A Certain Scientific Fluid Controller

Having read so many A Certain Magical Index fanfics, this is the only one I don't have to worry about being abandoned. It's also the only A Certain Magical Index fanfic that I can patiently read and follow. Although I was a little uncomfortable at first because of the author's original characters, it gradually became much more natural. Keep up the good work, author!

The original plot is simply unbeatable; it's the first time I've seen an original Toaru Majutsu no Index fanfiction with original plot and characters reaching this level. However, while the first half was quite good, it took off in the later stages. After reading the author's closing remarks, well, I can understand; the original creator lost their creative passion.

So the protagonist and his teammates are considered mercenaries and their brains are broken?

There's too much original content and too little of Touma's screen time. It feels too slice-of-life and lacks the excitement of Academy City. The Misaka Sisters arc is drastically altered. Misaki Shokuhou even has clones... At least the anime doesn't have that kind of setup. This book feels different from other A Certain Magical Index fanfics.

The author of this story, who watched too many cartoons, thinks that an attempted rape attempt that scared the victim away is a joke. He should be locked up for years!

I've already cast my two monthly tickets, and it's getting more and more exciting!! Keep it up, author!

The later parts were indeed written very strangely, while the beginning and middle were good. Also, the later part, which made the protagonist a possessed magic book, felt odd and unnecessary.

I haven't read it yet; I just wanted to comment on the scientific accuracy of the content. No matter how many superpowers you have or how much you fantasize about science, you still have to abide by the most basic scientific principles. What temperature cannot reach -271.15 Degrees Celsius? What forces act in pairs or similar ways? I'm not a scientist, so I can't say much.

Why, author, after writing so much, is the level still only level one?

Thank you, author! I really enjoyed this book. I look forward to hearing your stories from hidden corners!