottleneck (not clear thinking), it would be nice to have an update. How long does it take to type thousands of words with good quality? I tried writing a report, which was several thousand words long and took three days to write. Support the author to write slowly.

It feels like the author did not fully demonstrate the professional features of this potion upgrade system.

Is there a female protagonist? Or he has slept with a woman, even if he is not the heroine. I hate eunuchs.