A Certain Scientific Fluid Controller

After reading so many Magic Forbidden fanfics, this book is the only one where I don't have to worry about becoming a eunuch. It is also a Magic Forbidden fanfic that I can patiently read and follow. Although I was a little uncomfortable with it at first because of the author's original characters, it gradually became more natural. Come on, author, I will support you with the original version. However, the update speed of one update per day makes me less surprised about chasing books. If possible, I hope that the author will occasionally update a chapter. Of course, it does not need to be too many, because the author's one update is already worth two chapters. Finally, I wish the author's grades will get better and better, the quality of the book will get higher and higher, the author will write well, the readers will read it well, and finish the book perfectly. Good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง.

The original plot is simply invincible. This is the first time I have seen an original plot from a Demon Forbidden fan with original characters reaching this level. But it was obviously good in the early and middle stages, but it took off in the later stages. After reading the closing remarks, yes, I can understand that the original work has lost its creative enthusiasm. Although I can understand this starting point, I still feel it is a pity, it is really a pity. If the ending is carefully and reasonably arranged, it feels like the reading experience can be doubled, at least for me, haha. By the way, I don't know if the author will read it. I also support the harem. After all, it is difficult to give up any of your favorite characters. It is better to say that the harem can achieve a happy ending in a certain sense. But. . The ending of the harem should require emotional foreshadowing. As a member of the harem, if you are included directly without much emotional foreshadowing, you will feel, emmm, unstable, empty, false, and abrupt (my language skills limit my description). If the harem is rationalized, it will be a super, super perfect reunion, but this is difficult to achieve. If you can't rationalize everything, you can subtract one or two characters who don't have enough emotional foreshadowing. Ah, if true love is limited to the original work and cannot be added to the plot, there is nothing to say, just add _(:3∠)_. Finally, big cheers to the author! I wish you good results with your next book!

So the protagonist and his teammates are considered mercenaries and their brains are broken?

There are too many original plots and too few Touma scenes. It feels quite routine, lacking a bit of the excitement of Academy City. The storyline involving Sister Misaka has been particularly changed. Shokuhou Misaki actually has a clone. . . At least the anime doesn't have this setting. I feel like this book is different from other Magic Forbidden fandoms.

Read Chapter 2. Nonsense. Attempted rape. Scared the trouble. The author has watched too many cartoons. How could it be so easy? It would be weird if it didn't last for a few years.

2 Monthly votes have been cast, and it feels like it's getting more and more exciting! ! Come on, author

The writing in the later stage is indeed too strange. The first and middle are good-looking, and I feel that later on, setting the protagonist as a magic book that seizes the body is a bit strange and unnecessary.

I haven't read it yet, but I just want to comment on whether science is unscientific in the work No matter how powerful you are or how you fantasize about science, you still have to abide by the most basic scientific theorems What temperature cannot reach minus 271.15 What is the role of force? It's mutual or something like that I'm not a scientist and I can't say much. For example, I read those martial arts novels about Qinggong, where a person can fly ten meters high with a tap of his feet I won't say much, but I didn't read the content, but when I read this kind of fantasy science, super power development and the like, it's all about looking for science within science.

Why do you, the author, write so much and say that the level is still only level one?

Thank you to the author for this book. I like it very much and look forward to your story in the corner~