Red Sandstorm

The beginning is very readable, there are very few Naruto books with Suna Ninja beginning, and the author has written novel ideas that are very commendable. However, the plot completely collapses from the middle to the last part, and I suggest new readers to abandon the book after seeing Onoki defeating Onoki in the Northern War. Ultimately, the reason is because the author hopes that even though the protagonist appears as a time traveler and his strength reaches the super shadow level (the main plot of the Akatsuki organization has not yet begun), the plot of Naruto still proceeds almost according to the original plot. If it were just like this, the problem wouldn't be big, it would just be like pirates following the ship. The key author completely absorbed the most criticized "blood theory" of the original work. Your efforts and your choices are completely unimportant, as long as you give birth to a good child, others will fall into the lap of the aristocratic family. The protagonist is already beyond the movie level, and has no idea that man can defeat God. He thinks about how to hold Naruto and Sasuke's thigh every day. The final big boss is Kaguya Otsutsuki. The protagonist made a series of preparations. In the end, it was Naruto Sasuke who defeated Kaguya. The preparations of the protagonist seemed to be ineffective. Similar to "Three years after I graduated, I bought an apartment in Shanghai through hard work. I paid 100,000, and my parents paid 10 million." I have already been fed the blood theory of the original work, why should I be fed it again by the fans

This is the Daimaru I imagined!

Aka no Sadust Daimaru, are you feeling immersed?

This author wanted to write a book to make money but was unwilling to cater to the readers. He wanted to write a web article but also wanted to have a deep style. The result was that everything was different and awkward, especially for the new book. Whenever he had the opportunity, he couldn't wait to publish his crappy thoughts. He pretended to be dead when others refuted him. He was a very sick young man, and he could compete with that Hongye Zhixuan.

Damn it! Lao Fan actually opened a new book! Four recommendations, keep it up＾0＾~ I think the titles of the books are "Savior of Sand Hidden" and "Red Sand Sculpture" 🤭

Personally I don't think the recent plots are very watery, and I don't even think the previous plots are very watery First, Masashi Kishimoto is also a writer. Naruto is a serialized, high-pressure commercial work. This model has certain damage to the logic and integrity of the work itself, so I want to write a Naruto fanfic well. We must face the loopholes in the original work itself and repair them without destroying the literary value of fandoms, which are independent but dependent works Secondly, I think the author's recent plot is a deconstruction and reshaping of Naruto. It is about how to find his own way in the corners of the original world with few depictions and few constraints. The characters used by the author are all like this, and his success can be seen in the creation of Kurama and Saya. The same is true for Daimaru's recent interpretation of mythology and so on This kind of reshaping and filling is a very good fan spirit. It is the essence of this book and requires a lot of energy to conceive and repeatedly consider Thirdly, it is very rare and extremely rare to achieve excellence in straightforward descriptions. Foreshadowing and side descriptions are essential to making the plot exciting, or at least logically smooth. Without the seemingly "watery" Q&A with Yakumo during the escape, how could there be as much excitement as today's women's fights? And I think that these things that have been spent on, even if they do not directly promote the plot, still reflect the author's hard work and cannot be counted as superficial. Although today's online articles have their own influencing factors, they are still literary works after all, and many techniques are indispensable To sum up, I personally think that the recent plot/exploration is very good, and I was personally attracted to this book for this reason. If the author wants to make a career in Noda's Infinite Streaming/Main Naruto novels in the future, please stick to this path.

It feels a bit like a eunuch. . . To be honest, Sand Ninja had a really amazing start, but then there was too much to write about in the middle, it was too mixed up and not refined enough, and then the ending ended in a bland and abrupt way. . . What a pity. . My grades were passable at first, but then after the exam and the Iwa Ninja fight, I started to learn all kinds of water routines, water theories, and various interpretations. . The interpretation is fine, and the second design is complete, but when I repeat it again and again, I am really speechless (especially the artificial garden and lunar orogeny, which are just tools. Just explain the setting, explain a few chapters, and repeatedly talk about the theory, so I think it is true). . . I hope the author will be more concise later. If the story is well written and the setting is streamlined, it will be perfect. . .

People often give me opinions, saying that this is not good and that is unreasonable. They give me advice on how to write a Naruto fanfic, how to arrange it to make it more enjoyable, and how to set up golden fingers. To be honest, after writing the first Naruto fanfic, I didn't originally plan to write a Naruto fanfic. All the information I collected before was deleted, and the setting of the first book was almost forgotten. So this book of Red Sand has nothing to do with the first one. Someone asked me why I wrote tens of thousands of words and didn't point out the golden finger. I didn't even have a clear main line and didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do. ​ Style question! I think rebirth with memories is actually the biggest cheat. If the cheating gets bigger, adding a redundant system, a magical skill or something, it simply destroys the balance. As for the main plot, I actually write to make myself happy a lot of the time. I just let it go with whatever feels good, the rhythm, etc. They are just genin. The safety of the ninja world is in danger. It is the protagonist's turn to speculate? At least there's no need to think about it now, right? It is so tiring to survive after traveling through a time travel, and the protagonist is not like the protagonist in the previous book who takes the risk of death at any time. He is always ready to fight and must use any means to improve his strength. The protagonist of this book travels through more than ten years, unlike the previous book which only had a timeline of seven or eight years at the end. The protagonist is very stable. As long as he doesn't seek death, he will basically not die. So why bother messing around? Say something to make everyone unhappy. As for the protagonist of this book, I would rather let him steal beautiful women and start a harem than write boring dramas like beating up the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki and saving the ninja world. Upgrading to fight monsters and kill rebellious ninjas, grab the Sharingan and catch tailed beasts, punch Obito and kick Madara, unify the ninja world, etc. It's boring, okay? Trying with your female teammates, wouldn't it be nice to look like someone with blonde hair and long legs? Let's wait until the beauty is embraced and then think about the next step.

Lao Fan, please stop putting it on the shelves. You have to work hard to put it on the shelves and add more updates. If you add more updates, you will stay up late, and if you stay up late, you will become bald... Isn't it good to have sex for free?

The number one girl group in the ninja world!